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 Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 7:41 pm
This is where you will apply for a Kekkei Genkai & Clans not found in the canon. Please be creative here, don't just take bits of an original Kekkei Genkai or a Clan and tweak it.
All Kekkei Genkais must have stages, whether these are advancements in the Kekkei Genkai or just higher ranked techniques. You will not auto-know every move if you are a Genin. Also no over powering, Genin ranked techniques must be Genin ranked, likewise for S-ranked techniques. They will not godmod and there will only be one per Kekkei Genkai at the very most.
Please fill out the form in full and post it in this thread; wait until it has been approved by a mod before posting it in your customs profile.
Kekkei Genkai/Clan Name:
Kekkei Genkai/Clan Primary Elements: (Fire, Water etc. If its a release combined elements, Water + Wind = Ice)
Benefits: (Stat, Learning Jutsu, increased power in element)
Weaknesses: (vulnerabilities/immunities)
Kekkei Genkai/Clan Techniques: (following this format; up to 10 techniques max)
Jutsu Name;
Jutsu Rank:
Jutsu Classification:
Jutsu Description:
Jutsu Effect:
Kekkei Genkai/Clan Stages: (Changes to the appearance, potency of techniques, abilities of the user - requirements for these stages)
Why Should we allow this Kekkei Genkai/Clan:
RP Samples: (preferably linked, preferably using the Kekkei Genkai but will allow other samples too)
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Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2011 5:13 am
This is still a work in progress, but if a mod could please give me a hand i dont want this to be to strong or weak.
Kekkei Genkai Name: Chakra Mouth
Kekkei Genkai Primary Elements: Yang
Benefits: Can absorb chakra through a kiss
Weaknesses: Cannot learn jutsu outside of there elements by regular means teaching,scrolls,etc..., Hair is there weak spot.
Kekkei Genkai Techniques: Kiss of death, Chakra Tasting.
Jutsu Name; Kiss of death
Jutsu Rank: A
Jutsu Classification: Universal
Jutsu Description: The user kisses their target, after the kiss is made the target is unable to move and their chakra is sucked out of their body and if not stopped thier soul is removed as well.
Jutsu Effect: Chakra is stolen eventually this will cause death. temporary paralsys, and the user will gain the affinity for that element but is only able to use the jutsu there target knew.
Note: this jutsu is taught to all academy students of the clan as a graduation requirment to genin. Thus filling there 1 A ranked jutsu spot. You must kill the target in order to gain their chakra nature.
Jutsu Name; Chakra Tasting
Jutsu Rank: C
Jutsu Classification: Universal
Jutsu Description: The user licks the target
Jutsu Effect: The user can tell ones chakra nature, even if they dont know it yet.
nate: this jutsu requires no hand signs
Kekkei Genkai Stages: 1
Why Should we allow this Kekkei Genkai: It's cannon but there is no information on the person who uses it because shes a filler character. Fuka of the 12 guardian ninja. I also think it would work really well with what i had in mind for my character.
RP Samples: (Im gonna leave this blank for now, im not sure if you want me to link a sample of another character or write in txt i have never used this Kg before, so either is fine with me.)
Also as a side not i took out the multiple bodies because it seems with both its a little to over powered. Kinda like a weaker version of the rinnegan. so i took it off.
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Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2011 8:55 am
This Kekkei Genkai is an ocular power for Envy of Tasogare I need to discuss this with Mogaar and Chibi for approval. Itaro S.P.R.EItaro ProfileKekkei Genkai Name: Six Paths of Reincarnation Kekkei Genkai Primary Elements: N/A Benefits: Stats +2 | Unable to be influenced by other Genjutsu | Does not Consume Chakra Weaknesses: This ability takes a considerable amount of energy and if the user does not kill the enemy while in that state then they become severely tired and vulnerable. The user will not be able to use jutsu for a few days after using this ability to its full potential. These techniques take life energy of the user and can be fatal if used for a long period of time. Also, this is an ocular power so if the user loses his eyes then they will no longer be able to use the Kekkei Genkai at all. Kekkei Genkai Techniques: The Realm of Hell, The Realm of Hungry Ghosts, The Realm of Beasts, The Realm of Demons, The Realm of Humans, The Realm of Heavens The Six Paths of Reincarnation is a Buddhist concept of the cycle of death and rebirth stemming from Hindu philosophies. In Japan, most commonly referred to as the “Six Paths". Each of these paths represent one of the realms a being is reborn into after death, determined by the accumulated karma of their past life. It can also be referred as: Six States of Existence Six Roads of Reincarnation Six Paths of Transmigration Six Realms of Samsara Six Directions of Reincarnation Six Destinies This Kekkei Genkai is added onto Sharingan creating a more powerful version of the eye. Not everybody can use this technique though since you must be born with the ability and somehow obtain a sharingan to be able to able to use the power to it's full potential. You do not have to be born with a sharingan to be able to use these abilities. Jutsu Name: The Realm of Hell Jutsu Rank: C Jutsu Classification: Genjutsu Jutsu Description: Represented by the kanji numeral "一" (one) grants him the power to create real illusions capable of manifesting in the physical/real world. This power is a form of reality-warping but the illusion must be preconceived before the power is manifested the physical/real world. Seemingly, Itaro can use this ability without having the illusion