Welcome to Gaia! ::

-{ A Grand Adventure!}- (Accepting)

Back to Guilds

A One Piece Rp Guild 

Tags: Role Play, One Piece, Pirate, Anime, Treasure 

Reply RP Profiles
Misteor

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Assassiinx

Familiar Lunatic

PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 8:36 pm



[align=center][img]http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w48/Sakuraixox/Boo.jpg[/img][/align]
[color=gray][/color]

Pirate/Revolutionary: Pirate
Name: Misteor
Age: 23
Sex: Male
Description: User Image
Height: 5'9
Weight: 150
Class: Unknown
Bio: Misteor has kept to himself watching the world bend and twist through time. All the while he stayed protecting his own home and town from any and all threats. His greatest strength has always been his ability to create a plan to kill his opponent. Despite the fact he enjoys assassinating a fight is something he enjoys more especially when he can use each of his abilities to their fullest.
Weapon of choice:Haki, Throwing needles, hidden blades, wire
Crew Name: Has none
Bounty:
Fruit: Arashi Arashi no Mi (Storm Storm fruit):
Ability: This fruit grants the user the ability to create, control, and become a storm cloud/Fog at will. The user can generate clouds or Fog from his body, allowing him to regulate the weather in a 1 mile radius around him. As a byproduct of this ability, the user can see through thick fog or heavy storms as if it weren't there. The user can also control existing clouds. Special Moves:
After math~Once hit by a weapon infused with his Haki each weapon he throws will be practically drawn to the spot of which the first hit.
Web~ Through throwing dozens of knives all about each connected by a small piano like wire he can then harden the strings with a high level of Haki and trap or even kill anyone within the web
Toxin~ A small amount of toxins mixed into certain weapons of which cause a slight loss of eye sight which becomes greater as more of the toxin coated weapons hit.
Dead~ A technique of which allows Misteor to stop his heart beat completely for a certain period of time which cancels out his presence completely even to a very well skilled haki user. Lasts 5rpc posts
Silence~ A passive special that allows Misteors foot steps and heart beat to be practically unheard.
Dark Step~ It is a deadly technique used in critical situations to create a succession of images on the retina, creating an illusion with a total absence of noise during the movement.Can be used freely as well
After image~ through a series of extremely fast movements after images of himself begin to appear all around in the places he's been.
~Dense fog~ With his devil fruit Misteor creates a dense fog of which can be intoxicating as well as disrupt electronic devices
~Riding cloud~ Misteor creates a single cloud large enough for him to sit or lay on of which can fly high in the sky. With his control of wind gusts he can travel the seas from high above safe from the water.
~Thunders boom~ Misteor creates two dark rain clouds in his hands and rubs them together creating loud ear shattering thunder.
~Lightning~ A technique similar to thunders boom only the friction of the clouds shoots out large sparks of lightning containing perfect precision.
~Cloud clones~Misteor creates clouds and shapes them up to look just like himself although they can only move and are easily destroyed.
~
PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 8:41 pm


Everything seems alright, but Haki isn't really a special move since almost all the big dogs have Haki. That would be consider a "Other Ability", special is like any special attack your characters make, whether it's defense or offense. If you need examples look at some of the profiles ;3

Fenix Requiem


Kuro Masuku
Captain

4,150 Points
  • Citizen 200
  • Forum Dabbler 200
  • Signature Look 250
PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 8:49 pm


Yeah, like Sushiie said, Haki and Geppou are abilities, not attack. Make up some assassination kind of moves as your special moves.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 8:54 pm


Okay I fixed it thanks for the tips too ^^

Assassiinx

Familiar Lunatic


Fenix Requiem

PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 8:58 pm


If there's any sort of moves you need help in let us know! One Piece Wikia have information too.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:00 pm


L e S u s h ii e
If there's any sort of moves you need help in let us know! One Piece Wikia have information too.
alright! so uhm is he approved?

Assassiinx

Familiar Lunatic


Fenix Requiem

PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:10 pm


Approved! But add in a time limit of your "Dead" ability.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:12 pm


L e S u s h ii e
Approved! But add in a time limit of your "Dead" ability.
how long do you think is good? O.O

Assassiinx

Familiar Lunatic


Fenix Requiem

PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:22 pm


Hmm how about four of you rpc's posts?
Reply
RP Profiles

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum
//
//

// //

Have an account? Login Now!

//
//