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Poetry: Death/Pain/Rejection/Darkness

Hatred

Fire of the Candle

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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 1:01 am

Those three words hurt many bad,
All I know is it drove me mad,
For to think your were my friend,
Until that message you send,
You've faked our friendship for years,
When I read your words my eyes were filled with tears,
Will those words leave my mind soon?
Why did you write to me "I HATE YOU!"

Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 4:46 am

the wording seems a little odd but its still good! i know how you felt writing that poem, a similar thing happened to me a few years ago

Broken_Angel_xXx
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ReichenFeels

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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 3:35 pm

Agreed to the first part.
And yeah, somehting similar happened to me to but it was about 6 years ago.

Sarah aka Vampire Girl

the wording seems a little odd but its still good! i know how you felt writing that poem, a similar thing happened to me a few years ago

Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 11:16 pm

Happened between me and a dear friend. Yes the wording is odd. That's my style mrgreen .

Fire of the Candle

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