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 Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:13 pm
I can close my eyes too, can’t I?
I can shut them tight-
I can block it out
And never see
What is in front of me-
Watching,
Waiting…
I can ignore it.
I don’t have to see…
It is calling,
Call
Llliiinnnnnnnnggggggggggggg
Out to me softly,
I can hear it-
Given voice and form,
It reaches to touch me,
And I can feel it hold me,
Softly caressing me
It will be juuuuuussssss
Ttt fiiiiiiinnnnnnnneeeeee…..
But I can’t belive it-
If I can’t see it,
If I don’t believe it,
It can’t exist.
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Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 5:33 pm
How... unusual.
It held my interest, I found it interesting. My only question is about the
"Call
Lllllliiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnngggg"
and the
"jusssssssssssssssssss
ttt finnnnnneeeee"
and the long stretched-out words split into different lines like that.
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:28 pm
I actually wrote it to be spoken- I thought I should write it out the way it should be spoken.
If you read it aloud, I think it sounds right, you know, drawing out the sounds on the words?
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