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OK! So I had a bad day... in which everything sucked big time and I managed to snap at almost every person I care about crying ... *sigh* anyways, wrote this after I realised that I was going all 'Ellasaurus' redface on them and decided to vent in a different way. sweatdrop As always, enjoy, read and comment 3nodding

Criticism

Criticise me, mortalise me
Wound me with your words
Push me back and tie me down
I refuse to go unheard

My heart is open, my judgement pure
Take a look into my world
Set me free and watch me fly
I'm freer than a bird

Look in my eyes, see to my soul
There's more to me than hurt
You're shouting things and making noise
But you haven't said a word

Thanks!! Yeah, the second stanza sounds awkward to me too gonk but the poem doesn't sound right without it sweatdrop

^_^ Thanks.