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Poetry: Death/Pain/Rejection/Darkness

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Evelyn Kenndy

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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 3:00 pm

The taste of death on my lips
The darkness slowly consuming me
The metalic liquid in my throat
Sounds of tearing fill my ears
My heart slowly beating to a halt
A flash of white covers my eyes
Falling in a pit of nothingness
To stay in my internal resting place

Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 4:43 am

great poem! what made u write this?

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Evelyn Kenndy

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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 12:36 pm

Thank you. I really don't know what made me write this I just did during exams. (Since you have to wait an hour and a half before they let you leave)

Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 3:23 pm

Wow, that's actually beautiful
So short yet so amazingly powerful
I can relate to this poem, not really saying why
But, anyways it's amazing. Good job.

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Evelyn Kenndy

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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 3:37 pm

Thank you very much blaugh

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