to appear in the physical/real world, but only in the mind. Jutsu Effect: There are no effects cast on the user. Jutsu Name: The Realm of Hungry Ghosts Jutsu Rank: B Jutsu Classification: Mind Transfer Art Jutsu Description: Represented by the kanji numeral "二" (two) grants him the power to use the skills of others by possesion. When Itaro is possessing a person's body, he is able to perfectly perform their signature moves but is not able to perform any of their Kekkei Genkai. Jutsu Effect: When Itaro is within a persons body and he is injured, his real body is injured as well. Jutsu Name: The Realm of Beasts Jutsu Rank: B Jutsu Classification: Summoning Jutsu Description: Represented by the kanji numeral "三" (three) grants him the power to summon and control deadly animals such as poisonous snakes, wolves, etc. Jutsu Effect: Can only be used for about three posts at a time. If he uses it more that he is supposed to then his chakra begins to drain. Jutsu Name: The Realm of Demons Jutsu Rank: A Jutsu Classification: Taijutsu Jutsu Description: Represented by the kanji numeral "四" (four) grants him an increase of combat capabilities. When using this path, chakra surrounds Itaro's right eye. Jutsu Effect: Cannot be used for a long period of time, but can be used in short bursts. This technique causes enormous strain on the body similar to Lee's Gate Techniques. Jutsu Name: The Realm of Humans Jutsu Rank: A Jutsu Classification: Taijutsu Jutsu Description: Represented by the kanji numeral "五" (five) increases his battle chakra hereby strengthening him. It is considered to be the most dangerous of the six realms. To enter it, Itaro pierces his right eye, and a mass of chakra then surrounds Itaro's entire body but unlike the Gate Chakra, Itaro's chakra, in itself, posses no danger as it is simply a representation of Itaro's fighting spirit. Jutsu Effect: Cannot be used for a long period of time, but can be used in short bursts. This technique causes enormous strain on the body similar to Lee's Gate Techniques. This ability can be used along with The Realm of Demons. Jutsu Name: The Realm of Heavens Jutsu Rank: S Jutsu Classification: Mind Transfer Art / Illusion Jutsu Description: Represented by the kanji numeral "六" (six) grants him the power to possess and control others. This is the path he used on his kidnappers and continually using to help his superiors. The sixth realm also gives Itaro the ability to project himself as a real illusion. Whatever damage is done within the Genjutsu becomes real and can easily kill an enemy. This is one of the most powerful techniques in the Kekkei Genkai but can easily be used by Itaro. Jutsu Effect: If the illusions are activated for an extensive amount of time they can begin to damage Itaro as well. This ability causes minimal strain on the body, but drains chakra over a period of time. If the user does not pay attention then they can end up killing themselves or exhausting their body severely. Kekkei Genkai Stages: The Realm of Hell, The Realm of Hungry Ghosts, The Realm of Beasts, The Realm of Demons, The Realm of Humans, The Realm of Heavens Why Should we allow this Kekkei Genkai: I wanted something unique compared to the rest of the members of the guild. Also because this character will die eventually so i wanted to at least give it a try. RP Samples: Is this necessary? If so, I will think of one and send it to either Chibi or Mogaar.
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Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2011 4:25 pm
Jinei Ryuu Shinigami This is still a work in progress, but if a mod could please give me a hand i dont want this to be to strong or weak. Kekkei Genkai Name: Chakra Mouth Kekkei Genkai Primary Elements: Yang Benefits: Can absorb chakra through a kiss Weaknesses: Cannot learn jutsu outside of there elements by regular means teaching,scrolls,etc..., Hair is there weak spot. Kekkei Genkai Techniques: Kiss of death, Chakra Tasting. Jutsu Name; Kiss of death Jutsu Rank: A Jutsu Classification: Universal Jutsu Description: The user kisses their target, after the kiss is made the target is unable to move and their chakra is sucked out of their body and if not stopped thier soul is removed as well. Jutsu Effect: Chakra is stolen eventually this will cause death. temporary paralsys, and the user will gain the affinity for that element but is only able to use the jutsu there target knew. Note: this jutsu is taught to all academy students of the clan as a graduation requirment to genin. Thus filling there 1 A ranked jutsu spot. You must kill the target in order to gain their chakra nature. Jutsu Name; Chakra Tasting Jutsu Rank: C Jutsu Classification: Universal Jutsu Description: The user licks the target Jutsu Effect: The user can tell ones chakra nature, even if they dont know it yet. nate: this jutsu requires no hand signs Kekkei Genkai Stages: 1 Why Should we allow this Kekkei Genkai: It's cannon but there is no information on the person who uses it because shes a filler character. Fuka of the 12 guardian ninja. I also think it would work really well with what i had in mind for my character. RP Samples: (Im gonna leave this blank for now, im not sure if you want me to link a sample of another character or write in txt i have never used this Kg before, so either is fine with me.) Also as a side not i took out the multiple bodies because it seems with both its a little to over powered. Kinda like a weaker version of the rinnegan. so i took it off. Linked samples by other characters are fine. I want to see your rping skill not ability to use this.
Details please; how long will the person remain paralyised? How long does it take to suck out all the chakra? weaknesses also for this please - for example an obvious one would be you cannot move while using the jutsu either. Perhaps Chakra 'overload' - a possible good way to die.
