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 Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 6:06 pm
Spring’s Symphony
By: PandaYuki
Mountain regions like stepping stones towards heaven.
A spotlight on the center of the stage.
The background bright and breezy.
The stage is set.
A miracle is about to happen.
The grass reaches for the sky, the wind whistling through its blades.
A sweet and high tune.
Flowers budding, opening their petals.
Dancing in the suns’ bright rays.
Reaching their leaves up, giving all their energy to the light.
The mountains stand firm.
Their deep voices booming out loud.
Shaking the wind, distracting the world for only a minute.
The clouds in the sky, creating their veil.
Covering the blue blanket in a white shroud.
Singing their tune, soft and light.
Sing out their tune, to the audience far and near.
Catching the attention of the world.
Capturing their music in picture, still and endless.
Wrapped in soft music,
Cradled in warm soil,
Faces lit up, smiling brightly.
Their time has come.
The spotlight is on them.
They raise their voices high.
Reaching the heavens, using the sunlight as their red carpet.
Sending shivers of new life up and down spines.
Warm and cozy, the stage is heating up.
The miracle is coming to life.
Each performer having their turn.
Bringing to light what has been covered in a cold, white blanket.
Summoning from their breast a song of love and life.
Awakening, little by little, the bearer of life.
Come and dance your dance.
Give us the gift of your presence.
Dance little light of Heaven.
Set your toes on this stage before the shroud of night threatens.
The little miracle has come.
Dancing, spreading her arms wide.
Giving warmth to the world.
Silence…
A loud applause rises through the world.
She is here.
The flowers bloom.
The warm sun has reached her arms out.
The mountains shake off the bitter cold.
Spring is here.
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:29 am
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:36 am
There was silence as I awaited my first reader. Waiting anxiously for them.
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 9:01 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 7:34 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 7:35 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 7:36 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 7:37 pm
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Goldinia_Auria_Mistressia
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 10:49 pm
i like it thought i think its 2 long XD i only read half of it but i think its good smile
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 10:37 pm
I am a write myself and have seen many peices of writing. This really had it's own spotlight. I loved the descriptions along with the similes and metaphors. The rythm of it was a little rigid but still flowing. You are a good author. If you progress more in your writing, you will someday become greater than the mind can think of.
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 3:31 pm
XxDevils_Dark_DaughterxX I am a write myself and have seen many peices of writing. This really had it's own spotlight. I loved the descriptions along with the similes and metaphors. The rythm of it was a little rigid but still flowing. You are a good author. If you progress more in your writing, you will someday become greater than the mind can think of. You'd have to hear it being read. my flow is fine XD And it's not good author, it's good writer.
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 12:06 pm
Thats Great! You are a great Writer.
~Ocean
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:39 pm
Ocean-Moon26 Thats Great! You are a great Writer.
~Ocean Why thank you ^^
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