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 Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 10:33 am
Like a lotus bloom
That dances on the water
Pristeen and perfect.
The loving brother
See how he protects, defends
A true warrior.
The mighty dragon
So noble with great beauty
Such grace and power.
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 11:00 am
I like how these three haiku's fit together, its a very smooth read.
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 11:04 am
LunarHybrid I like how these three haiku's fit together, its a very smooth read. Thank you! I've just started getting into the swing of making them flow. My early ones felt choppy and stitched together ._.
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 12:02 pm
I like these Haiku's and they way they are pieced together. They somehow tell a story.
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:45 pm
Anime_Ghost Girl I like these Haiku's and they way they are pieced together. They somehow tell a story. That was my intention. I was hoping it might evoke a scene in the mind, atleast.
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:49 pm
Stormy clouds approach,
See bright lights, devastation.
A calm peace settles.
Rolling angry waves,
A tempest of epic tale.
Sea dwellers rejoice.
Far out beyond reach,
A pink butterfly sunset.
Sinking golden rays.
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:56 pm
Angel wings behold,
A single drifting feather.
A pearl among sand.
Koi fish scales glitter,
Flicker, gold and brightly flame.
A mixed harmony.
See now, the great crane.
Striding through midnight water.
Head held proudly high.
Trees bend in the breeze,
Leaves scuttle and glide away.
Falling seeds of life.
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 6:08 am
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 9:42 am
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Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2017 7:02 am
LeoTigress The loving brother
See how he protects, defends
A true warrior.
For some reason, this haiku really stuck. It makes me think of all the characters of fiction I admire. They are true warriors fighting insurmountable odds and circumstance all in the name of peace and love. Thank you for that.
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