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 Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2011 11:52 am
Intro:
At a school , a girl promised to her doll that she would come and get her . The doll waited and waited but the girl never came. The doll was so sad that tears began to come out of her blue eyes but the tears were pure blood. The beautiful smiling face of the doll disappeared and a face full with sadness and hate appeared . Every night at 12:00 The doll wake up and kill the first person that she saw.
Setting
The setting is in a school called S.S . Its a school where just rich kids go to study.
Idea of the story:
The doll that left the girl will meet a girl that would look like the girl that promised her to come and get her . She will kill that girl with bloody tears and with an evil smile.
~~Your character~~
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~~My character~~
Name: Azmaria
Age: 114
Creature: Doll
Bio:She was left in that school by her precious master that promised her that she would come and take her .100 years passed and her master never came. She was so full of hate that she swear to kill every one in that school that would come after midnight .
Personality: She is cold and heartless. She loves to see humans screaming and covered with blood.Her eyes turn red when she kills someone.
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 5:54 am
Name: Sasuka Age: 16 Creature (Human, doll): Human Bio: Her parents barely knew she was alive and just payed attention to her 'awsome' little brother. She hated it. So she asked to go to an academy for rich kids. Sasuka was let go and immediatly shipped off to the school in the middle of the semester, not able to wait. Personality: Kind loving and shy. Picture: 
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 10:37 am
In the school S.S the legend of the doll was told everywhere .Some kids that thought that was just a history to hold them coming at school after 12:00 came at night at 11:50. "Hahaha . We will show them that this legend is just a story and nothing more"said one of the students ."I'm a little bit afraid."an other student said hiding after her friend. Finally was 12:00. The students get in the class room where the girl had left her doll. "See nothing else" a student said. "Don't be so rude. You were searching for me weren't you" Azmaria said with a light vice. The students turned back and saw a doll. They began to scream. Azmaria began to kill one student after an other. The students screamed from their pain and Azmaria laughed like crazy. While killing bloody tears came out of her eyes.
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 10:40 am
Sasuka bolted up in bed. She had a terrible nightmare about a doll going around killing people. She looked at her clock. It was early but early enough to start getting ready for school. Sasuka slipped into the uniform and headed downstairs in her apartment to make breakfest. She like having her own place, although it was often quiet she liked it better then home. She grabbed the news paper from the mail slot and opened it up. It read:
STUDENTS KILLED MYSTERIOUSLY IN THE NIGHT
Sasuka read on. "Holy...crap."
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 10:57 am
The killed students were in her school. But she didn't Read it. A doll was found in the class room where the students were killed . Her eyes were covered with blood. It was like the doll has cried.
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:02 am
sasuka frowned. "Weird...." she muttered. "Sorta like in my dream..." she looked up at the clock. "Crap I'm gonna be late if I don't hurry!" She quickly ate breakfest and ran out of her apartment. Sasuka just barely caught the bus that went to her school. Demented doll, huh? she thought.
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:06 am
When Sasuka was about going in her class she saw a bunch of cops. Not a single student was allowed to come in the class room. The doll was siting peaceful on a chair. Sasuka saw the doll a accidentally.
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:12 am
"What a strangely cute doll," Setsuna said. "They think that thing had somthing to do with the murder?"
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:51 am
Suddenly the dolls eyes moved. They looked at Sasukas eyes. The doll smiled. The doll looked just like the doll in Sasukas dreams.
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:54 am
Sasuka jumped. "Holy...crap..it's looking at me. Is..that..the same doll?!" Her eyes widened and she took a step back.
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 12:01 pm
Like this passed hours. All the students were sent home but Sasuka didn't go. She stayed there hiding her self . Azmaria didn't know that there was another person so she just killed the cops." You'll never find out . I will kill every person. I hate humans. They promise something and then they brake it. You are horrible creatures . Just because we are objects don't mean that we don't have feelings." Azmaria said with a sad look.
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 12:04 pm
Sasuka's eyes widened as she saw the cops killed by the same doll. "Wha...t?"
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 12:10 pm
Azmaria heard a voice and said:"Who is there. "She saw around her but nothing was there. Blood was all over the room. It was like in a horror movie. Azmaria began to cry saying:" Why, why didn't you come to get me. I waited so long. It hurts so much."
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 12:11 pm
Setsuna blinked and came out from behind the desk. Her eyes were wide but she unsurely stepped toward the doll.
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 12:18 pm
Azmaria was shocked when that human appeared . "Why did you appeared. You should have stayed there where you where. I will do the same thing with you like I did it at the cops."Azmaria said with a cold look.
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