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 Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2011 11:08 am
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 8:07 am
ok now im ready... -.- oy
drop the mic and stop the suicide mission
spitting to the grim reaper that orders your crucifixion
taste the shame with a hint of a pillow case
kicking and screaming while you die in your pace
slip on my gloves and you show up as a sandbag
taking hits like a b***h who fear the back hand
prepared to battle me with your highest artillery
when i cast over you with a pen and a couple of weed
didn't take this seriosly so my mind flees
while a i spit recklessly on your well ******** with TNT, i blow up easily, like destiny
even with a dynamite in your a**, you couldn't blow up like me
cats out there may spit, but my mic is used to the drool
you may drool like a Bulldog but you'll look like a fool
this wasn't cruel, i award you to be my training gear
so don't fear, you can come watch me at the sidelines very soon
(lol writing disses when you don't even know how to diss is hard)
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 9:25 am
Keep in mind his name.
GhostlyMark, his writings never had a spark.
Lyrics with poor flow, it's an obvious ******** the facts, Im using imagination.
Im an artist, killing you with creative artistic illustrations.
His rhymes are basic, a carbon copy filled with depressed hatred.
Such a disgrace, getting "Mark"ed by the Gods.
Half of his s**t was written by a ghost writer when he tried to rap hard.
And ******** the Grim Reaper, Charon is one to bring you across.
You couldn't even rap properly so you alternated bars.
So stop because you ain't sick, if you were, Im the cure, but still lethal with this.
I leave you with a toxic disease, overdosed on penicillin.
Keep trying, but your rhymes sound a bit weak, you need lessons.
His rhymes sound a bit "Ghostly", he's distant from focus.
Just proof that he ain't worth it, his words are bogus.
Order the crucifixion on me b***h, Im a die hard martyr.
At least I'll die for what I believe in, that's the rap game, I just leaped farther.
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 10:06 am
Bulldog cops my vote. The punches I felt were harder and had more feel to it. GhostlyMark had nearly a whole verse of filler.
Vote: Bulldog.
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Namiko Kaito Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 10:08 am
LonelyAznBulldog_TAB Keep in mind his name.
GhostlyMark, his writings never had a spark.
Lyrics with poor flow, it's an obvious ******** the facts, Im using imagination.
Im an artist, killing you with creative artistic illustrations.
His rhymes are basic, a carbon copy filled with depressed hatred.
Such a disgrace, getting "Mark"ed by the Gods.
Half of his s**t was written by a ghost writer when he tried to rap hard.
And ******** the Grim Reaper, Charon is one to bring you across.
You couldn't even rap properly so you alternated bars.
So stop because you ain't sick, if you were, Im the cure, but still lethal with this.
I leave you with a toxic disease, overdosed on penicillin.
Keep trying, but your rhymes sound a bit weak, you need lessons.
His rhymes sound a bit "Ghostly", he's distant from focus.
Just proof that he ain't worth it, his words are bogus.
Order the crucifixion on me b***h, Im a die hard martyr.
At least I'll die for what I believe in, that's the rap game, I just leaped farther. nice diss man
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 10:14 am
GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB Keep in mind his name.
GhostlyMark, his writings never had a spark.
Lyrics with poor flow, it's an obvious flaw.
******** the facts, Im using imagination.
Im an artist, killing you with creative artistic illustrations.
His rhymes are basic, a carbon copy filled with depressed hatred.
Such a disgrace, getting "Mark"ed by the Gods.
Half of his s**t was written by a ghost writer when he tried to rap hard.
And ******** the Grim Reaper, Charon is one to bring you across.
You couldn't even rap properly so you alternated bars.
So stop because you ain't sick, if you were, Im the cure, but still lethal with this.
I leave you with a toxic disease, overdosed on penicillin.
Keep trying, but your rhymes sound a bit weak, you need lessons.
His rhymes sound a bit "Ghostly", he's distant from focus.
