xClubbed2Deathx
Wow! You're good! xD
Okay, here are some of my feedback. lol
1) The guy holding the sword looks like he's wearing rock pants. You might want to smooth out those wrinkles, make them look more natural. You might also want to give the background more detail and the other dude some more detail too. I love the way you drew his abs, but his face is kind of hard to distinguish, like I think he has cat or pig ears... unless that's the point then nvm. The way he's holding the mallet or hammer (don't know the name of it) is also awkward. It doesn't look like he's gripping it. Aaaannd, that should be it for that picture.
2) I don't have any problems with this picture, it's amazing. I'm trying to find a flaw but I mean, they're not really flaws so it doesn't matter. The picture is good as it is.
3) This one I LUUUUUV! She's drawn amazingly well. The problems I have though is her eyebrows should be slightly more apart. (It's her hair that kind of blocks the separation but it wouldn't kill to just erase a bit that way it'll look nicer.) Also her boobs seem too defined (lol), I mean the top parts shouldn't heavily lined with pencil (it's awkward cause it's too dark) you can just easily erase those lines and make them less noticeable. The boobs would look less fake in my opinion. lol Yay silicon.
4) The upper half of his body should be bigger, that way he'll be rightly proportioned with his legs. His shoulders should be wider than his hips. You know.... I really like the way you draw the arms. >3< I suck at drawing arms and hands, it just never looks right when I do it. I also suck at getting the body the right proportion in my drawings. lol I shall throw rocks at you while I sneer. (JK, don't sue!) xD
I hope this helps. You have good artistic skills so keep up the good work.
3nodding Thank you!
blaugh It does help a lot, I appreciate the quality of your critique!
3nodding 1) I agree with the rock pants lol, I'll make it smoother next time. As for the ears and grip, yeah... those should be easy to fix hehe.
2)
whee Thanks! The arms and eyes bother me though.
3) I like her a lot! But you're right about her boobs, it's hard to make them look natural but I'll try the lighter and less defining line like you said.
4) Yeah, I think if I hadn't gone for such a strange angle it might have turned out better. I purposely made the upper body small to imply the viewpoint but I failed.
crying Yeah, I only got good at drawing arms recently... and they're still not that great lol.
But thanks for the critique!
3nodding I shall keep it up as you say hahaha
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