I'd prefer a limited time on use of others chakra; by all means you can 'steal' anothers and use the jutsu they know but for a very limited time only.
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 7:45 am
Jinei Ryuu Shinigami This is still a work in progress, but if a mod could please give me a hand i dont want this to be to strong or weak. Kekkei Genkai Name: Chakra Mouth Kekkei Genkai Primary Elements: Yang Benefits: Can absorb chakra through a kiss Weaknesses: Cannot learn jutsu outside of there elements by regular means teaching,scrolls,etc..., Hair is there weak spot. Kekkei Genkai Techniques: Kiss of death, Chakra Tasting. Jutsu Name; Kiss of death Jutsu Rank: A Jutsu Classification: Universal Jutsu Description: The user kisses their target, after the kiss is made the target is unable to move and their chakra is sucked out of their body and if not stopped thier soul is removed as well. Jutsu Effect: Chakra is stolen eventually this will cause death. temporary paralsys, and the user will gain the affinity for that element but is only able to use the jutsu there target knew. Note: this jutsu is taught to all academy students of the clan as a graduation requirment to genin. Thus filling there 1 A ranked jutsu spot. You must kill the target in order to gain their chakra nature. The paralyzing effects last only as long as the kiss, once the kiss is broken so is the paralyzing effect. Weakness: Cannot move while using this jutsu, Can absorn to much chakra and die (chakra overload).chakra overload is caused when one would absorb to much chakra such as a genin trying to drain a jounin or an S-ranked draining a bijuu host. Anyone two ranks above or more will kill you if you drain all there chakra. 250%+ in one hour = chakra overload. Chakra Absorning limitationscannot drain chakra from someone two ranks or higher or you will die. can only use the stolen jutsu 3x then you must steal them again. if jutsu if of your element you can learn it by stealing it. 1 post per rank to absorb all chakra. i.e. 1 post for academy 2 post for genin 3 posts for chuunin 4 posts for jounin 5 posts for S ranked 6 post for kage and SS rank (1 d 4 roll to break 4 = break, you get 1 roll every 2 posts. you lose 25% chakra per post) Cannot go over your max chakra, if you absorb more than 250% in one hour you die chakra overload i.e. Jutsu Name; Chakra Tasting Jutsu Rank: C Jutsu Classification: Universal Jutsu Description: The user licks the target Jutsu Effect: The user can tell ones chakra nature, even if they dont know it yet. nate: this jutsu requires no hand signs Kekkei Genkai Stages: 1 Why Should we allow this Kekkei Genkai: It's cannon but there is no information on the person who uses it because shes a filler character. Fuka of the 12 guardian ninja. I also think it would work really well with what i had in mind for my character. RP Samples: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21464259Also as a side not i took out the multiple bodies because it seems with both its a little to over powered. Kinda like a weaker version of the rinnegan. so i took it off.
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:05 am
Jinei Ryuu Shinigami Jinei Ryuu Shinigami This is still a work in progress, but if a mod could please give me a hand i dont want this to be to strong or weak. Kekkei Genkai Name: Chakra Mouth Kekkei Genkai Primary Elements: Yang Benefits: Can absorb chakra through a kiss Weaknesses: Cannot learn jutsu outside of there elements by regular means teaching,scrolls,etc..., Hair is there weak spot. Kekkei Genkai Techniques: Kiss of death, Chakra Tasting. Jutsu Name; Kiss of death Jutsu Rank: A Jutsu Classification: Universal Jutsu Description: The user kisses their target, after the kiss is made the target is unable to move and their chakra is sucked out of their body and if not stopped thier soul is removed as well. Jutsu Effect: Chakra is stolen eventually this will cause death. temporary paralsys, and the user will gain the affinity for that element but is only able to use the jutsu there target knew. Note: this jutsu is taught to all academy students of the clan as a graduation requirment to genin. Thus filling there 1 A ranked jutsu spot. You must kill the target in order to gain their chakra nature. The paralyzing effects last only as long as the kiss, once the kiss is broken so is the paralyzing effect. Weakness: Cannot move while using this jutsu, Can absorn to much chakra and die (chakra overload).chakra overload is caused when one would absorb to much chakra such as a genin trying to drain a jounin or an S-ranked draining a bijuu host. Anyone two ranks above or more will kill you if you drain all there chakra. 250%+ in one hour = chakra overload. Chakra Absorning limitationscannot drain chakra from someone two ranks or higher or you will die. can only use the stolen jutsu 3x then you must steal them again. if jutsu if of your element you can learn it by stealing it. 1 post per rank to absorb all chakra. i.e. 1 post for academy 2 post for genin 3 posts for chuunin 4 posts for jounin 5 posts for S ranked 6 post for kage and SS rank (1 d 4 roll to break 4 = break, you get 1 roll every 2 posts. you lose 25% chakra per post) Cannot go over your max chakra, if you absorb more than 250% in one hour you die chakra overload i.e. Jutsu Name; Chakra Tasting Jutsu Rank: C Jutsu Classification: Universal Jutsu Description: The user licks the target Jutsu Effect: The user can tell ones chakra nature, even if they dont know it yet. nate: this jutsu requires no hand signs Kekkei Genkai Stages: 1 Why Should we allow this Kekkei Genkai: It's cannon but there is no information on the person who uses it because shes a filler character. Fuka of the 12 guardian ninja. I also think it would work really well with what i had in mind for my character. RP Samples: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21464259Also as a side not i took out the multiple bodies because it seems with both its a little to over powered. Kinda like a weaker version of the rinnegan. so i took it off. It's all fine about that bit about the dice roll? I don't understand what you mean.
