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You really got the character traits of everybody perfectly. Everything that they said is something I can imagine Oda making them say. you know? But the pirate fighters name is pierre right? I dont know if that was such a good name choice because the old man god from sky island his pet bird horse thing's name was pierre and i don't know if the name is okay because it was used before but thats just me.
The fighting kind of reminds me of when they fought the CP9
Its interesting though. It was great how Zoro was suspicious but maybe you should add a joke with zoro getting lost or something with his directional skills since thats an ongoing pun and i love it when he gets lost, so funny
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