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pinkytutu

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PostPosted: Sun May 22, 2011 7:52 pm


So, I've been writing this book. It's been in motion for about...2 years now I believe. I haven't gotten very far, but who said there was a time limit? c;
My friend, who used to read through it and give me suggestions, has sort of moved on with the whole book writing thing, so I've had no one to read it. :c

I have this idea. Once every month or so, I post out a new chapter on here. You guys give me some comments/complaints/suggestions, and I modify it if I feel like it should go like one of your comments. In the long run, you get to read my hopefully good story, and I get help from you! c:
Sound good?
PostPosted: Sun May 22, 2011 7:53 pm


Sounds good! : ) I would also try Watpad and posting on there it's protected then

Haruhisan21


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PostPosted: Sun May 22, 2011 7:54 pm


I would love to~!
PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2011 3:07 pm


Well, here's the first chapter (next post)!

pinkytutu

Quotable Genius


pinkytutu

Quotable Genius

PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2011 3:15 pm


Chapter 1


It was early morning, and the just was starting to set (the Academy runs nocturnally). I jumped out of bed and put my hair into a ponytail. I ran down the stairs and out the door, which led to the fountain area. The fountain area had a circle walkway with fountains and benches along the outside of it. The fountains were of Galiena, the first neko, and Valentine, the first vampire. In the middle was the giant willow tree, which i ran to and sat down next to. I liked the feel of the grass when I brushed my hand through it, and I picked up a blade and started turning it between my fingers.
Nekos are half human, half feline.
"You cold?" It was Tim, my boyfriend. He was tall, with pointy deep gray ears, and hair a gray that didn't even look old. He was wearing a long sleeve red shirt with the black coat I got him for Christmas and his nice black pants. He always liked to look nice, even when it was a Saturday. In his hand was my blue hoodie that I must have left at his dorm.
"Not really" I replied. The wind blew and I realized how cold I really was. Since I was sitting there in my black tank top with my blue and black striped pajama pants, I wrapped my hands around my arms to try to become warmer.
"Tsk, tsk, tsk. Now what was that about being cold?" He stood behind me and draped my hoodie over my back, and then he sat down next to me "You left this at my dorm, and I was about to go over and give it to you."
"Thanks" I looked up at the sky.
"Beautiful ain't it? haven't had a day like this in a while" He turned towards me "almost as beautiful as you." He smiled.
"Aww, thank you Tim." I returned the smile "Wow, you dressed up on a Saturday? What kind of crack are you on again?"
He laughed and straightened his coat "Didn't you hear? I'm meeting the president today."
"Eh, I met him yesterday" I said sarcastically laughed. He always dressed up, and his excuse was always that he was going to meet the president.
"Ha ha very funny. Anyway, are we going to sit out here or are we going inside?" He stood up, holding his hand out to help me up. Sighing, I grabbed his hand and stood up, and we started to walk to the girl dorm's lounge.

"It's Saturday!! Movie marathon day!!" Feebee sang loudly as she ran down the stairs "Movie marathon, movie marathon!!!!" She reached the couch left of the swirling stairwell and jumped on it, without realizing that Tim and I were sitting there, so she fell on me "This couch and its TV is reserved!!!! Nobody s- oh hey Selisha! Hey Tim!"
"Could you get off of me?" I asked.
"Whoopsidaisy! Sorry I didn't see you there" She stood up in front of the couch so I could see her. She was wearing a yellow beanie hat covering her ears and most of her short golden blond hair. She had on a yellow tank-top with a tan long-sleeved jacket, and tan flares.
"So, when is the marathon gonna start?" Tim asked Feebee, who was still jumping up and down in excitement.
"It starts at 12pm, and this time were watching the Harry Potter movies."
"Sweet, I'll try not to miss it."
"You better! I've been planning all week for this!"
"Really?"
"Yep. I've been writing out the schedule and drawing signs for it!"
"You actually had the time to do that?" I joined in on the conversation.
"Duh. It's called 'do the work when the teachers not looking'!" She giggled. "Come on! Help me hang these up!" She held out two piles of signs and we took them and went to go put them on the billboards through-out the dorms.
Saturday Movie Marathon is on the last Saturday of the month, and the dorms take turns hosting it. One person is voted to do pretty much all the work, while the rest of us get dates to it. It's actually quite fun.
Hopefully it won't get messed up by the teachers.

