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 Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 4:17 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 4:43 pm
Question: Do we PM the story to you or post it in this forum?
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Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 5:01 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:15 pm
Is it like a biography, or a fictional story?
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Berryclaw101 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:16 pm
Berryclaw101 Is it like a biography, or a fictional story? fictional story.
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:18 pm
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Berryclaw101 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2011 9:25 pm
She lay there on the bed giving birth to the little girl she was soon to have . The father sits in the chair next to the woman holds her hands and crys aloud hopeing the baby and the woman would be okay . Hours pass the soon to be father was now a father ! He picked up the baby carefuly and sayed ill name you bellana and he smiles and softly kissis the baby . He soon looks down to see his wife is dead ! He lays the baby next to her softly and picks up the body and holds it close and crys and the tears start to fall on his wifes body . The baby crys he lays th wife gently down and picks up the baby and some how the baby crys out moma , and the father says yes thats your moma and allways will be your moma he kissis the womans forehead and says good bye and walks out of the room with the baby and the baby keeps crying moma moma and the father says no moma cant come with us soon you will meet her in a bettwer place ..........
thats all i have so far please comint thank you
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Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 8:10 am
Run just run! I have to get out of here! Her long, scratched up, bruised legs moved quickly and stealthaly through out the woods. Jump over a log, dodge a tree limb, duck underneath a fallen tree. Her movements were quick and nimble, but not fast enough. The beast was catching up.
"Run run run, as fast as you can, I'll catch you you little brat!" A deep rumbling voice ripped through the forest air. This one can talk?! There was a woosh of air and she was hit flying through the night. She hit the ground with a loud crash and stumbled to her feet. The girl could barely breath and she was tired, so so tired.
She turned and looked up at the Beast. Red eyes, blood lust, a craving to kill lingered in those dark eyes. It wants to kill me, she thought. It wants to end my life....This to her was a surprise. She had never done anything to it. She had never threatened it or it's family. To kill was simply orders from a higher up. It wanted to kill her, it didn't need a reason, it didn't need to ask why. to kill came simply that to the creature - a part of life.
Tears welled up in her one blue eye and one green. A breeze shifted her hair to one side. "Have you stopped little brat?" the demon asked. "have you stopped so I can bring you back home and let you suffer?"
Alice looked at the beast with cold, hard, eyes. "I will not go back there," she said with a steady voice. "I will not go back to that hell!" She lungged at the big creature. Alice landed on it's back and the demon began to buck and growl and spit. She held onto a tuft of fur that gathered at the back of the demons neck and she clung to it. She reached her hand out and a bundle of thorny vines shot out of her hand and into the demons neck. It wimpered and slammed alice into a tree and she fell off, her vines snapping. Blood gushed out of the demons neck, she had hit a small artery. Blood flowed down her forhead and cheek and plopped onto the green grass around her. The demon howled with rage and Alice stumpled to her feet and lungged again this time attacking the demon's front leg. With a slash of her sharp claws...the demon only had three legs now and he fell his large head hitting the ground. Alice jumped onto his head and looked him in the eyes. "Run home, run on back like the obeidiant little dog you are. Run on home and tell your master that Alice is free and that she is going to come back eager for revange."
She hopped off the demon and ran into the woods again hopping from tree limb to tree limb this time. "That was nice," said a voice behind her. She slid to a stop on one limb. "Jason," she said breathless. "Thank god your alright!" Jason, a vampire, nodded his head slowly. He had a rather large cut on his arm. Alice gasped and ripped a piece of her shirt off and began to bandage it. "Thank you for defending me back there..."
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Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 8:34 am
So far so good!! KnowingHate Run just run! I have to get out of here! Her long, scratched up, bruised legs moved quickly and stealthaly through out the woods. Jump over a log, dodge a tree limb, duck underneath a fallen tree. Her movements were quick and nimble, but not fast enough. The beast was catching up. "Run run run, as fast as you can, I'll catch you you little brat!" A deep rumbling voice ripped through the forest air. This one can talk?! There was a woosh of air and she was hit flying through the night. She hit the ground with a loud crash and stumbled to her feet. The girl could barely breath and she was tired, so so tired. She turned and looked up at the Beast. Red eyes, blood lust, a craving to kill lingered in those dark eyes. It wants to kill me, she thought. It wants to end my life....This to her was a surprise. She had never done anything to it. She had never threatened it or it's family. To kill was simply orders from a higher up. It wanted to kill her, it didn't need a reason, it didn't need to ask why. to kill came simply that to the creature - a part of life. Tears welled up in her one blue eye and one green. A breeze shifted her hair to one side. "Have you stopped little brat?" the demon asked. "have you stopped so I can bring you back home and let you suffer?" Alice looked at the beast with cold, hard, eyes. "I will not go back there," she said with a steady voice. "I will not go back to that hell!" She lungged at the big creature. ((To be edited and added to))
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Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 8:36 am
LadyEstellaRose So far so good!! KnowingHate Run just run! I have to get out of here! Her long, scratched up, bruised legs moved quickly and stealthaly through out the woods. Jump over a log, dodge a tree limb, duck underneath a fallen tree. Her movements were quick and nimble, but not fast enough. The beast was catching up. "Run run run, as fast as you can, I'll catch you you little brat!" A deep rumbling voice ripped through the forest air. This one can talk?! There was a woosh of air and she was hit flying through the night. She hit the ground with a loud crash and stumbled to her feet. The girl could barely breath and she was tired, so so tired. She turned and looked up at the Beast. Red eyes, blood lust, a craving to kill lingered in those dark eyes. It wants to kill me, she thought. It wants to end my life....This to her was a surprise. She had never done anything to it. She had never threatened it or it's family. To kill was simply orders from a higher up. It wanted to kill her, it didn't need a reason, it didn't need to ask why. to kill came simply that to the creature - a part of life. Tears welled up in her one blue eye and one green. A breeze shifted her hair to one side. "Have you stopped little brat?" the demon asked. "have you stopped so I can bring you back home and let you suffer?" Alice looked at the beast with cold, hard, eyes. "I will not go back there," she said with a steady voice. "I will not go back to that hell!" She lungged at the big creature. ((To be edited and added to)) Hehee thanks sweatdrop
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