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blackreaper551

PostPosted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 12:18 pm


Username: blackreaper551
Character Name: Shardan
Original Village/Organization: wanderer
Current Village/Organization: Suna
General Rank: Genin
Specific Rank(s):
Clan: none(street rat)
Age: 14
Gender: male

Appearance: Shardan is a tanned Caucasian male standing roughly 5'7" and weighing 135 lbs. Has straight, shoulder length dark brown hair usually pulled back into a low ponytail with the bangs parted to the sides out of his face. Shardan has forest green eyes. Wears standard black ninja sandals, black calf length cargo-shorts with built in knee-pads, simple black sleeveless shirts with ninja mesh underneath, ANBU style forearm and shin guards, and black fingerless gloves with metal plates on the back of the hand with the symbol of suna engraved on them. haseo can generally be seen with a black and red fox shaped mask tied to the top of his head.

Shardan has two tattoos, one on his right shoulder, another on his left wrist. these are slightly modified storage seals for his bow on his shoulder and arrows on his wrist. The modification simply removes the sound of the objects materializing.

Primary Weapon: simple recurve bow and arrows.

two custom-made tantos for close quarters combat. tantos are black chakra conductive blades, serrated on spine, missing the guard with black and dark red leather wrapped handles. loops are attached to the end to tie ninja wire to.

Tools on Hand: two 10 foot spools of ninja wire, 10 explosive tags, 5 smoke bombs,and 15 each standard kunai and shuriken. bow and arrows in respective seals

Kekkei Genkai: (Optional. You can only have a character of a Kekkei Genkai that has been pre-approved.)

Jutsu List:

Quote:
Name of Jutsu:Suna Bunshin no Jutsu (Sand Clone Technique)
Chakra Usage: Spiritual Energy molds a pile of sand into a clone of the user.
Common Use: Can serve as additional manpower, or a human shield. Since Sand is a solid object, a sand clone made by a competently educated shinobi would result in a clone with the sturdiness of a wall of sand.
Additional Use(s): Can be used to confuse the opponent
Rank: D-rank


Quote:
Name of Jutsu: Taikyaku Shimasu Buki no Jutsu (Weapon Retreat Technique)
Chakra Usage: Sends spiritual energy through the chain/rope that connects the user’s hand to the weapon targeted.
Common Use: Halt a thrown weapon connected to the user’s hand by a chain or rope, returning the weapon to the user.
Additional Use(s):
Rank: D-Rank


Quote:
Name of Jutsu: fuuin-jutsu: storage (seal jutsu: storage)
Type: fuuin-jutsu
Chakra Usage: creates a seal that can one can store and retrieve items from when chakra is channeled through it. can be modified to only accept specific chakra signatures.
Action Performed: store and retrieve items when bag space is at a premium. commonly found on scrolls, and sometimes tattoos, for holding extra weapons such as kunai and shuriken, or other gear.
Rank: D-Rank (c-rank?)
PostPosted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 1:41 pm


There's a solid foundation here, but I'd like to recommend keeping away from having a multi-elemental Genin. I'd suggest turning the chakra-to-arrow combination into Jutsu themselves, such as a Jutsu that doubles the length of the shot fired, or causes the arrowhead to spiral as it makes contact.

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blackreaper551

PostPosted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 11:31 pm


fair enough. will edit. i want this character to be mainly a weapon specialist, with a focus on assassinations and reconnaissance, i put the different chakra types for the arrows as i figured it was the most expedient, and silent, way i could think of to give the arrows themselves special properties that allowed shardan to use them in various situations.

ideas on how to convert the elemental chakra into different justus for the same effects would be appreciated smile

((addendum))

will remove the multi element part. but i'll be staying on that path, as i want him to build this particular ability as he gains ranks and skill through roleplay. he won't be able to channel elemental chakra until at least chuunin. so i'll probably just keep them as regular arrows until then. but that's the direction i want to take him. mostly it was intended as a description of the pathway i wanted him to take with his shinobi skills in the future.
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