After putting up the signs, Tim and I parted to get ready. I took a shower and changed my sleeper pants to my Hermine ones so I would 'dress' for the event. I got my big black blanket with the panda on it and I ran downstairs, hoping I wasn't late.
"Hey! Over here!" Tim had already had a spot saved for us, which was the two person beanie bag off to the right of the couch. He stood up and surprisingly he wasn't over dressed. He had on a pair of deep red sleeper pants and a black long sleeve shirt. He let me sit down first, and he followed. We both cuddled together as Feebee started to talk.
"Listen! Listen!" Feebee yelled, trying to get people to listen, "We are going to be watching the Harry Potter series. We will have popcorn bags set up soon, and you can get a coke if you want. We have breaks between the third and fourth movies, and it will only be ten to fifteen minutes long."
She skipped back to the kitchen to prepare the popcorn and coke machines she got from the cafeteria. Once she had everything set up she told everyone to make a line and only get one of each. I got root-beer and Tim got sprite. Instead of getting two small bags, Tim had brought a bucket and we poured two into it so we could share. The first movie I was wide awake for, but I started to doze off. My head drooped on Tim's shoulder, but he didn't seem to mind. My the end of the second movie I was fast asleep. Soon I felt the shoulder move, and then my head was on the beanie bag. I slightly looked up and there were three other people on the couch asleep, and the rest were up getting refills and talking in hushed voices about the movies so far. Tim was over refilling his sprite, and was talking to Feebee about how good the movies have gone so far. He quietly walked back over to our seat, and smiled at me. I smiled back and moved myself far away enough so he could sit down, then I returned to laying my head on his shoulder. He chuckled softly and sipped his sprite. Soon Feebee started playing the last 4 Harry Potters. I was pretty much knocked out for the rest.
"Selishsa, Selisha, baby wake up" Tim whispered softly in my ear "you need to get up. Everybody else is already gone."
"Wat?" I yawned, then rubbed my eyes. Everybody was gone. I looked at the clock, it was 11:30am "It's already11:30? I thought the marathon was supposed to end at 9."
"It did, we both were asleep and nobody bothered to wake us up."
"Oh."
"Now you need to get to bed before the guard comes."
"What about you? You'll get caught by the guard on the way back."
"That's why I need you to hurry. I'll need to stay the night at your dorm just for tonight, well, if it's ok with you."
"Sure!" He helped me stand up, but my legs were still asleep "Ugh, my legs are asleep."
"You think you'll be able to walk up the stairs?"
"Not without falling over."
"Ok. Wrap your arm around my neck." I did, and then he picked me up and started carrying me to my dorm, which was on the third floor.
"Thank you sweetie."
"No" He grunted "problem." We got up to the third floor, and he set me down. I typed in my combination for my dorm and opened the door.
"I took out Sandra's mattress out a while ago so you won't have a bed." I yawned. Sandra was my old roommate, but she moved away.
"Ok then," Tim said as he sat down on my bed "I'll take this one."
"Very funny Tim, that's my bed."
"Then we'll have to share."
"Or one of us could sleep on the floor."
"It's to uncomfortable, besides, this is a queen size. So I'll get one side and you get the other."
"Fine, but I call the panda blanket." I sighed and layed down. Soon I had fallen asleep, and had totally forgotten he was there.

When I woke up he was snuggled right next to me, with his head on my pillow and purring loudly. I tried to move, but then I found out he had his arms around me. I didn't want to wake him up, so I just layed there looking at the wall. About a half-hour later, when I had dozed off again, he woke up. He looked at me, smiled, then tried to move. Since he didn't want to wake me up, he tried to move his arms, but I had moved so he stopped. I slowly opened my eyes, and turned slightly so I could see him. He smiled, moved his arms slowly, and sat up. I yawned then sat up also.
"Sorry Seli, I didn't know I did that." He rubbed his eyes,
"It's ok." I laughed "At least you don't drool."
He chuckled "Yeah" He looked at the clock "It's 3am?! Man, did we sleep in!"
"It's 3pm, Tim." I laughed and stood up. "That means it's still daylight!" I grabbed a ponytail holder, then walked into the bathroom. I put my hair up, then grabbed my jacket and put it on.
"Where are you going?" Tim asked.
"To the garden!" I threw him his jacket "Hurry up, there's a comb in the bathroom that you can use."
He followed me out the dorm and into the fountain area, or the garden for short. I sat on one of the benches this time, and he sat down next to me. "Do you do this everyday?" He looked at me.
"Only on weekends."
He stomach growled.
"You hungry?" I laughed.
"Yeah."
"Well lets go to the kitchen, Sophia got some eggs from the cafeteria so we can make egg sandwiches." I stood up, then held out my hand. He took my hand and stood up, and we started walking to the kitchen in the girls dorm.
PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2011 3:16 pm


Haruhisan21
Sounds good! : ) I would also try Watpad and posting on there it's protected then

What's Watpad?

pinkytutu

Quotable Genius


Haruhisan21

PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2011 6:32 pm


pinkytutu
Haruhisan21
Sounds good! : ) I would also try Watpad and posting on there it's protected then

What's Watpad?

Sorry it's wattpad is a place where individuals can post their stories then have people can review and comment one thing is that it's all copyrighted so that people can't copy your stories
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