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Velorum Fever

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 08, 2010 5:30 pm


POEM CONTEST!!!!
ok i want you to write me your BEST POEM!!! no prizes but if its good enough, you could win some gold!! best poem wins!! contest will end on febuary 10, and have fun!!! please dont critisize anyones poems, thx. good luck!!!!!
PostPosted: Wed Dec 08, 2010 8:50 pm


I'm not a perfect girl. My hair doesn't always stay in place and I spill things a lot. I'm pretty clumsy and I sometimes have a broken heart. My friends and I sometimes fight and maybe some days nothing goes right. But when I think about it and take a step back, I remember how great life truely is and that maybe, just maybe, I like being unperfect. rolleyes

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 15, 2010 7:41 pm


( i wrote this a weeks or so ago for a school project, we did world war II, and I had to write 2 poems and one of my partners wrote 2 too.)

(the first)
We thought the war was over, stopped forever
The time for peace was finally here for us
We thought the treaty would never fail, never
How could we have known Germany would fuss
Or that Japan would attack us one day
Peace was at an end, life the cost
Depression gone, “make weapons for your pay”
Solders march in the thousands, so many were lost
Many young men leave just to die in the fight
The end has come for the war of the world
V-day and its glory happens far away
The Nuremburg trails let us do this right
Maybe now we can live in a dream world
Real peace will always be a tough pathway




(the second)
A war was coming
What meant to stop it caused it
That we can all see

It was done in vain
Treaty of Versailles, lost cause
“Never Knew” can do harm

Germany in turmoil
Losing all they had and more
Mad at the treaty

Japan in misery
Something not meant to happen
All they had was lost

They came together
To start a war for revenge
No one could predict

They fought our brave men
Both the sides lost so many lifes
We won and we lost

it is victory
a day that never be forgotten
History written

Hitler is gone
Killed by his very own weapon
V-day has happen

the trails came too
they were Nuremburg trials
they design to be fair

so to do this right
to do this without another war
execution starts at dawn

the war has ended
something too long awaited
peace has finally come
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 11:56 pm


Nagasaki Yumiko
( i wrote this a weeks or so ago for a school project, we did world war II, and I had to write 2 poems and one of my partners wrote 2 too.)

(the first)
We thought the war was over, stopped forever
The time for peace was finally here for us
We thought the treaty would never fail, never
How could we have known Germany would fuss
Or that Japan would attack us one day
Peace was at an end, life the cost
Depression gone, “make weapons for your pay”
Solders march in the thousands, so many were lost
Many young men leave just to die in the fight
The end has come for the war of the world
V-day and its glory happens far away
The Nuremburg trails let us do this right
Maybe now we can live in a dream world
Real peace will always be a tough pathway




(the second)
A war was coming
What meant to stop it caused it
That we can all see

It was done in vain
Treaty of Versailles, lost cause
“Never Knew” can do harm

Germany in turmoil
Losing all they had and more
Mad at the treaty

Japan in misery
Something not meant to happen
All they had was lost

They came together
To start a war for revenge
No one could predict

They fought our brave men
Both the sides lost so many lifes
We won and we lost

it is victory
a day that never be forgotten
History written

Hitler is gone
Killed by his very own weapon
V-day has happen

the trails came too
they were Nuremburg trials
they design to be fair

so to do this right
to do this without another war
execution starts at dawn

the war has ended
something too long awaited
peace has finally come

ooh- I really like this one surprised you're really good at poetry!! maybe you should join -The Writers Guild-, we'd accept you!!

Velorum Fever

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Velorum Fever

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 11:57 pm


xXQueenB1525xX
I'm not a perfect girl. My hair doesn't always stay in place and I spill things a lot. I'm pretty clumsy and I sometimes have a broken heart. My friends and I sometimes fight and maybe some days nothing goes right. But when I think about it and take a step back, I remember how great life truely is and that maybe, just maybe, I like being unperfect. rolleyes

adorible 3nodding i like it but it could be more origonal- i think i've heard something very simalar all over the internet... but good job, still!!
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