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Jinei Ryuu Shinigami rolled 1 4-sided dice:
3
Total: 3 (1-4)
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:19 am
I felt that it was kinda over powered if no one could escape after they were kissed so im giving them a dice roll every two posts there in the kiss to try an break out.
see i got a 3 which means for two more post i would still be held in the kiss. then when the next two post are up i would roll again.
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:28 am
OH
I GET IT -DUH-
No that sounds wonderful, good creativity when coming up with the weaknesses and including the dice roll. Accepted honey~ (Y)
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2011 12:26 pm
Kekkei Genkai Name: Torrent Release Kekkei Genkai Primary Elements: Water + Yin Benefits: Increased power in Water Release jutsus. Weaknesses: Its main weakness is in its strength; because of how powerful it is, and how unpredictably water can move at times, even the most skilled users of the Torrent Release often lose control of their chakra during performance, sometimes causing heavy drain even if the jutsu was initiated correctly. Its other weakness is that while it's techniques are high speed, the stronger ones require massive amounts of water if they're to be used for an extended time. Kekkei Genkai/Clan Techniques: (following this format; up to 10 techniques max) ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Jutsu Name: Torrent Release: Flash Flood Jutsu Rank: C Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: The user releases a high-speed jet of water in a fan shape from their mouth, sending a large wave at the opponent. Depending on how much water is used, this has the potential to slightly alter terrain. This can also be used with an existing water source, putting less strain on the user and possibly allowing more water to be used, depending on the size of the source. Jutsu Effect: Damage-causing, has the ability to sweep opponents off of their feet. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Jutsu Name: Torrent Release: Tidal Flux Jutsu Rank: B Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: The user commands an existing large water source into a swirling mass that lingers above the user and opponent's head. Chakra is constantly consumed while this twirling structure lingers above, but when the user is ready, it can be channeled into a devastating high-power vertical jet of water directly at the opponent. If the user loses control of chakra while it is overhead, it may fall on its own and do damage to the user and/or the opponent. Jutsu Effect: Slight user chakra drain (while in air), damage-causing, has the potential to knock opponents flying or possibly bury them in a small hole in the ground. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Jutsu Name: Torrent Release: Gushing Cataclysm Jutsu Rank: A Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: User combines an existing water source with water created by the user. After a few hand seals, the user shoots a wide jet stream of water from their mouth, and the existing water source swirls around this jet to keep it in a straight line, as well as to add more force should the swirls hit the target. However, the strain put on the user from creating a water source and also controlling an existing one causes them to be weak for several minutes, leaving them fairly open to attack should their own not kill or knock out the opponent. Jutsu Effect: Damage-causing, incapacitates the user to an extent for a few minutes after using. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Jutsu Name: Torrent Release: Armageddon Jutsu Rank: S Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: This infamous jutsu has had many urban legends surrounding it, some even suggesting things such as the great flood mentioned in the Holy Books of old was actually caused by a Torrent Release shinobi who wished to wreak havoc on the world. This jutsu has a very high chance of killing the user, as well as the target, and can only be escaped by flight or other means of getting into the sky. The extreme chakra drain on the user, as well as the difficulty of escape, make for an even higher chance of death for the user than the opponent. Jutsu Effect: Instant death if it hits, highly likely death for the user (Random Number from 1 - 10; must be a 1 or a 10 or the user dies from chakra over-usage. User will die anyway if no escape route is provided.) Dramatically alters terrain. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Kekkei Genkai/Clan Stages: The stages are in the learning of each different technique; it takes a lot of effort to learn how to control two elements, let alone put them to use. Why Should we allow this Kekkei Genkai/Clan: It's powerful, but not over powered, and is balanced out nicely by its weaknesses. Please note that my character has not yet learned the A- or S-ranked jutsu for her Kekkei Genkai. RP Samples: [x]
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2011 12:35 pm
XX-Emma Uchiha-XX Kekkei Genkai Name: Torrent Release Kekkei Genkai Primary Elements: Water + Yin Benefits: Increased power in Water Release jutsus. Weaknesses: Its main weakness is in its strength; because of how powerful it is, and how unpredictably water can move at times, even the most skilled users of the Torrent Release often lose control of their chakra during performance, sometimes causing heavy drain even if the jutsu was initiated correctly. Its other weakness is that while it's techniques are high speed, the stronger ones require massive amounts of water if they're to be used for an extended time. Kekkei Genkai/Clan Techniques: (following this format; up to 10 techniques max) ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Jutsu Name: Torrent Release: Flash Flood Jutsu Rank: C Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: The user releases a high-speed jet of water in a fan shape from their mouth, sending a large wave at the opponent. Depending on how much water is used, this has the potential to slightly alter terrain. This can also be used with an existing water source, putting less strain on the user and possibly allowing more water to be used, depending on the size of the source. Jutsu Effect: Damage-causing, has the ability to sweep opponents off of their feet. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Jutsu Name: Torrent Release: Tidal Flux Jutsu Rank: B Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: The user commands an existing large water source into a swirling mass that lingers above the user and opponent's head. Chakra is constantly consumed while this twirling structure lingers above, but when the user is ready, it can be channeled into a devastating high-power vertical jet of water directly at the opponent. If the user loses control of chakra while it is overhead, it may fall on its own and do damage to the user and/or the opponent. Jutsu Effect: Slight user chakra drain (while in air), damage-causing, has the potential to knock opponents flying or possibly bury them in a small hole in the ground. