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KnowingHate

PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 6:33 am


Into:
We cannot die.
We cannot get sick.
We do not grow old,
but forever young.
We don't need food,
or water.
We don't need humans,
we're immortal.

In a world a bit stranger then the world we know theres a fountain. Whomever drinks from it becomes forever immortal. These few immortals live together at "The end of the World".

Setting:
ForeverWorld is the name of this strange place. "The End of the World" is where immortals reside.

Idea of the Story:
A human fights to find the Immortal's Fountain. She needs to bring it back to her dieing mother, for it can also heal anything. When she gets there she is put to the test by the three great immortals: Whitney, Armeer, and (YOU!)

Immortal
~~~~~~~~~~
Name:
Age (The actual hundreds of years):
Frozen Age (The age you froze yourself at):
Bio (INclude why you became immortal):
Personality:
Picture:


My Character

Human
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Name: Sasuka
Age: 16
Bio: All her life Sasuka watched as her village died around her from disese. She never cought anything not even a cold, but she often went and cared for the sick and dieing. There were plenty of oppertunities for her to get sick yet she never did. Soon her mother fell ill. Sasuka couldnt take it any longer, so she went on the gruesom search to find the "Immortal Fountain". The village always called her family the Helping witches because they could make brews for just about anything and they were close to nature.
Personality: Kind and gentle hard working and close to nature.
Picture: User Image
PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:35 am


Immortal
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Name: Suki
Age (The actual hundreds of years): 1072
Frozen Age (The age you froze yourself at): 16
Bio (INclude why you became immortal): When Suki was 16 she was very very sick. She would have just 1 month to live. Thats why she went to search for the Immortal's Fountain. But because she hadn't a family she decided to live forever with the immortals
Personality: She is sometimes kind and sometimes cold.
Picture:User Image

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KnowingHate

PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:40 am


~Start~
"Mother, I'll be back soon, I promise! Elenor will watch over you," Sasuka said, her mother just nodded. "I don't..aprove of this, my love," she said fraily. Setsuna nodded. "I know mother....but I don't want anybody else to die here!" With that Setsuna stepped out of the house and began to walk away from her home.
Whitney frowned as she held the crystal ball. "Another one is coming my family...What should we do?"
"What is she comming here for what the hell does she need?" Armeer asked loungeing on a couch. "She wants to save her mother and heal her."
Armeer laughed, "Crazy humans, I doubt she can even find her way through the Ferrel Woods." Whitney shrugged. "What do you think we should do Suki?" Whitney asked.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 10:24 am


"Just let her. I don't care if she die or not. For a family member to risk her own life is just stupid. I hate everything . And especially humans like her."Suki said.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 10:43 am


Whitney sighed. "Alright, lets see if she can make it."

Sasuka had made camp for the night and began to eat from what she had brought. Soon after that she fell asleep. In the early morning she got up and traveled till late at night. This continued on for sevrel days and almost a week. "I'll make it a little bit harder for the girl," said Armeer.
One night when Sasuka was walking a band of theives met her at the bridge.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:02 am


Suki was watching her. She was curious if she would fight or cry like a baby. She was sure that she would cry but it could be the opposite .

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:05 am


Setsuna looked at the men who immediatly tried to jump her, but soon they were all on the ground groaning, setsuna barely moved. "You idiots got in my way." She then crossed the bridge. Armeer cursed. "DAMN IT!" Whitney put her hand on his shoulder. "My turn." That night when she went to set up camp her tent was blown away. Then it began to rain. Setsuna cursed and went over to a tree. The tree's branched and leaves began to form a tent over her head. She thanked it and went to prepare dinner.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:13 am


Suki laughed at Armeer .Armeer got angry. His head got red. Suki began to like her. She wasn't a girl who would give up. She remembered her self when she was searching for the Immortal's Fountain.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:26 am


Through out the next two week the Two Immortals attacked her ruthlessly and every test she had past. Whitney sighed. "she has to have some weakness."
"Hey Suki...how about you slip into her dreams and scare her?" Armeer said.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:55 am


"OK. I hope I won't scare her to death,"Suki said smiling evilly. No one came back alive when Suki went in the peoples dreams. She was a horrible person thats why the other Immortals had respect about her.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:57 am


That night Setsuna fell asleep under another tree. It took her awhile but she fell asleep and Whitney grinned as Suki crept into her dreams.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 12:04 pm


Suki sent her her in a lovely place where anything was dead. Suki appeared in a white dress. She was crying with bloody tears and was looking at Setsuna.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 12:05 pm


Setsuna looked up to see Suki. "W-whats wrong?" Setsuna asked reaching out too the girl.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 12:12 pm


"Why did you do this. You killed my brother. My only family member. How could you. Now I don't have anyone. I'm alone."Suki said while coming more and more near Setsuna.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 12:12 pm


Setsuna blinked. "I never killed anyone...What happened?"
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