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 Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 11:59 am
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-72.jpg
Badly in need of critique!
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-65.jpg
Two of my male oc's ^^
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-56.jpg
another oc of mine
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-51.jpg
Picture of all three of them, not super great sweatdrop
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-62.jpg
I did it for part on an English assignment ^^
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Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 3:15 pm
#1) The muscles in the back and legs need more detail. The feet are not proportionate. I would look at an anatomy book because that is the only thing wrong enough to make someone think it is not a great drawing. smile
#2) Thee feet proportion, characteristics of the face are in the wrong place, hand proportion, Muscles in the legs and chest need detail, and the neck and head are too small. All that is wrong is proportion and anatomy. ^o^
#3) He's too skinny, even if he does exercise he would not be that skinny unless he had an eating disorder. Again proportion.
#4) First guy's left arm looks like another persons, second guys hand on his knee should look like where it's arm isn't that straight and the muscles would strain a bit. Third guy it is just the arms aren't muscle detailed even through the shirt their may be a little bit of a bump where the muscle flexes. wink
#5) I think the cross would look better three dimensional but that is just my opinion because it looks a little flat. I think you do amazingly good with realistic inanimate objects. smile
So proportion, anatomy (Muscle detail mostly), and maybe a little 3-D affect on the objects wouldn't hurt, maybe some shading. Other than that you are an amazing artist keep trying! My list would be a lot longer than yours trust me I am not that good at art. X3
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Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 7:17 pm
Thanks ^^
yeah, muscles are something I still need to figure out fully.
Also, oh no! My poor oc is dying of starvation!
xd
I will have to figure out how to make the cross look 3-D. Honestly I wasnt sure how to shade the cross.
I like how you make a little list of my big problems xd
Dont put yourself down like that though. Like you said, just keep trying wink
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Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 5:49 am
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