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 Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 4:18 pm
I have no music with this yet, but I think it is the piece I wanna use for a first song for me. Though I want to see what people think about it, please and thank you!
Lost further in the storm, cry it out,
Just wander around to think it through.
Keep your composure, figure it out,
Don't lose yourself before you fall through.
In a daze behind the sun,
Vulgar words tells you to run.
Take it in, nothing stops changing,
Let it out, nothing stops to change,
When the minutes decide to consume you,
Breathe it in and wait it out.
Losing yourself further in storm,
Behind the sun you must think it through,
When the air starts to change and deform,
All you can do is lose yourself and fall through.
In a daze behind the sun,
Vulgar words tells you to run.
Take it in, nothing stops changing,
Let it out, nothing stops to change,
When the minutes decide to consume you,
Breathe it in and wait it out.
Behind the sun, wandering in thoughts,
As minutes change to hours,
They consume you endlessly in thoughts,
Leaving you to fall from higher powers.
Leaving you lost in the storm,
That carries so much of you desire,
To consume you in minutes before hours,
Leaving you to fall from higher powers.
Take it in, nothing stops changing,
Let it out, nothing stops to change,
When the minutes decide to consume you,
Breathe it in and wait it out.
Take it in, let it out...
Breathe it in, wait it out...
Take it in, let it out...
Breathe it in, wait it out..
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You may suggest song titles, and I will choose what I like ^.^ Thank you!
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Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 4:26 pm
Hm, well I will try my best to help you find a title x3
Why don't you try using a line from this song?
Here are some I thought about:
Change
Take it in
Let it out
Nothing stops to change
Or you could even try something with storm in the title.
I mean, it is what your song is about lol.
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:33 pm
True, or maybe I could name it something it doesn't say in the poetry... Just like how Evanescence named their song "My Immortal" and she doesn't say "My immortal" in any of the verses... The same thing with Simple Plan and their song "Untitled." That's the best way I can explain what I mean. Though eventually I'll figure out what I could call it.
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