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 Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 10:52 am
^^ I decided to post a piece of my work up for some criticism. c: Lord knows I need it. ^^; Anyway, if there's anything you see that could use a touch up, don't hesitate to tell me. I love honesty. : D
And I'll go ahead and say it: I know the head's big. ^///^ I went a little crazy on that part.
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 5:33 pm
How cute!!! xD The first thought that came into my head was Powerpuff girls, because they have round heads and HUGE eyes. The way you drew the eyes are amazingly well done. lol Okay, critique time, muwahahahaha!
1) The shoulders seem a bit sharp, but that could just be your own drawing style. It's not a big problem.
2) The hand with the peace sign... I don't know what it is about that hand but it looks kind of awkward. I practiced it in the mirror by how your character was doing it, and I mean it's right and everything but I can't figure out why it looks a bit weird. Maybe it's the angle. My hand started to cramp. lol
Hmmm. That's it. Yeah, besides the point you noticed yourself about the head, those are the only two problems I have. lol But girl, those eyes are AH-MAZING! xD
WAIT! OH! I think I know why the hands are off. Okay, okay. So you're character is facing to the right (her right). If she were facing forward then her hands would've looked more natural. If you had hands turning in the same direction as her then that would probably look natural as well. ....maybe. =__=; No, I'm sure it will. (Practiced in the mirror)
Anyway, amazing job. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 6:31 pm
xClubbed2Deathx How cute!!! xD The first thought that came into my head was Powerpuff girls, because they have round heads and HUGE eyes. The way you drew the eyes are amazingly well done. lol Okay, critique time, muwahahahaha! 1) The shoulders seem a bit sharp, but that could just be your own drawing style. It's not a big problem. 2) The hand with the peace sign... I don't know what it is about that hand but it looks kind of awkward. I practiced it in the mirror by how your character was doing it, and I mean it's right and everything but I can't figure out why it looks a bit weird. Maybe it's the angle. My hand started to cramp. lol Hmmm. That's it. Yeah, besides the point you noticed yourself about the head, those are the only two problems I have. lol But girl, those eyes are AH-MAZING! xD WAIT! OH! I think I know why the hands are off. Okay, okay. So you're character is facing to the right (her right). If she were facing forward then her hands would've looked more natural. If you had hands turning in the same direction as her then that would probably look natural as well. ....maybe. =__=; No, I'm sure it will. (Practiced in the mirror) Anyway, amazing job. 3nodding ^^ Thanks so much for all the tips and compliments. It means a lot.
Everytime I draw shoulders they usually end up being alittle sharp. I guess that's just how I roll. x3
The hand, well, I think another thing that seemed a little awkward was how long the two peace fingers were compared to the other, but you are right about the position of the hand. I noticed that aswell. -.- I'll have to practice more with hand positions.
*huggles* I'm sorry I got your hand cramping over it though. ^^;
But thank you so much for the criticism. I'll remember it next time I try drawing something like this. ^^
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 10:58 am
ill guess ill critique
the eyes do look great biggrin
the hair generally looks good but try faster strokes
the neck is a bit thick
the ear is a little high and doesn't seem like it was drawn from the right perspective
the hand also doesn't seem to be from the right perspective. it seems like it would be facing the same way she is looking. also the fingers look too big (or the hand is too small)
anyway good job ^^
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 5:56 pm
its not bad, but there r some things to improve:
1- the head size is ok actually, but even though the eye style is great, theyre too freakin big!
2- the nose and mouth look awkward. the nose doesnt really match the eyes, go for more of a stub nose. The mouth is too small and the positioning seems a bit off.
3- the only other thing wrong that i can ntice right now is how the body is shaped. you got all the textures and places right, but evrything just seems a bit sharp. just remember that youre drawing smooth and round skin. just round it out.you can also tell how you should by noticing how the muscles r supposed to be.
good luck! ;D
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