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PostPosted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 6:13 pm


They put me in the corner
As each day passes
I'm further away from the public
They come in the masses
Just to kick me when I'm down

They never do any-thing

I'm in the corner in 3rd Person
I know I'm lower then a peasant
I Know I'm not a king
I know I won't avail
But un-like the rest of you all
I still try only to fail

I'm in the corner
In 3rd person
I try to make it be better
But to my horror it only worsens
I'm not the problem
But they blame it all on me
I try to be the hero but I'm only the victim
They see with their eyes not their head
I'm better of dead
But in 3rd person I can see it all
I can't stall it anymore
They'll all die
Not knowing I tried
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 12:43 am


This poem is strong! I know the feeling of this situation.

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Poetry: Sorrow/Sadness/Forgivness

 
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