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BroHanSein

PostPosted: Mon Jun 06, 2011 2:58 pm


Explanation: Okay, I explained this idea already once in a thread and it got me interested in drawing the characters for my idea.

Brief story: This takes place in a world where Clowns are not human (but the humans don't know that). There are also a lot of other species that hide themselves among the humans that the humans are unaware of.

For the characters I'd like you to vote and see who you like the best or who's the most interesting. JSYK, I'm not taking suggestions, I want it all to remain my idea and creation. Art critiques are welcome though. You guys would really be helping me out so I hope many people will post. sweatdrop

NOTE: They are all sketches...so they're bad. Sorry if you can't see them very well. And I haven't decided on a costume yet so....they're all in collard shirts. lol

Characters:

Name: Pierrot Lyon (Nickname: Lyon)
Status: Protagonist
Species: Clown
Age: 14
Eye Color: Dark Blue
Hair Color: White
Personality: Dark, sullen, depressing, negative, troubled
Background: Born from a regular, cheerful Clown family and the Clown Society, Lyon is a boy who wishes he wasn't born a Clown. As long as he had remembered Lyon was always negative, his depressing manner and tone can even force his classmates and parents into a suicide-like state. He has no real friends in school (Clown school), and he wants to go to a regular school and live with humans. ....besides...Clowns are so... lame. =__=;;;
Picture:User Image

Name: Hiroki Fujimoto (Might change into english name)
Status: The Best Friend
Species: Human
Age: 15
Eye Color: Dark Brown
Hair Color: Black
Personality: Cheerful, positive, carefree and kind
Background: His purpose in the story is to be Lyon's opposite. He is the boy that Lyon was supposed to be. But Hiroki also has a bright future as even though he was born human, he is the type of person that can just do anything, (cooking, skiing, sports, card games, so much more and better).
Picture: User Image

Name: Mitsu Takeda (Might change to English, blah)
Status: The Other Best Friend (lol) Or jokingly the Heroine sweatdrop
Species: Human
Age: 14
Eye Color: Dark Brown (Might change)
Hair Color: Light Brown
Personality: Smart, outgoing, sometimes rude, speaks her mind
Background: Mitsu is the girl with Coulrophobia, but for some reason she is unafraid of Lyon (I wonder why. xD). Her purpose is to remind the audience of the other type of Clowns, and to be the 'straight man' in the jokes. Even though she is human she also develops an amazing ability that is capable to even humans. Note: Whenever she sees a Clown...well, hell breaks loose. It takes a lot to calm her down...and put down the self defense chainsaw.
Picture: User Image (This picture is drawn badly, I can't draw women, damn it Dx)

Name: Marceau Yarnell (Nickname: Marc)
Status: Supposedly that 'Emo' guy, rival of Lyon
Species: Mime
Age: 16
Eye Color: Light Blue
Hair Color: Black
Personality: Envious, Outspoken, slightly annoying, cool, strong and brave, has a big ego
Background: Marc comes from a Mime family, but he had a very awful past which led to his parents disowning him. The flaw that Marc has is talking.... all the time. Oxymoron, right? He is very jealous that Lyon is the protagonist of the story and he wants to kill Lyon and take his place. The jokes in the manga between the two would usually be Marc planning and attempting assassinations on Lyon. Marc hates Lyon because Lyon is more 'emo' than him even though Marc has the more depressing past. And even though Marc is far stronger than Lyon is, for some reason Marc could never kill Lyon.
Picture: User Image

Name: Lance Hermey
Status: The doctor/healer guy
Species: Elf ...Santa's ex-elf that is.
Age: 35
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Blond
Personality: Harsh, serious, demanding, impatient, hates children
Background: (The side character) Lance escaped from Santa's factory years ago when he was sill a lad. He never wanted to be an elf making toys for snotty brats every year, he wanted to be.... a doctor. (Sounds familiar?) Lance is based off of the character Hermie (Hermey?) from the Christmas shows, the elf that wanted to be a dentist. The purpose of Lance is to introduce another species and to be the guy that heals everyone. Unfortunately for Lance, Santa and his elves are still out to get him and bring him back, so he must always be in hiding. He usually hides out in the Bahamas.
Picture: User Image

