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 Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2011 4:16 pm
You
With the platinum hair
Shining gemstone eyes
Always lit all colours of the rainbow
I loved you once
I wanted you once
Your were beautiful once
But when I stepped back
Wiped the tears from my naive eyes
Pushed back the glossy curtain
I saw the real you
You
With the matted, fake hair
Dull rocks for eyes
Always shadowed with plastic glamour and desperatation
You are not unique
I am not your doll
To dress and undress
To use and abuse
Don't try it anymore
I'm a different girl
You aren't
You
So desperate for love
Longing to be different
So delusional and pathetic
You won't pull me in again
I won't let you
You
The girl with once platinum hair
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Basically, a poem venting about my b***h of an ex-girlfriend who placed all the blame for her manipulative bitchery on me and consistantly tries to drag me kicking and screaming into her s**t again. Cheery topic, ain't it? smile
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Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2011 4:39 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2011 4:49 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2011 7:08 pm
I usually don't like poetry, but this was good smile
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 11:49 am
you write a lot of poetry?
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Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 10:59 am
Not a cheery topic I'll agree with that, but how much poetry actually is cheery compared to how much dark poetry is out there. I like your poem it clearly tells a story about what happened.
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