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Ok, so, I lied. I'm not giving up writing. Life was more stressful without it. crying So here's my latest attempt. rofl It was supposed to be happy... but I don't think it turned out as I planned... sweatdrop Read, Enjoy, Comment. Pretty please? 3nodding

Sunshine and Rainbows

You are the sunshine, and I am a rainbow.
You are a thing that blinds me.
I am a frown disguised with colour.

You are the sunshine, and I am a rainbow.
You are a thing that is constant.
I only exist when it rains.

You are the sunshine, and I am a rainbow.
You are a thing that keeps me alive.
I am a thing that is useless.

You are my sunshine, and they are the clouds.
You are a thing that should be untouchable.
They only want to hide you away.

You are my sunshine, and they are the clouds.
You are a thing that shines for everyone.
They just keep trying to hide you away.

They are the clouds, and I am a rainbow.
They bring the rain that stops you from shining.
I only exist when it rains.

You are my sunshine, and I am a rainbow.
You are a thing that should never stop shining.
I would be happy if it never rained again.

I'm glad you didn't give it up! Especially since I love this new poem! I think the repition is refreshing (most people don't use that in this guild), and I love the emotion! Great work all around!

Wow I use a lot of exclamation points... sorry about that.

Thankyou! Again, I'm glad you like - love - it 3nodding

No problem with the exclamation points... I myself use far too many emoticons, which I think is a little worse redface