Name: Inue Telrunya
Status: The chick with big boobs, The Tooth Fairy lol
Species: Fairy
Age: 32
Eye Color: Dark Blue
Hair Color: Teal
Personality: Extravagant, boisterous, cheerful, loves children, somewhat sadistic, hates teenagers
Background: Inue is only a side character, her purpose is to help the group lead to their goals and introduce another species and all that good manga plot crap. She is obviously that one character with big boobs (because we always need one). She is the tooth fairy 'nuff said. Also, Lance Hermey has a big crush on her. lol
Picture: User Image (Messed up on the ears and the head... and the boobs lol (need to be biggah! It's okay, I'm a chick so I can demand big boobs lol). And yeah I still suck at drawing women)

Name: Edgar Constantly
Status: Unknown, the teacher
Species: Clown
Age: Unknown (It's not that I can't decide...it's just that it's unknown. =w= )
Eye Color: Black
Hair Color: Black
Personality: Mysterious, dark, sick sense of humor, eerily cheerful
Background: Lyon and Edgar are alike in many ways.... but Edgar is like the dark side, and he has an interest in Lyon and what the boy could possibly be capable of. The purpose of Edgar is to hold the past. He is the man that knows all and he wants to train Lyon and teach him of their real Clown History, not the PG-crap they learn in Clown School. The group is wary and distrustful of Edgar because they are unsure of whether Edgar is a friend...or a foe...and his weird humor scares them. He especially terrifies Mitsu, since he is the perfect example of the other type of Clowns. Note: He had his awesome hat specially made by the Mad Hatter.
Picture: User Image (He doesn't usually always look this creepy.)

NOTE: The way I draw Fairies and Elves is that they have sharp features and sharp eyes, JSYK. >3< Help on drawing WOMEN is appreciated. xD And men too, whatever you see and needs to be pointed out. (But Lyon is supposed to look soft and weak like that.)

You can't tell the difference between Clowns and Mimes, but I'll be sure to make them as different as possible. I already have an idea on Marc's costume (white gloves, striped french shirt, black pants, coat) lol.

And that's the characters I drew so far. I have a great idea for the antagonist too. So yeah, please give me feedback. Are these good characters? I know Lance is basically the same guy as Hermie but hopefully I won't get sued.


P.S: Would this remain here or would it go into the Art Posts subforum? = 3 =;
PostPosted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 9:06 pm


blaugh Wow cool story!

Hmm... my favorite of theses characters would probably be Hiroki Fujimoto or Lyon himself, this is of course personality wise.
XD But I like the creepiness of Edgar Constantly... He seems mysterious and cool in his picture.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 8:02 pm


Edgar seems pretty cool :3
Seems like a total badass to me xD
PostPosted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 12:59 pm


it looks great so far, id like to read it sometime! if you need hep on drawing anything manga, go to mangauniversity.com it´ll tellu evrything youll need to know good luck! ;D

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 8:05 pm


sound really interesting!
I like Edgar
PostPosted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 10:16 am


it is very good and nothing to be changed,, i like it 4laugh 4laugh 4laugh

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 10:14 am


Interesting OC s smile

It was kind of hard for me to see all the details but what helps make the drawings darker is to edit them in photoshop,GIMP(or whatever photo-editing software you have)

Guys usually have stronger jawlines and more prominent features. They also tend to have bigger shoulders and torsos than women. For women its usually the opposite with softer, rounder faces, smaller noses bigger eyes and smaller shoulders. Of course you dont have to strictly follow these guidelines(and its just typical style for anime/manga) but tweak it to your own liking as long as people can tell which gender is which. And if you want to keep people guessing on some OCs go for it wink
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