Hmm,sure,i'll hand you a critique ^o^
Head & Face:
The nose and mouth should generally be higher up on the face.
The nose usually would be almost directly below the far eye and the mouth right under it.
The ear should be x2 bigger and placed closer to the near eye.
The back of the head should be larger.
Shoulders:You should accentuate a more "curvaceous" hint at the shoulders. It looks straight at stiff,like a man's shoulders. Have the shoulder curve slightly more downward ,hinting a graceful female form.
Breasts: They are mismatched,but you probably noticed that already. o^o
Also,place them slightly higher up on the figure.
Arms:Study the structure and shape of the arms. They're a bit mitered and straight.
Neck:Make it slightly larger.
The clavicles (those lines above the chest and below the neck) should be just under the neck.
Nice work,i'd love to see the rest of your stuff. ^^
Hope this helps lots!
Hope this helps ^^
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