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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 3:53 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 3:54 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 4:09 pm
Aylen took the last step, placing his hand upon a charred wall that still stood stubbornly. Stubborn like me, he thought. Just like this wall, he wouldn't collapse. "I will keep living. I swear I will. No matter what happens..." the boy's voice choked off. One tear slid down his cheek, leaving a trail for the others to follow. One drop, then another, and another. Two words clung to his silent, grief-stricken sobs. Father, mother. His fists clenched, but his right hand did not leave that wall. The rough texture rubbed against his knuckles. It was the only thing holding him to reality. I will not die. I will live to make you proud!
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Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 1:02 am
By and by, someone picks up on the trail of frozen tears.
An errant shadow hangs far above, aloof, but watchful.
It's not a man, just a memory of a man, an animate body that refuses to die with the rest.
There is nothing emotional to sense from this lingering shade, except for the memory of things long lost, and the residue of pain.
He hovers for a little while, at this place, like a restless ghost passing through.
The boy looks to be in trouble, and it's bitter, bitter cold. But he doesn't intervene with nature....he is barely cognisant of the boy's suffering.
The boy that feels the inner workings of every person's emotions, and the man who doesn't even bother to acknowledge the obvious.... It's no wonder that when they came into contact the reaction was explosive....
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Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 1:22 am
+Frozen twigs crush underfoot as the old man makes his way through the wilderness he calls his home. It's just a nightly walk, routine, to keep the blood flowing through his extremities when the still of winter sets in. He circles around the old overgrown homestead. Homes, like people, decay when the life and purpose leaves them.
He stops to catch his breath, and hears a sound. He looks back at the old ruin of the homestead, his eyes falling upon Aylen.+
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 7:08 am
Ignoring the cold around him, the boy slid to his knees, his legs unable to support the weight of long delayed emotions that rushed into him. Every detail of the freed memory seared itself into the redhead's mind. It should have been dealt with long ago, and he was paying for it now. His were not the only emotions crashing through him; inanimate things retained memories as well. They do not feel them, but humans often attach their sentiments to objects. Aylen felt his mother's horror as the fire headed towards their house, and desperation as she realized there was nothing she could do. He felt his father's helplessness as he watched everything they had worked for burn away. Both of their panicked confusion as they searched for him outside, only to realize he was still inside.
Then his own memory continued the story. He saw his father burst in and bodily throw him from the window. He felt every shard that cut his skin. His mother caught him, then went in after his father. Neither of them would be seen again.
Gasping for breath as the memory abruptly freed its grip on him, he slowly removed his hand from the wall. His hand was covered in crumbling soot, but the boy didn't bother to brush it away. His body and spirit still adjusting to the new maelstrom raging within him, he stood, his face dry.
He had done what he came to do.
Turning around, he caught sight of the man that stood there, watching him. "How long have you been there?" he asked somewhat abruptly. "Er, I mean...that is...nevermind," he muttered. Pushing through the grass once again, he made his way to the main road.
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 11:56 am
+He tries to assess the boy's state of health, tries to see if the kid's half froze to death, or doing all right. It's never easy to offer help to someone who pulls himself up by the bootstraps and refuses to rely on others.+
Not long.
+pulls out a pipe, lights it, and takes long puffs that make white circles in the moonlight.+
Long enough, though.
+As the boy turns and starts to walk away, he says the one thing that he thinks might make him linger a bit longer.+
I knew them, you know. That couple and their little boy. Some of the locals put up three stones on the hillside for them, in memory. If you look up there +he points into the distance+ you can see them, they're overgrown but, still there.
I guess that little boy wouldn't remember me if he saw me again. He was awful young the last time. I was there for his birth, hands cradled under his momma to catch him when she pushed him into the world. I imagine, though, that if I saw him again, I would know him.
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 7:12 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 12:10 am
+The old man smirks right back, and then chuckles, a gritty sound. He looks up to the hillside, his eyes squinting to make out the shapes.+ I'm not going to mourn someone who isn't dead, kid. Got enough people to cry over that actually are.
But, if you want to go up there, I'll walk with you.
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Posted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 12:41 am
He doesn't know why he's still here. He continues to hang there, slowly turning in the nothingness, watching them.
Dorien. ******** Dorien. Well, how much longer can he live?
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Posted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 7:06 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 11:09 pm
Well enough. I've lived over the hill and down the trail since I was littler than you. I make it a point to know my neighbors.
+The old man smells like sage and valley blossoms, and the herbs that grow wild in the wood. Like a part of the forest. His face is leathery and creased from age, but his eyes are a very clear grey. He looks to be in his sixties, but robust for his age, and agile in his movements, his feet quickly and naturally jumping to the easiest places to step as they scale the hill.+
Your mother, she had lovely hair. Bangs fell across her face like wild vines. Always had a very soft smile on her face. Your father, he worked hard, had strong hands. They were real young to have a child to raise. Good, honest people.
+They get to the base of the stones. They're simple markers, chiseled a little by hand tools, possibly by this very man. The weather has stained them, and moss has started to grow on them.+
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Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2006 9:21 am
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Posted: Mon Feb 06, 2006 6:44 pm
Settles just above the gravestones, two graves full, and one empty. He still doesn't know why, but he finds the exchange morbidly amusing. He continues to watch like a perched carrion bird.
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Posted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 8:32 pm
His moon shadow falls just between the boy's stone and the parent stones. He brushes some moss and debris from the stone faces, and stands there silently for a good little while.
Then he looks down to Aylen. "Flowers. I'd say, flowers are long overdue. It just doesn't seem right, does it? To mark the resting place of somebody who's still in control of his destiny?" He grins a little.
"I don't know why some people live as long as I do, and some people die in their twenties. I guess, though, we all end up here eventually. On a hillside in silence."
He takes off his heavy coat, and hangs it on Aylen's stone. Then he turns, and starts back down the hill. Over his shoulder he says, "Don't linger here too long, you're like to freeze. And if you ever need a hot meal orien. He's a fireplace to warm your hands by, come down the path, the little house with the vines all over it. You hear?"
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