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 Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:12 pm
Show me your best realistic stories! heart
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Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:25 pm
as in.. a real event or.. something that could be a real moment?
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Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:30 pm
Zinth Vein as in.. a real event or.. something that could be a real moment? Sorry, Meant Realistic FICTION heart
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Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:34 pm
sassy_tiffany16 Zinth Vein as in.. a real event or.. something that could be a real moment? Sorry, Meant Realistic FICTION heart haha good good. my life is far too boring XD
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Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:58 pm
The snow did it
Everyone is crowded inside the lunch room, hiding from the snows harsh cold. I try to keep away in a corner but the mass of people makes me so skittish. All of them in their teenaged conversations. I almost get crushes against the wall so I pushed through as rudely as I could to get outside. I get out just to see the only guy who I have never seen even a foot away from someone simply watching the snow fall down. Holding myself from the cold, I go to stand about 4 feet away from him on his side. He doesn’t even look over when he speaks.
“What are you doing out here?” His voice is so startling. I have never heard it before. It’s a smooth deep that reminds me of an older man.
“I don’t like.. People..” I admit, staring at snowflakes fall against the dark green of the weighed down evergreens.
“Ah.. I just hate humanity..” His head tilts to stare at me for so long I felt like I should go away. I almost did. But he spoke again with what sounded like a command.
“Here” His arms open up his jacket and I stare at his Dio band tee, confused. “Come here..” He walks towards me and I have no idea what to do. He wraps his jacket around me, holding me against his burning chest. I huddle there like a small child in a strangers arm. Mostly because that is just how I felt. But suddenly I felt like I belonged here. My face pressed against his chest. His warm breath on my ear. His arms protecting me from the cold. It felt so right. I wanted badly to ask why it felt this way. But I just stayed still and silent. In his sheltering arms.
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Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 3:08 pm
crying so hard! i mean i can do it but it soo lame lol. IM GONNA DO IT! =P
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Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 3:46 pm
I'll give it a shot...
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Raven black hair against a scarlet horizon line. At least, that is what he saw. In fact, she appeared as nothing more than a life-size silhouette in his vision, almost as if she herself did not exist in this place. And yet, he knew she was real. Earlier embraces in the sunlight, with sweet roses parading around them. She had pressed her face to his chest, a light slumber having overcome her, for the sound of his heartbeat had been her lullaby.
But now, why was she here? Why so close to the cliff's unwelcoming ledge? Was she just a frightened coward, or a fearless, thoughtless fighter? Questions snapped at his brain, until they chewed at the right spot, sending him running to his lover, calling the name that held, to him, the sweetest name on his tongue.
"Sarah!"
The girl in question slowly turned from the flames that painted the sky, to stare as her defender hurried to be by her side. Eyes of crystal blue were shaded as the sun stared from behind her. So gentle, so fragile, in need of some support to help her stand.
He finally reached her, and his breath had entirely escaped his lungs. As he panted, she hesitantly reached for his hand. The warmth of her skin, and the softness of it too, it all made his heart feel light and gay.
So, why was she here, all alone? What drove here to such a dangerous peak in her life? His mind began to race, with his evil, past mistakes. Forgetting she was the one who sold him all her trust. Being blind to the love she so effortlessly gave. All because the moment with another felt right. Because the fangs of temptation had pierced his veins, poisoning him with tainted lust for those he left behind. He betrayed her, had returned to feel the lips of an old lover against his. Realization soon hit, and he told the one he loved. She was torn, and tried to make him see her pain. He promised for change, but knew not how empty his words were. The same mistake soon happened again, and again, and again, and again. Five times in total, until he saw the damage.
The one he claimed to love was broken by his own hands.
And she stayed. She chose him instead of the easy way out. He finally learned the error of his ways, and, since then, started the perilous road to finally change. She was all he wanted, lust was finally defeated.
So, why was she here?
As if she could read his mind, she pushed him to a sit, then followed suit next to him, never letting his hand go. And neither did he. He was afraid. Afraid that if he did, he'd let go of his world forever. She turned to look at him, and he saw a portrait of beauty. Beauty, sincerity, and undying truth. A single tear slid down her soft, pale cheek, but a smile claimed her face.
He was confused, until she rested her head on his shoulder.
"It's where we first met... Where we came for our first date as one... Remember?"
Suddenly, the memory of that day returned to him. The laughs, the smiles, all so true, that he knew she was the one. He wrapped his arms around her, watching the sun slowly disappear.
"I remember now... I love you."
He could feel her slowly slipping into sleep, through the fingers of reality.
"I love you, too... Happy one-year anniversary."
He doesn't remember when he fell asleep, but remembers vividly how he did. He was cradling her against him, protecting her from the disasters of the world.
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Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 4:14 pm
Quiet_Demonic_Panda I'll give it a shot...
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Raven black hair against a scarlet horizon line. At least, that is what he saw. In fact, she appeared as nothing more than a life-size silhouette in his vision, almost as if she herself did not exist in this place. And yet, he knew she was real. Earlier embraces in the sunlight, with sweet roses parading around them. She had pressed her face to his chest, a light slumber having overcome her, for the sound of his heartbeat had been her lullaby.
But now, why was she here? Why so close to the cliff's unwelcoming ledge? Was she just a frightened coward, or a fearless, thoughtless fighter? Questions snapped at his brain, until they chewed at the right spot, sending him running to his lover, calling the name that held, to him, the sweetest name on his tongue.
"Sarah!"
The girl in question slowly turned from the flames that painted the sky, to stare as her defender hurried to be by her side. Eyes of crystal blue were shaded as the sun stared from behind her. So gentle, so fragile, in need of some support to help her stand.
He finally reached her, and his breath had entirely escaped his lungs. As he panted, she hesitantly reached for his hand. The warmth of her skin, and the softness of it too, it all made his heart feel light and gay.
So, why was she here, all alone? What drove here to such a dangerous peak in her life? His mind began to race, with his evil, past mistakes. Forgetting she was the one who sold him all her trust. Being blind to the love she so effortlessly gave. All because the moment with another felt right. Because the fangs of temptation had pierced his veins, poisoning him with tainted lust for those he left behind. He betrayed her, had returned to feel the lips of an old lover against his. Realization soon hit, and he told the one he loved. She was torn, and tried to make him see her pain. He promised for change, but knew not how empty his words were. The same mistake soon happened again, and again, and again, and again. Five times in total, until he saw the damage.
The one he claimed to love was broken by his own hands.
And she stayed. She chose him instead of the easy way out. He finally learned the error of his ways, and, since then, started the perilous road to finally change. She was all he wanted, lust was finally defeated.
So, why was she here?
As if she could read his mind, she pushed him to a sit, then followed suit next to him, never letting his hand go. And neither did he. He was afraid. Afraid that if he did, he'd let go of his world forever. She turned to look at him, and he saw a portrait of beauty. Beauty, sincerity, and undying truth. A single tear slid down her soft, pale cheek, but a smile claimed her face.
He was confused, until she rested her head on his shoulder.
"It's where we first met... Where we came for our first date as one... Remember?"
Suddenly, the memory of that day returned to him. The laughs, the smiles, all so true, that he knew she was the one. He wrapped his arms around her, watching the sun slowly disappear.
"I remember now... I love you."
He could feel her slowly slipping into sleep, through the fingers of reality.
"I love you, too... Happy one-year anniversary."
He doesn't remember when he fell asleep, but remembers vividly how he did. He was cradling her against him, protecting her from the disasters of the world. WOW!
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Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 4:25 pm
^^" I think I got a little carried away.
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