Just proof that he ain't worth it, his words are bogus.
Order the crucifixion on me b***h, Im a die hard martyr.
At least I'll die for what I believe in, that's the rap game, I just leaped farther. nice diss man Haha lol thanks. You did good too, keep spittin.
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 10:15 am
LonelyAznBulldog_TAB GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB Keep in mind his name.
GhostlyMark, his writings never had a spark.
Lyrics with poor flow, it's an obvious flaw.
******** the facts, Im using imagination.
Im an artist, killing you with creative artistic illustrations.
His rhymes are basic, a carbon copy filled with depressed hatred.
Such a disgrace, getting "Mark"ed by the Gods.
Half of his s**t was written by a ghost writer when he tried to rap hard.
And ******** the Grim Reaper, Charon is one to bring you across.
You couldn't even rap properly so you alternated bars.
So stop because you ain't sick, if you were, Im the cure, but still lethal with this.
I leave you with a toxic disease, overdosed on penicillin.
Keep trying, but your rhymes sound a bit weak, you need lessons.
His rhymes sound a bit "Ghostly", he's distant from focus.
Just proof that he ain't worth it, his words are bogus.
Order the crucifixion on me b***h, Im a die hard martyr.
At least I'll die for what I believe in, that's the rap game, I just leaped farther. nice diss man Haha lol thanks. You did good too, keep spittin. hell no i didnt do good lol i forgot about this contest so i was rushing i wrote this in a composition book when i woke up and i just typed it later on
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 10:19 am
GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB Keep in mind his name.
GhostlyMark, his writings never had a spark.
Lyrics with poor flow, it's an obvious flaw.
******** the facts, Im using imagination.
Im an artist, killing you with creative artistic illustrations.
His rhymes are basic, a carbon copy filled with depressed hatred.
Such a disgrace, getting "Mark"ed by the Gods.
Half of his s**t was written by a ghost writer when he tried to rap hard.
And ******** the Grim Reaper, Charon is one to bring you across.
You couldn't even rap properly so you alternated bars.
So stop because you ain't sick, if you were, Im the cure, but still lethal with this.
I leave you with a toxic disease, overdosed on penicillin.
Keep trying, but your rhymes sound a bit weak, you need lessons.
His rhymes sound a bit "Ghostly", he's distant from focus.
Just proof that he ain't worth it, his words are bogus.
Order the crucifixion on me b***h, Im a die hard martyr.
At least I'll die for what I believe in, that's the rap game, I just leaped farther. nice diss man Haha lol thanks. You did good too, keep spittin. hell no i didnt do good lol i forgot about this contest so i was rushing i wrote this in a composition book when i woke up and i just typed it later on Well for something you wrote randomly and quickly, definitely better then my first battle verse. I think you remember the horror of that.
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 10:20 am
LonelyAznBulldog_TAB GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB Keep in mind his name.
GhostlyMark, his writings never had a spark.
Lyrics with poor flow, it's an obvious flaw.
******** the facts, Im using imagination.
Im an artist, killing you with creative artistic illustrations.
His rhymes are basic, a carbon copy filled with depressed hatred.
Such a disgrace, getting "Mark"ed by the Gods.
Half of his s**t was written by a ghost writer when he tried to rap hard.
And ******** the Grim Reaper, Charon is one to bring you across.
You couldn't even rap properly so you alternated bars.
So stop because you ain't sick, if you were, Im the cure, but still lethal with this.
I leave you with a toxic disease, overdosed on penicillin.
Keep trying, but your rhymes sound a bit weak, you need lessons.
His rhymes sound a bit "Ghostly", he's distant from focus.
Just proof that he ain't worth it, his words are bogus.
Order the crucifixion on me b***h, Im a die hard martyr.
