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Phenom-Jak

Demonic Sentai

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 4:31 pm


Username
Phenom-Of-Destruction

Wrestler Name
Jak

Nickname
The Dark Angel

Gender
Female

Sexuality
Straight

Size
Middleweight

Height
6'0"

Weight
131 lbs.

Race
White

Nationality
American

Style
Brawler
Hardcore

Face Gimmick
Punk/Goth

Heel Gimmick
Sadistic, a bit insane

Entrance Music
"Dead Man Walking" by Bloodsimple

Born
Dec. 6, 1991

Commonly Used Moves
Leg Drop
Suicide Dive
Drop Kick
Big Boot
Legsweep
Rolling Kick
Clothesline

Signature Moves
Chokeslam
Throat Thrust
Guillotine Drop

Finishers
Gravedigger Piledriver (Sitout belly-to-belly piledriver)
Dead End Drop (Rolling fireman's carry slam)
Fall From Grace (High-angle senton bomb)

Appearance
User Image
(In-ring)
User Image
(Entrance/Backstage)
User Image
(Promo)
User Image
(Civilian)

Tag Teams and Stables
Immortal (TTW)

Championships Held
N/A

Other Awards and Achievements
N/A

Biography
(in progress)

Other Roles
N/A

Ally(s)
Raven (Scott Raven Levy)

Rival(s)
Issabell (Issabell Loves You)

Entrance
*lights dim and a guitar rift starts*
-Buuuuurn it down!-
*Jak walks out with her hood up and head down*
-It's a production of fear-
-Take another look isn't it clear-

*stops at the top of the ramp and looks up with a blank look on her face*
-It's all so sadistic, annihilistic, it's so f*cking vicious!-
*starts to make her way to the ring*
-It's getting harder to feel for all the people I kill-
-No time to cry for those who died-

*stops in front of the ring, grabs the top rope and pulls herself up onto the apron*
-They stay unjustified!-
*jumps over the top rope into the ring*
-Through these eyes I see the catastrophe lying in my wake-
*pulls down the hood from her head*
-Voices inside my mind shiver my spine-
-I am not ashamed!-

*removes her hoodie and tosses it outside the ring*
-Look at me, I'm a dead man walking-
-Put another nail in the coffin-
-On the hill I see the bodies burning-
-Buuuurn it down!-

*lights turn back to normal and theme fades*
*turns towards the entrance, crosses her arms, and waits for her opponent*

Personality
Humble or Egotistical?
Generous or Selfish?
Compassionate or Ruthless?
Optimistic or Pessimistic?
Naïve or Manipulative?
Dependable or Flaky?
Social or Antisocial?
Loyal or Mercenary?
Timid or Bold?
Hesitant or Driven?
PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 5:47 pm


Maybe consider splitting your finishers up a little and adding a few signature moves with some of your finishers to that list.

Take out your numbered stats list, it's kinda pointless right now especially for a beginner. Trust me on this.

Other than that looks interesting, a female Undertaker of sorts.

Yukari Clepsydra
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Phenom-Jak

Demonic Sentai

29,050 Points
  • Hotblooded Hero 50
  • Hellraiser 500
PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:12 pm


Yukari Clepsydra
Maybe consider splitting your finishers up a little and adding a few signature moves with some of your finishers to that list.

Take out your numbered stats list, it's kinda pointless right now especially for a beginner. Trust me on this.

Other than that looks interesting, a female Undertaker of sorts.


Thanks for the advice. I'll fix it.
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