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 Posted: Fri May 20, 2011 2:58 pm
Wake to cloven breeze
Scent of nature stings my nose
Sniff, I smell deer piss
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2011 1:00 am
lol the first two lines are so scenic that the last line was a hilarious surprise to me. awesome.
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 7:05 pm
Ha. Clever. xD I'd usually crit more, but I don't have any to give. This haiku is just very fun.
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 6:34 am
ty smile Haikus are my favorite form of poetry because all the other forms are overplayed when it comes to punchlines and dirty words. wink Also, I'm a little bit of a minimalist when it comes to language.
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 6:37 am
Single golden drop
Brilliant ray pierces my ******** I hate mornings
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 6:44 am
Time moves glacially
Tick tock the clock chimes ding dong
Conscious sublimates
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 2:27 pm
NeverBack ty smile Haikus are my favorite form of poetry because all the other forms are overplayed when it comes to punchlines and dirty words. wink Also, I'm a little bit of a minimalist when it comes to language. lol good thing I created the Haiku subforum then lol PS: I like the "******** I hate mornings" haiku as well
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 3:32 pm
LunarHybrid NeverBack ty smile Haikus are my favorite form of poetry because all the other forms are overplayed when it comes to punchlines and dirty words. wink Also, I'm a little bit of a minimalist when it comes to language. lol good thing I created the Haiku subforum then lol PS: I like the "******** I hate mornings" haiku as well Well, thank you again. Twice! smile
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 3:55 pm
Late Summer sunfall
Softened light casts warm shadows
The Sun and I nap
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Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2011 9:33 pm
Trapped within four walls.
One door from prison to Hell.
Gratefully confined.
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Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2011 9:35 pm
Rain falls while Sun shines.
Outdoor sitters move inside.
Peaceful finally.
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Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2011 9:37 pm
Shiny green pencil
Sustains my rapt attention
Unlike this teacher.
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