Well I've been working on getting my story out to a writing agent so I can get it published, but I've recently gone back to do some edits //AGAIN//.
I've finished up my edits on the prologue, and now I'm looking for some critiques to it.
If you find any typos or grammatical errors-- PLEASE TELL ME.
Even if you think that something could be phrased better-- give me a shout.
I'd also love if you could tell me what you like about it-- just an all round thing.
Link to prologue:
http://susiron.deviantart.com/#/d3d4yuy
Feel free to post your thoughts either on this forum or on the DA page. I'm not picky.
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