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The hand that was suposed to save me

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 11:11 pm


I see a hand reatching down ,
I think this hand is gunna save me ,
yaaay i can finaly be free from this darkness that sorounds me ,
(GASPS FOR AIR)
~hand slowly crushing heart~
-blood pours out mouth-
i thought.....i thought you were gunna save me
~hand crushes harder~
i gess there is no saveing me from this pit of darkness
just let me slowly die alone the way i do dizerve to die
~dies slowly without a sound a hand or a emotion to save me~
PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 7:46 am


thats... tragic. neutral

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 9:34 pm


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thats... tragic. neutral

ya that came from my heart
PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 12:38 pm


sad are you ok?

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 12:43 pm


LadyEstellaRose
sad are you ok?

No im not okay
PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 12:59 pm


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LadyEstellaRose
sad are you ok?

No im not okay


Whats wrong?

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 2:43 am


just sadness has filled my heart and i wont leave i try nd try but the pain wont leave
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