but id like ur opnion. and maybe some adivice how to improve love poems. im warning u right now. its not my best work at all
my sweet love
My dear kyle
Your simple touch eases me
You lavish me in love
so delicate with care
runing your soft fingers threw my short hair
For love i have found in your supple eyes
It is for you i live rather then die
I imagine at night
Me tight in your arms
Safe from the pain they'v tried to drowned me in from the start
Death shall not kiss me when you are near
For it is your name I hear chanting in my heart
I thrust myself into the darkness of life
Hand in hand we shall stay
standing agesnt all pain in are way
Shareing that one passionet kiss
Forever we stay
My dear kyle
Your simple touch eases me
You lavish me in love
so delicate with care
runing your soft fingers threw my short hair
For love i have found in your supple eyes
It is for you i live rather then die
I imagine at night
Me tight in your arms
Safe from the pain they'v tried to drowned me in from the start
Death shall not kiss me when you are near
For it is your name I hear chanting in my heart
I thrust myself into the darkness of life
Hand in hand we shall stay
standing agesnt all pain in are way
Shareing that one passionet kiss
Forever we stay