At least I'll die for what I believe in, that's the rap game, I just leaped farther. nice diss man Haha lol thanks. You did good too, keep spittin. hell no i didnt do good lol i forgot about this contest so i was rushing i wrote this in a composition book when i woke up and i just typed it later on Well for something you wrote randomly and quickly, definitely better then my first battle verse. I think you remember the horror of that. lol it wasnt that bad...you just had a strong competitor
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 10:24 am
GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB Keep in mind his name.
GhostlyMark, his writings never had a spark.
Lyrics with poor flow, it's an obvious flaw.
******** the facts, Im using imagination.
Im an artist, killing you with creative artistic illustrations.
His rhymes are basic, a carbon copy filled with depressed hatred.
Such a disgrace, getting "Mark"ed by the Gods.
Half of his s**t was written by a ghost writer when he tried to rap hard.
And ******** the Grim Reaper, Charon is one to bring you across.
You couldn't even rap properly so you alternated bars.
So stop because you ain't sick, if you were, Im the cure, but still lethal with this.
I leave you with a toxic disease, overdosed on penicillin.
Keep trying, but your rhymes sound a bit weak, you need lessons.
His rhymes sound a bit "Ghostly", he's distant from focus.
Just proof that he ain't worth it, his words are bogus.
Order the crucifixion on me b***h, Im a die hard martyr.
At least I'll die for what I believe in, that's the rap game, I just leaped farther. nice diss man Haha lol thanks. You did good too, keep spittin. hell no i didnt do good lol i forgot about this contest so i was rushing i wrote this in a composition book when i woke up and i just typed it later on Well for something you wrote randomly and quickly, definitely better then my first battle verse. I think you remember the horror of that. lol it wasnt that bad...you just had a strong competitor True, but I wrote that when I was experimenting with flows. After that verse I knew I shouldn't go for that type of flow again. I learned and now I feel like I got better.
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 10:28 am
LonelyAznBulldog_TAB GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB Haha lol thanks. You did good too, keep spittin. hell no i didnt do good lol i forgot about this contest so i was rushing i wrote this in a composition book when i woke up and i just typed it later on Well for something you wrote randomly and quickly, definitely better then my first battle verse. I think you remember the horror of that. lol it wasnt that bad...you just had a strong competitor True, but I wrote that when I was experimenting with flows. After that verse I knew I shouldn't go for that type of flow again. I learned and now I feel like I got better. you did do better i got worse ^.^ well i should take this as a learning experience
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 10:29 am
GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB Haha lol thanks. You did good too, keep spittin. hell no i didnt do good lol i forgot about this contest so i was rushing i wrote this in a composition book when i woke up and i just typed it later on Well for something you wrote randomly and quickly, definitely better then my first battle verse. I think you remember the horror of that. lol it wasnt that bad...you just had a strong competitor True, but I wrote that when I was experimenting with flows. After that verse I knew I shouldn't go for that type of flow again. I learned and now I feel like I got better. you did do better i got worse ^.^ well i should take this as a learning experience That you should.
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 12:10 pm
GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB GhostlyMark LonelyAznBulldog_TAB Haha lol thanks. You did good too, keep spittin. hell no i didnt do good lol i forgot about this contest so i was rushing i wrote this in a composition book when i woke up and i just typed it later on Well for something you wrote randomly and quickly, definitely better then my first battle verse. I think you remember the horror of that. lol it wasnt that bad...you just had a strong competitor True, but I wrote that when I was experimenting with flows. After that verse I knew I shouldn't go for that type of flow again. I learned and now I feel like I got better. you did do better i got worse ^.^ well i should take this as a learning experience Thats all you can do homie...I agree with Bulldog you do gott a lil somethin, somethin there son...touch that up and come back next time you could be a real competitor! Unfortunatly though homie...Bulldog copps my vote on this one... Keep spittin' though son! cool
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:29 pm
Vote: Bulldog. but voting aint ova, now its 3-0 ghostmarkly gets ur votes
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:41 pm
Sir_rocsalot Vote: Bulldog. but voting aint ova, now its 3-0 ghostmarkly gets ur votes What?
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