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Mayrinshou Suki - Fire Bender

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 6:09 pm


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Basic Info:

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Username:
Toudai Shirouki Nightfall

Character Name:
Mayrinshou Suki

Nickname(s):
May, Suki, Shou, Rin

Age:
Seventeen

Gender:
Male

Sexuality:
Heterosexual


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Appearance Info:

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Height:
6"0

Hair Color:
Black

Hair Length:
3 ft

Eye Color:
Gray

Skintone:
White

Scars/Marks/Tattoos:
A scar running down his left shoulder.


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In Depth Info:

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Nation:
Fire (Former)

Rank:
Former Lieutenant

Bender:
Fire

Bending Level:

Low Apprentice

Weapon of Choice:
His Blades, Akaibo and Aoibo

Proffession/Job:
Wandering Swordsman/Bender; Fire Nation Raider; Member of the White Lotus


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Background Info

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Likes:
Quiet People, Fruit, Sweets, Fire, Sun, Sunflower, Various Things

Dislikes:
Loud People, Pepper, Water, Moon, Moonlace, Various Things

Hates:
Waterbenders, Moon, Fire Nation

Loves:
Strong People, Sun, Fire, Quiet

Greatest Fear:
That his flame will flicker and die out...

Darkest Secret:
He killed his family, save his brother.

Family:
Fenrin Suki (Father/Deceased)
May Suki (Mother/Deceased)
Shirouh Suki (Brother/Alive)

Origin of Birth:
Fire Nation

Biography:

Suki was born well off into a loving and caring family. His father a waterbender and his mother a firebender, they both knew of the dangers of actually going into battle. They raised their children to steer them away from the paths of danger, but that didn't work out too well. Mayrinshou still reached out, seeking the path of a bender, willing himself to learn how to weild fire in order to protect his nation. This of course, occured when he was at the age of but five. At this age his parents still had control of his actions, though not for very long. Two years later Mayrinshou killed his parents, though not in the way that you would be thinking of. It was an accident, as simple at that. he was simply practicing bending when his parents walked in, unable to stop the fire from buring their scalps right off their heads. Mayrinshou still suffers trauma from the pain of watching his parents writhe on the floor in agony and pain...

Mayrinshou later on lost his brother in a small scuffle. After a few weeks, he was sure that his brother was now lost forever. Still, he lived on, though not really living at all. He had now lost all three pieces to his life, everything that had meaning to him. At the age of seven, he just simply wished to....die. His parents were erased from history, and his entire fortune, his glory, his power...all of it...gone in the blink of an eye. The Fire Lord paid a personal visit to his home, only to burn it down because of complaint about it. No one important lived there, so why keep it there? Mayrinshou found no hope of living anymore so he gave it up...that was until someone found him and raised him. This man, a man of great stature held Mayrinshou up, telling him of stories from all Nations. This man wished for all of the Nations to be as one, and sooner or later, this was passed on to Mayrinshou. This man was one of a million. He was a world renouned Pai-Sho player, and also a bender of the greatest. He was born in the Fire Nation, though he displayed no ill hate for anyone else. He always believed that there was a bit of good in everyone. This man was the reason Mayrinshou joined the Fire Nation army. Of course being at the age of ten now, most people wouldn't accept kids into the army. Though with the man he was with, with his MASTER, Suki was allowed early acceptance. His Master, world renowned as one of the best benders of all watched over Mayrinshou, training him so that he too would be able to protect his people. Mayrinshou later walked up the ranks, quickly achieving the ran of Lieutenant. He challenged a Brigader General later on at the age of twelve, and after an intense battle, he lost, gaining confidence and strength. All was going well until...well, Suki's master was murdered. Not really murdered, but it was attempted. Mayrinshou lay by his master's deathbed, pledging that he would do whatever he could to find peace. His master left him a single Pai-Sho peice, the White Lotus. This would help Suki later in his life join the Order of White Lotus. Continuing on, Mayrinshou trained himself hard, still fighting for more strength. Still, being at the age of fourteen now, he was still underestimated. Suki sought the quickest ways to peace, thus he murdered everyone on his ship in cold blood. These people were the ones who wished to destroy the world, thus, Suki had no need for them anymore. Years pass, and now the boy is at the age of Seventeen. His name is feared across the ocean's and seas, though he only wishes to bring forth harmony. The Fire Nation itself has placed a bounty on his head of 200 Gold Pieces. He now journies the Nation's, fighting in order to bring peace to the world once more, for the people now are ignorant of peace...

