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Hell On God's Ground

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 2:24 pm


Hell On God's Grounds
Sequel to "God's Grace"

Decided to make this a whole series at the end of which ill put all of them into a single journal entry

In this poem you will read more about the court trial; The....passing from Earth to Heaven



I Smile a devilish smile
He was in denial
At the ending of my trial
He fought and roared
All were futile

Hell was a savior
My behavior was un-called for
They put me in Heaven as a torture
For both me and God
The court applaud
Me and his sentence had began
They gave it to us only
Cause they can
They said it would only last an eternity
To Infinity and beyond
They cried

They took us to a place
On Earth where we'll face
Our punishment
There was a stair well
There we made our descent
Up towards Heaven

The path was lonesome
The path was long
How long would it take to arrive at my new "home"
We arrived at the gate
My new life long gone
PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 12:59 am


Such deep words and very touching. This poem really does bring awareness in a way.

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