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Pure Intentions with a Price

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 5:02 am


“Pure Intentions with a Price”
By Sarah aka Vampire
January 27, 2010


A fragile heart was in my hands
With much hesitation and thought
I broke it unintentionally
A crime I have been a victim of myself
Guilty as charged
I inflicted the same pain on someone else
I honestly didn’t mean to hurt him

Everyone has the right to be happy
I might not be everyone
But I still have the exact same right
As selfish as it is
I sacrificed his love for my happiness
A destination every human tries to reach
Two people have to be completely happy
For a relationship to work out
He loved me but I didn’t feel a spark

It broke my heart to break his
I know how he feels
The feeling of love torn from you
As it spills out from the middle of your heart
While it breaks in two
Feels like a piece of your soul
Has been ripped from you

My intentions were pure
But guilt haunts me as
The price I paid was at high stakes
Now I learned that sometimes
The price of happiness means
Taking it from someone else


-What do you think?
PostPosted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 3:30 pm


" Feels like a piece of your soul
Has been ripped from you "

My favorite line ^

Very nice.
I can agree with it completely.

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Broken_Angel_xXx
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 3:27 pm


lol thanks ^_^
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Poetry: Death/Pain/Rejection/Darkness

 
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