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 Posted: Sun May 08, 2011 12:22 am
Not much to say about this one, it wasn't inspired by anything in particular .. I don't particularlylike the ending, it feels kind of lame to me but I couldn't think of a better way to finish, so sweatdrop Anyways, as always, please do enjoy 3nodding
Expectations
Do you feel deceived?
Do you think I lied?
When you met me at last,
Were you not satisfied?
I told you I love you,
Do you think that I don't?
Did you not believe me,
When I said I had faults?
Is your heart full of hatred?
Is my love to be scorned?
Did you really just say that?
Do you wish I was gone?
I guess I’m not needed,
You said so yourself.
I’ll disappear then,
This is farewell.
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Posted: Fri May 13, 2011 6:29 pm
I like it, but it just doesn't feel as... flowing maybe... as it usually does. I mean it wasn't bad, but it wasn't as good as some of your other works.
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EstoPerpetua Vice Captain
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