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Jutsu Name: Torrent Release: Gushing Cataclysm Jutsu Rank: A Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: User combines an existing water source with water created by the user. After a few hand seals, the user shoots a wide jet stream of water from their mouth, and the existing water source swirls around this jet to keep it in a straight line, as well as to add more force should the swirls hit the target. However, the strain put on the user from creating a water source and also controlling an existing one causes them to be weak for several minutes, leaving them fairly open to attack should their own not kill or knock out the opponent. Jutsu Effect: Damage-causing, incapacitates the user to an extent for a few minutes after using. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Jutsu Name: Torrent Release: Armageddon Jutsu Rank: S Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: This infamous jutsu has had many urban legends surrounding it, some even suggesting things such as the great flood mentioned in the Holy Books of old was actually caused by a Torrent Release shinobi who wished to wreak havoc on the world. This jutsu has a very high chance of killing the user, as well as the target, and can only be escaped by flight or other means of getting into the sky. The extreme chakra drain on the user, as well as the difficulty of escape, make for an even higher chance of death for the user than the opponent. Jutsu Effect: Instant death if it hits, highly likely death for the user (Random Number from 1 - 10; must be a 1 or a 10 or the user dies from chakra over-usage. User will die anyway if no escape route is provided.) Dramatically alters terrain. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Kekkei Genkai/Clan Stages: The stages are in the learning of each different technique; it takes a lot of effort to learn how to control two elements, let alone put them to use. Why Should we allow this Kekkei Genkai/Clan: It's powerful, but not over powered, and is balanced out nicely by its weaknesses. Please note that my character has not yet learned the A- or S-ranked jutsu for her Kekkei Genkai. RP Samples: [x] -dramatic slow mo' over the top stamping-
APPROVED YO
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2011 4:04 pm
n.n Oh sank you, sank you so much~!!! <333 I didn't think it would be accepted, because everything I ever make turns to fail! It's like the law of the world!! Thank youuu!!
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 7:06 am
Kekkei Genkai/Clan Name: Suigin Koutai (Mercury Shift)/ Suigin Clan Kekkei Genkai/Clan Primary Elements: Yang + Earth = Mercury (Steel) Benefits: - Increase Power of Earth Type Jutsu (1 rank) - 1 less post required to learn Earth Techniques - Resistant to fire Techniques (do 1 rank less against mercury techniques) Weaknesses: - Users Are weaker to lightning (Does 1 rank increase damage) - Mercury must be maintained in liquid form making it so that it does not act as a suitable barrier. - Yang counts as second element therefore no real third element can be gained until jonin rank leaving only earth and mercury (both weak against lightining) Kekkei Genkai/Clan Techniques: Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Manipulation Jutsu Rank: E-S Rank (depends on User, can only master up to their rank so Genin = D rank, etc.) Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: After having some form of Mercury source the user can manipulate it at will as Gaara would his sand (or the Sandaime Kazekage his iron sand). Jutsu Effect: This technique costs 1 rank below the users mastery of this technique worth of chakra (so if mastered up to C then costs D, if S then costs A) every 4 posts. And each stage of this technique must be mastered in order for them to learn subsequent techniques of that rank. (so for Mercury Clone to be learned the user must already have mastered Mercury Manipulation C rank). Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Clone Jutsu Rank: C- Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/ Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: By creating a clone from mercury the user is able to accomplish several things. Firstly this clone is made from mercury making them far harder than that of normal clones allowing them to be excellent for taijutsu style techniques. This clone is also an excellent distraction for the user since it is made from mercury it will successfully draw any sort of lightning jutsu that are projectile based away from the actual ninja making it useful as a sort of lightning rod to protect them from their main weakness. Jutsu Effect: Creates a clone out of mercury that will not be dispersed by a simple physical attack as many clones normally would. Once the clone is dispersed however it will burst releasing mercury all over the place possibly coating the opponent or at the very least creating a collection of mercury for the user to continue with attacks. Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Binding Jutsu Rank: C Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: The user will once more use this in conjunction with some other mercury technique as either they will manipulate the mercury that is already on the opponent or they will manipulate the mercury very close to them. Once this jutsu has been activated the mercury will form large globs that stick to the opponents limbs and body that are almost impossible to separate. Dependent on the amount of mercury present these globs can be extremely high in number and weigh quite a bit making the opponent sluggish and practically immobile. Jutsu Effect: By coating the opponent in mercury the shinobi utilizing this technique can immobilize their opponent by causing the attached mercury to stick to their target and accumulate forming extremely heavy weights (maximum weight 200 lbs if hit with C rank and below, maximum weight 500 if hit with B rank and above) Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Bullet(s) Jutsu Rank: B Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/ Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: The user will concentrate a vast amount of chakra into their mouth and create one of two things. They will either create one large mercury bullet roughly a foot in diameter that they will expel from their mouth at high speeds to impact the opponent and not only cause extremely forceful blunt trauma but also coat them in the metal for future combinations. The user can also form around 20 smaller bullets roughly 3-5 cm in diameter that can be also fired at the opponent, these causing much smaller wounds and yet ones more focused on penetrating. Jutsu Effect: Creates either one or multiple mercury based projectiles that can cause severe concussive damage or some penetration damage and be used in future mercury based techniques. Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Whip Jutsu Rank: B-A Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: This technique can be easily done by simply forming a long whip roughly 12-15 feet in length from mercury the users body can readily create. This whip can be freely used by the user through the use of their arms as if it were an actual whip, this whip is far longer lasting than the other form that can be used (about 5 posts). Using a large source of mercury the user can create several whips at once (if used in conjunction with mercury summoning it can be about 12) each one readily manipulated by the users chakra as they simply press their hands on the source of mercury to create these several whips with which they can attack or defend (lasts 3 posts). Jutsu Effect: Can create one single whip without the use of Mercury source (or atleast a large one) or several whips from a large source (it should be noted that in order to use the several whips the user must train and learn not only the single whip technique but then the several whip technique with the amount of posts required for a B-ranked jutsu). Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Summoning Jutsu Rank: A Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: Focusing a great deal of chakra into their mouth the user creates ungodly amounts of mercury for the amount of chakra they use as so much is created that it could fill a small lake. This technique is best used to serve the shinobi for future stronger techniques that require larger reservoirs of mercury. This technique also can be used to create a massive wave of mercury capable of sweeping several opponents off their feet and coating them in mercury. Jutsu Effect: Creates a huge amount of mercury with which the user can attack as well as creating a massive wave of mercury capable of sweeping several targets off of their feet. Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Dragon Jutsu Rank: A Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: The user will need the Mercury summoning technique to perform this one as from their pool they create a massive dragon of mercury that can be around 40 feet in length at it's greatest size. This dragon is capable of firing a maximum of 5 mercury bullets ( or mercury bullet usages as it can fire multiples smaller bullets as opposed to just one large one) and last for several minutes after creation (roughly 4 posts) this technique does require the users hands to direct the dragon. Jutsu Effect: Creates a large dragon with which the user manipulates freely that can use the mercury bullet technique up to 5 times and lasts 4 posts. Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Shower Jutsu Rank: A-S Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: The user will either fire a large mercury bullet from their mouth (A ranked) or utilize the mercury summoning technique to fire multiple bullets into the air (S ranked). After traveling hundreds of feet (only 1 post later) the bullet explode and it will begin to rain. The user of this technique can do one of two things either focus the mercury rain into sharper finer senbon like projectiles or harden them into rounder marble sized mercury balls. The senbon unlike the balls are meant for penetration and more of them can be created, the balls cause blunt trauma and coat the target in mercury further allow for more combinations. Jutsu Effect: This technique if A ranked covers a 40 yard circle around the user of the technique, if S ranked and mercury summoning was used in conjunction it covers 80 yards in diameter. This techniques causes it to rain down either mercury senbon or marble sized projectiles (the user must state which). Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Lance Jutsu Rank: S Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: The user will raise the intended throwing arm and form a sleek 12 foot long mercury lance with which they implement the jutsu. Focusing they will hurl the lance at excessively high speeds towards their intended target, capable of penetrating several layers of rock before stopping this lance is extremely hard to defend against. Once it has penetrated it's target it will pause for a moment and then explode outwards with sheer cutting power meaning that it very easily could severe a limb from it's target if the opponent is not careful. Jutsu Effect: Creates a 12 foot long lance of mercury that is used to either penetrate an opponent with excessively high defenses or simply harm the desired target. After having connected and paused for a moment the technique will explode outwards (in only one plane as in upwards, horizontally, diagonally, etc.) with sheer cutting force capable of slicing several layers into steel. Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Spike Jutsu Rank: S Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: Used on either a large or small scale this technique is extremely powerful regardless of size. Initiated by focusing and simply raising ones hands towards the intended mercury source and clenching ones fist all the mercury that is being focused on will expand and send out large spikes capable of skewering or even trapping intended targets. This technique is also infamous for being used in a minute scale when mercury is in the bloodstream of the intended target. Doing the same motion the user causes tiny spikes to dart out causing extreme pain in the affected area and even failure of the area for physical use. This technique if left inside the target and not removed can be fatal after several days and can only be undone by powerful medical ninja, or other mercury elemental users. It should be noted that raiton users can weaken the effect and prevent fatal results, but cannot cure the jutsu causing extreme pain to still be present. Jutsu Effect: If used on a large scale an already created mercury source will erupt sending large spikes in all directions meant to skewer a target. If used in a small scale and inside the body of an opponent the users mercury will form minute spikes outwards that cause unbelievable pain most likely crippling the use of the afflicted limb. If not removed in 4 days (real time) by a medical shinobi (B ranked) or treated by some form of Raiton user (B-ranked or higher) they afflicted person will die (if treated by raiton user then fatality is stopped, but pain is not removed. Kekkei Genkai/Clan Stages: Stages are linked to the mastery of the first technique, in order for the shinobi's skill in this clan to increase they must master the next highest rank of Mercury Manipulation posting as many times as required for a shinobi of their rank to master that level of the technique (for example Chuunin master B rank) before they can learn any other techniques of this style of equivalent rank. Why Should we allow this Kekkei Genkai/Clan: It is interesting and I believe something different (since I made all of these techniques). I also believe it will add to the overall creativity and interest of this guild when new users come to join. RP Samples: For Chibi
