Hi, I'm new to this guild, and I wanted to post this poem up here to see what people think. This is in my opinion, the only good poem I've ever written (and it's still only decent overall). Still, I want to get better at poems so, getting feedback on this one is likely a good way to start.

To my friend across the ocean
Who I have never seen
I doubt you’ll ever read this
But know each word I mean

Though I’ve never seen your face
Or heard you speak a single word
I know nothing could ever replace
Either of them and be preferred

Your voice must be music to ones ears
With a perfect face and smile
To see and hear you I’ll wait all my years
So my love can surpass these endless miles.

But I know that this is but a wishful dream
For even if I cross this dividing sea
To tell how I feel your heart is locked
And alas, I am not worthy of its key