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PostPosted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 4:40 am


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:36 pm


Name: Jay

Age: 20

Info on him: He is Estella's best friend.

Pic: He has black hair and red eyes, but with blue colored contacts. He is tallish and muscular, quite good looking.

Eye color: Redish gold

Weapon of choice: Duel swords and daggers, sometimes poisoned, but prefers his fists

Other info: He used to have a crush on Estella, but when she left for the forest, his crush slowly died down back to best friends. He is also the carrier of the map and a xxi.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:46 pm


James sat at the bar in his town's pub. He drank down a jug of ale' and let the remaining ale' in the jub drip down his face. He angrily wiped it away and slammed it down onto the bar surface. "More." He demanded, his breath already stinking with the scent of alchoholic drink. The bartender shook his head.
"You've had enough James."
James muttered beneath his breath and stood from the table, slamming a fist down on the counter.
"You will not get anymore." The bartender sneered, "I respect you enough to stop you from making a fool of yourself."
"Fine!" James walked out of the pub nearly lop-sided, grumbling. He was not in a good mood. Having lost his fiancee to another, and receiving a bitter letter from his sister that lived in the forest. Words of hatred came in that letter, nothing of missing him at all.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:54 pm


Jay walked up to James. "Hey James, I need to talk to you for a minute," he said, steadying him from toppling over.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:58 pm


"Speak quickly, Jay." He said in a drunken slur. "And, i hope its not more... bad news." He closed his eyes tight and groaned in pain. He had drank too much.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:04 pm


Jay sighed. "Well, firstly you might wanna sit. You don't wanna get yourself hurt. Second, there are some guys after you and Estella, and they want the map, too..."

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:11 pm


"Nonsense." He pushed jay's arm away. "That's impossible." He said in another slur and collapsed to the ground. "No one else... knows about that map." He forced himself to dizzily stand, unable to keep good balance.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:13 pm


Jay shrugged. "Well, apparenly these guys do... and... your father... is leading them." He looked down and helped James keep standing.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:18 pm


"Our father, Ha!" James chuckled drunkenly and angrily, "Our father! We have never even... met him!" He scowled. "You're out of your mind!"
PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:26 pm


"Well, apparently he knows of you and the map," Jay commented, totally calm over James' rambunctious, drunken state.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:53 pm


"And if he does? What then, jay?" He finally sat himself down on a corner of a building. "What's your point? Have you come to have me drown in my lousy day?" He glared.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 6:20 pm


Jay crossed his arms over his chest and glared back. "Look, I don't care what you do with the information. But if you get attacked because your a** of a father comes with his crew and attacks you, don't come crying to me." He held up his hands in surrender and turned around. "Now do you want to come give you sister a peice of your mind with me or what?" He turned around and gave him a knowing look. "You guys are gonna have to get over the fact that even though you guys look different." He sighed and remembered how he had been with them when they were like best friends, always playing together, the three of them. He was there the day Estella left to the forest, swearing her hate on James. "Look, I'm just as hurt as you are that Estella just left. But can't you sober yourself up and at least hear me out?" He asked.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 3:22 pm


James Shook his head, "Your shouting is giving me a headache." He muttered, not paying attention to what he was saying. He was not aware of what jay was talking about.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 3:31 pm


Jay put a head to his forehead and sighed. "You know what? I'm tired of your attitude. You can deal with this on your own for all I care," he said, turning and going out to the forest. "Well, I should have tried Estella first..." he muttered.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 3:48 pm


James fell asleep in his drunken state on the corner, waking up the next morning to find a crowd of people staring at him and water splashed onto his face.
"Good to finally see you awake, James." The leader of the crowd mocked, narrowing his eyes. He picked James up by the collar of his shirt and James coughed, still not entirely awake. Jame's eyes widened when he spotted a knife in the man's other hand. "Where's the map?"
"And you are who, exactly?" James narrowed his eyes.
"The reaper." The man evilly smirked.
"Right. And I'm a sparrow." James smirked back at him, and the man stared, laughing abruptly. Then out of nowhere turned James into an eagle, stabbing the man's eye with his claws. "Sorry about that, did I say sparrow? I meant a bird of prey..." He then flew away leaving the man cursing while in pain. Arrows flew at James and he flew side to side, avoiding them. What was it Jay had said? Oh right, they were being hunted. He scowled, worrying about his sister in the forest, and flying to her location.
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