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Zenally

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 1:22 am


Well, I realized that I had yet to post my art here! so here's the first picture. It's certainly not my bet work, but feel free to critique it.

From now on, all my art will be posted in my DA account! I haven't finished posting all my art, but it's coming slowly but surely. I've done quite a bit that I haven't posted here, so please go to the link below now that I've taken my art off this page. Feel free to post critiques here or there!

Link -----> http://zenally.deviantart.com/
PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 12:33 pm


that looks cool. ^^ good job xDDD

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 11:09 pm


Hmm,sure,i'll hand you a critique ^o^

Head & Face:
The nose and mouth should generally be higher up on the face.
The nose usually would be almost directly below the far eye and the mouth right under it.
The ear should be x2 bigger and placed closer to the near eye.
The back of the head should be larger.

Shoulders:You should accentuate a more "curvaceous" hint at the shoulders. It looks straight at stiff,like a man's shoulders. Have the shoulder curve slightly more downward ,hinting a graceful female form.

Breasts: They are mismatched,but you probably noticed that already. o^o
Also,place them slightly higher up on the figure.

Arms:Study the structure and shape of the arms. They're a bit mitered and straight.

Neck:Make it slightly larger.
The clavicles (those lines above the chest and below the neck) should be just under the neck.

Nice work,i'd love to see the rest of your stuff. ^^
Hope this helps lots!

Hope this helps ^^
PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2011 12:32 pm


OMG I suffered through the same stuff! Only a girl had to tell me that it was her locker that I was trying to break into. lol

The Haruist
Hmm,sure,i'll hand you a critique ^o^

Head & Face:
The nose and mouth should generally be higher up on the face.
The nose usually would be almost directly below the far eye and the mouth right under it.
The ear should be x2 bigger and placed closer to the near eye.
The back of the head should be larger.

Shoulders:You should accentuate a more "curvaceous" hint at the shoulders. It looks straight at stiff,like a man's shoulders. Have the shoulder curve slightly more downward ,hinting a graceful female form.

Breasts: They are mismatched,but you probably noticed that already. o^o
Also,place them slightly higher up on the figure.

Arms:Study the structure and shape of the arms. They're a bit mitered and straight.

Neck:Make it slightly larger.
The clavicles (those lines above the chest and below the neck) should be just under the neck.

Nice work,i'd love to see the rest of your stuff. ^^
Hope this helps lots!

Hope this helps ^^


WHOA! You know your stuff. I'm looking forward to your critiques when I post my art, if you will! Can't wait! xP

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 10:47 am


you have just been watched....
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 6:00 pm


great art! just need to focus now on the head, but youll do fine!

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 31, 2011 11:00 pm


Wow. Nice artwork! I even see the one you did for my art contest one time. lol ^^
PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 3:03 am


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Wow. Nice artwork! I even see the one you did for my art contest one time. lol ^^


Eh, yes, I generally post most of what I draw. And thank you! ^w^

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