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 7:34 am
raijin sasori Kekkei Genkai/Clan Name: Suigin Koutai (Mercury Shift)/ Suigin Clan Kekkei Genkai/Clan Primary Elements: Yang + Earth = Mercury (Steel) Benefits: - Increase Power of Earth Type Jutsu (1 rank) - Increase Flexibility of User (1 rank, makes them better at evading attacks) - 1 less post required to learn Earth Techniques - Resistant to fire Techniques (do 1 rank less against mercury techniques) Weaknesses: - Users Are weaker to lightning (Does 1 rank increase damage) - Mercury must be maintained in liquid form making it so that it does not act as a suitable barrier. - Yang counts as second element therefore no real third element can be gained until jonin rank leaving only earth and mercury (both weak against lightining) - Can Only learn one Taijutsu style, and that is the Suigin Clans secret style (will create later) Kekkei Genkai/Clan Techniques: Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Manipulation Jutsu Rank: E-S Rank (depends on User, can only master up to one rank higher than themselves) Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: After having some form of Mercury source the user can manipulate it at will as Gaara would his sand (or the Sandaime Kazekage his iron sand). Jutsu Effect: This technique costs 1 rank below the users mastery of this technique worth of chakra (so if mastered up to C then costs D, if S then costs A) every 4 posts. And each stage of this technique must be mastered in order for them to learn subsequent techniques of that rank. (so for Mercury Clone to be learned the user must already have mastered Mercury Manipulation C rank). Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Clone Jutsu Rank: C- Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/ Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: By creating a clone from mercury the user is able to accomplish several things. Firstly this clone is made from mercury making them far harder than that of normal clones allowing them to be excellent for taijutsu style techniques. This clone is also an excellent distraction for the user since it is made from mercury it will successfully draw any sort of lightning jutsu that are projectile based away from the actual ninja making it useful as a sort of lightning rod to protect them from their main weakness. Jutsu Effect: Creates a clone out of mercury that will not be dispersed by a simple physical attack as many clones normally would. Once the clone is dispersed however it will burst releasing mercury all over the place possibly coating the opponent or at the very least creating a collection of mercury for the user to continue with attacks. Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Binding Jutsu Rank: C Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: The user will once more use this in conjunction with some other mercury technique as either they will manipulate the mercury that is already on the opponent or they will manipulate the mercury very close to them. Once this jutsu has been activated the mercury will form large globs that stick to the opponents limbs and body that are almost impossible to separate. Dependent on the amount of mercury present these globs can be extremely high in number and weigh quite a bit making the opponent sluggish and practically immobile. Jutsu Effect: By coating the opponent in mercury the shinobi utilizing this technique can immobilize their opponent by causing the attached mercury to stick to their target and accumulate forming extremely heavy weights (maximum weight 200 lbs if hit with C rank and below, maximum weight 500 if hit with B rank and above) Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Bullet(s) Jutsu Rank: B Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/ Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: The user will concentrate a vast amount of chakra into their mouth and create one of two things. They will either create one large mercury bullet roughly a foot in diameter that they will expel from their mouth at high speeds to impact the opponent and not only cause extremely forceful blunt trauma but also coat them in the metal for future combinations. The user can also form around 20 smaller bullets roughly 3-5 cm in diameter that can be also fired at the opponent, these causing much smaller wounds and yet ones more focused on penetrating. Jutsu Effect: Creates either one or multiple mercury based projectiles that can cause severe concussive damage or some penetration damage and be used in future mercury based techniques. Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Whip Jutsu Rank: B-A Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: This technique can be easily done by simply forming a long whip roughly 12-15 feet in length from mercury the users body can readily create. This whip can be freely used by the user through the use of their arms as if it were an actual whip, this whip is far longer lasting than the other form that can be used (about 5 posts). Using a large source of mercury the user can create several whips at once (if used in conjunction with mercury summoning it can be about 12) each one readily manipulated by the users chakra as they simply press their hands on the source of mercury to create these several whips with which they can attack or defend (lasts 3 posts). Jutsu Effect: Can create one single whip without the use of Mercury source (or atleast a large one) or several whips from a large source (it should be noted that in order to use the several whips the user must train and learn not only the single whip technique but then the several whip technique with the amount of posts required for a B-ranked jutsu). Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Summoning Jutsu Rank: A Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: Focusing a great deal of chakra into their mouth the user creates ungodly amounts of mercury for the amount of chakra they use as so much is created that it could fill a small lake. This technique is best used to serve the shinobi for future stronger techniques that require larger reservoirs of mercury. This technique also can be used to create a massive wave of mercury capable of sweeping several opponents off their feet and coating them in mercury. Jutsu Effect: Creates a huge amount of mercury with which the user can attack as well as creating a massive wave of mercury capable of sweeping several targets off of their feet. Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Dragon Jutsu Rank: A Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: The user will need the Mercury summoning technique to perform this one as from their pool they create a massive dragon of mercury that can be around 40 feet in length at it's greatest size. This dragon is capable of firing a maximum of 5 mercury bullets ( or mercury bullet usages as it can fire multiples smaller bullets as opposed to just one large one) and last for several minutes after creation (roughly 4 posts) this technique does require the users hands to direct the dragon. Jutsu Effect: Creates a large dragon with which the user manipulates freely that can use the mercury bullet technique up to 5 times and lasts 4 posts. Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Shower Jutsu Rank: A-S Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: The user will either fire a large mercury bullet from their mouth (A ranked) or utilize the mercury summoning technique to fire multiple bullets into the air (S ranked). After traveling hundreds of feet (only 1 post later) the bullet explode and it will begin to rain. The user of this technique can do one of two things either focus the mercury rain into sharper finer senbon like projectiles or harden them into rounder marble sized mercury balls. The senbon unlike the balls are meant for penetration and more of them can be created, the balls cause blunt trauma and coat the target in mercury further allow for more combinations. Jutsu Effect: This technique if A ranked covers a 40 yard circle around the user of the technique, if S ranked and mercury summoning was used in conjunction it covers 80 yards in diameter. This techniques causes it to rain down either mercury senbon or marble sized projectiles (the user must state which). Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Lance Jutsu Rank: S Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: The user will raise the intended throwing arm and form a sleek 12 foot long mercury lance with which they implement the jutsu. Focusing they will hurl the lance at excessively high speeds towards their intended target, capable of penetrating several layers of rock before stopping this lance is extremely hard to defend against. Once it has penetrated it's target it will pause for a moment and then explode outwards with sheer cutting power meaning that it very easily could severe a limb from it's target if the opponent is not careful. Jutsu Effect: Creates a 12 foot long lance of mercury that is used to either penetrate an opponent with excessively high defenses or simply harm the desired target. After having connected and paused for a moment the technique will explode outwards (in only one plane as in upwards, horizontally, diagonally, etc.) with sheer cutting force capable of slicing several layers into steel. Jutsu Name: Steel Release: Mercury Spike Jutsu Rank: S Rank Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu/Kekkei Genkai Jutsu Description: Used on either a large or small scale this technique is extremely powerful regardless of size. Initiated by focusing and simply raising ones hands towards the intended mercury source and clenching ones fist all the mercury that is being focused on will expand and send out large spikes capable of skewering or even trapping intended targets. This technique is also infamous for being used in a minute scale when mercury is in the bloodstream of the intended target. Doing the same motion the user causes tiny spikes to dart out causing extreme pain in the affected area and even failure of the area for physical use. This technique if left inside the target and not removed can be fatal after several days and can only be undone by powerful medical ninja, or other mercury elemental users. It should be noted that raiton users can weaken the effect and prevent fatal results, but cannot cure the jutsu causing extreme pain to still be present. Jutsu Effect: If used on a large scale an already created mercury source will erupt sending large spikes in all directions meant to skewer a target. If used in a small scale and inside the body of an opponent the users mercury will form minute spikes outwards that cause unbelievable pain most likely crippling the use of the afflicted limb. If not removed in 4 days (real time) by a medical shinobi (B ranked) or treated by some form of Raiton user (B-ranked or higher) they afflicted person will die (if treated by raiton user then fatality is stopped, but pain is not removed. Kekkei Genkai/Clan Stages: Stages are linked to the mastery of the first technique, in order for the shinobi's skill in this clan to increase they must master the next highest rank of Mercury Manipulation posting as many times as required for a shinobi of their rank to master that level of the technique (for example Chuunin master B rank) before they can learn any other techniques of this style of equivalent rank. Why Should we allow this Kekkei Genkai/Clan: It is interesting and I believe something different (since I made all of these techniques). I also believe it will add to the overall creativity and interest of this guild when new users come to join. RP Samples: For Chibi
I'd leave out the Taijutsu limit/since we don't really have 'styles' - just Taijutsu moves etc.
I'd leave out the flexibility since this is a purely ninjutsu based Kekkei Genkai.
The rest is fine apart from the increased learning and costing less of some moves. I'd make is consistent. You can either learn a C-rank move when you are technically D-ranked or you can use a C-rank and make it cost D-rank.
Other than that I'm happy to accept.
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 7:40 am
Chibijessikins
I'd leave out the Taijutsu limit/since we don't really have 'styles' - just Taijutsu moves etc.
I'd leave out the flexibility since this is a purely ninjutsu based Kekkei Genkai.
The rest is fine apart from the increased learning and costing less of some moves. I'd make is consistent. You can either learn a C-rank move when you are technically D-ranked or you can use a C-rank and make it cost D-rank.
Other than that I'm happy to accept.
Done and done, I have made the changes, one can only master up to their rank and it costs one rank below the rank mastered.
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 7:47 am
raijin sasori Chibijessikins
I'd leave out the Taijutsu limit/since we don't really have 'styles' - just Taijutsu moves etc.
I'd leave out the flexibility since this is a purely ninjutsu based Kekkei Genkai.
The rest is fine apart from the increased learning and costing less of some moves. I'd make is consistent. You can either learn a C-rank move when you are technically D-ranked or you can use a C-rank and make it cost D-rank.
Other than that I'm happy to accept.
Done and done, I have made the changes, one can only master up to their rank and it costs one rank below the rank mastered. accepted then.
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