Theme Song:
What I Have Done
Spinning Out of Control
Saving Me
Last Resort

Forgotten Info:
(None At The Moment)
PostPosted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 7:04 am


... He's only 6 feet? He looks to be at least 7! rofl

Hm, how is he a Fire Nation Brigadier General? He's only seventeen, and the biography doesn't mention a single thing about joining the military. There's nothing in this about training under a master, so I can't see why he's a Low Master.

Unfortunately, you can't be a member of the White Lotus unless you apply for it, and it doesn't seem likely he would be accepted into the prestigious, worldwide organization meant for veteran Pai-Sho players.

Please make the appropriate changes.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 7:14 am


He looks that way, but the base I used for him is Kanda Yu from D-Gray Man. Kanda is only 5"8, but I increased the height to 6"0 for this RP.

I'll add more to the history about how he got up to the rank of Brigader General, is that okay? Also, if you need me to give an RP Sample then I could do that too. He trained under a master for a few yars, though I didn't add that to the bio, did I? I just posted that the beliefs were passed down to him..sorry.

Also, how do you apply to be in the White Lotus? I know it's unlikely that a Seventeen year old would be accepted, but what if his so called master was with him? What if his master was also a member of the White Lotus? If you want I can also make another profile for the master. It'd be like a nice Zuki/Iroh relationship..

(This is Kanda Yu, Click.)

http://dgrayman.wikia.com/wiki/Yu_Kanda


EDIT: Profile Edited
PostPosted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 4:44 pm


It's even more unlikely that a ten-year old will receive the rank of Brigadier General, or any officer rank for that matter.

I think masters are overrated. Alright, you trained under a master, but what also matters is how your character applies learned skills to real-life situations and how much experience your character has.

One of the mods is going to create one in a short while...

Also, the last war the Fire Nation was involved with ended a few years ago, under the reign of Lord Kajo.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 10:26 am


It seems unlikely, but it IS possible. I mean there are geniuses in the world all around, some kids go to college at the age of 12, or even high school. I think a 10 year old went to college...I think. Anyways, if that's possible, then wouldn't it be possible to gain a rank in the military after defeating a man of the rank you wish to recieve? I dunno really.

I think masters are overated at times as well, but if you actually use them correctly it can make the story flow on quite nicely.

One of the mods will create one character of what exactly?

If the war ended then what's happening in the story atm? I read the story in the forum, but i'm still not completely getting it. Also, who's the Avatar atm?
PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 3:44 pm


Hm, imagine if every single RPer started running around the guild saying their characters are bending geniuses or something, and then what? I'd have a guild full of super-strong characters blowing each other apart and then miraculously recovering and blowing each other apart again.

That might be possible (emphasis on might) in the Earth Kingdom military, which is based somewhat on ancient Chinese armies, but the Fire Nation military is more modernized, industrialized, and standardized. It's basically the Imperial Japanese Army and Navy, along with an air force, except for the fact that they use fire instead of Type 30 rifles.
Gaining a rank after defeating the holder of that rank? I'm not very sure. Sounds like something from Lord Ozai's reign, but it's been at least three scores after him. The Fire Nation has been at peace for much of the time.

One of the mods is going to create a form for the White Lotus. Ask Yang Kaido for more info.

We're in that interwar period in which people of the world realize peace is so precious.... after a while they forget their earlier lesson and start a new freaking war.
The last owner left the guild in a half-developed state, so an Avatar hasn't been chosen yet.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 3:50 pm


That would be...stupid. I get your point.

So it wouldn't be possible in the Fire Nation army? I dunno, If you want me to edit it to something else, then I could put that he worked his way up for a few years or something.

Fire Nation at peace for now? Kay.

Alright then, I'll Ask him Later about it.

So they're going to forget? Cool then, that works out.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 4:31 pm


Hm, seeing how the "Avatar Team" fought in several battles, I think it's safe to assume that the military use of children (children as in under 18 ) isn't a completely new concept.
I suppose Shou, at age 17, could be a sergeant or maybe even a lieutenant. But I don't think military rank matters if he's a fugitive.

I think an appropriate bending level would be Low Apprentice. That's where I started out, anyway.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 11:58 am


Edited. Put that he lost against the Brigader General. Also put him as a Former Lieutenant. That good now?

Also, can I get a link to the Bending Levil list and so forth?
PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 5:18 pm


It's on the profile layout thread...

Also, if Shou's master's assassin was able to inflict a fatal wound to him, wouldn't that mean that the "attempted murder" was a successful murder?

Anyway, this is approved.

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