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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 6:00 am
This is a bunch of my work, old and new. So please comment if you like them or not, and I don't mind others puting their work on this thread.
Helping's Regrets The rusted bonds griped the children here, in a place where they can't grow. I brush away the soot hiding their faces, hiding their beauty.
Eyes tarnished with tears tarnished by fears, gazed at me in wonder.
Smiling, I remove the unlocked bonds the clayed on dirt, taking in my arms the wounded, unharmed children.
Promising a life of better, I clothed them in robes warmed by my fire made by my hand, wishing for only their prosperity.
But feeling cloth feeling warmth, they yell and scream, tossing off the robes.
They ran back to the walls back to the bonds, crying for their comfort from these desolate things.
Seeing them clay on the dirt clasp on the chains, I cry. . . .
Picking up the robes now stained, I try to walk away, but am stopped by my own self hoping. The breeze pulled me on way to continue on my path, though the pain of regret still ached.
The Piano Walking the black and white steps Seeming to awaken a inner song. A skip, a jump, a little step Yet the music plays on, Occasionally meeting another Dancing to a beat unheard. But as I try to take these steps, all I get are gentle moans.
Fuzzy soft Fuzzy soft lying still, no smile to show, but love it bestows to all that hold.
The fuzzy warmth feels real, and passes with each heart, but lingers in those that left it behind to go way.
Fuzzy soft is its head and ears, its arms and paws, its tummy and nose.
But time wears the fuzzy soft, and time tears the tired seams, and time steals the little nose. Till all is left and lost, but the soul which eventually goes, leaving the warmth with no home. So seeps away as all do. Adieu, Fuzzy soft, Adieu
Simple Joy A simple game of tag running free, if only for a minute.
A little game of fish drawing pairs, if only fifty-two by two.
A simple time of silence seemed like days if only for two minutes, it all is the same.
This seemingly simple moments have all past and done. Yet those simple joys can be rekindled by a few moment of silence, a little game of fish, or s simple game of tag.
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 6:01 am
I'll post more after I see a few comment on these.
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 5:18 pm
hi Mela haha i got in here read through all the work then saw it was you wow you are an amazing writer
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 4:01 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 6:21 am
A few more...
Upon this path
Upon this path I ventured the destination unknown lures me further.
Step by step Others pass by me And others are passed by me
While I venture on, I feel you entwine your arm with mine.
But though we walk side by side, I dread the day that comes when we shall part our separate ways.
And I'll still venture upon this path, maybe be with another. But shall I love another. . . Â
Leave me be I'm through with all the Bull****, threats, and lies. I'm through with all the heartache, tears, and pain.
Pushed into the darkness by hands of those who were suppose to care
Dragged across the shards of their petty yellung of the bed I made.
If I made it, leave me be. Let me sleep this eternity.
**THis one is new, and I know it needs work**
Fill(Feel) I feel Torn and tattered from time since past, Cold and empty for the new coming.
This tireless cove seeming to be my home. And of which you chose to come, expecting much of the little.
Can I be filled again by love? Or is this another jolt of time?
My mind wavers but we can try this gen Of your youth. Fill this tried heart again.
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Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2005 9:23 am
I'd love to have some of those poems for my display site, when I update it again. They are beautiful!
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Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2005 5:31 am
thecatlady I'd love to have some of those poems for my display site, when I update it again. They are beautiful! Thanks. And that would be cool to have my stuff displayed other places. Post the site when you do. Thanks again
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Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2005 6:14 am
A few more.Some new, some old that i have found.
A Little Truth When Life feels like a cruel joke I picka pen and lay On a paper, I say what my lips cannot.
And one day I plan to read a loud these thoughts that will still linger.
This words that seem amagined are but hidden truths that some choose not to see.
Some say the mind has such creativity to make such dreams of darkness and light.
But I see these are not dreams or passing fancies, they are us in purity of essense
**Old one, from when I don't remeber**
Those eyes Those eyes They seem to look right through mine, but do they see all that is there? Do they see the tarnish from time? Do they see the pains of the past? Or do they just see my eyes mirroring them?
The glass like dirt that conceals the truth, I hide. Are they a good distraction? Are my secrets hid in this muck? Or are they on display for all?
Turn away, so my mind can hide these memories, but why are they even real? Why do they bring them back? Why do they wish to pry? But why cant they hear those cries?
Those ever-changing pools are all I have to bask. Will I still this current? Will I dry these streams? Or will I get pulled down to the depths, as I appear to be?
**this one was previously post elsewhere, but has been edited**
Untitled. . . suggestions welcomed Why must they stare? Is there something wrong. . . with me?
What did I do to deserve this? Am I offensive. . . by just being here?
Why does my heart quake? Did I deserve your harsh glare. . . as if I didn't belong? as if I'm not worthly?
What can I do, When you didn't even try to like me? to accept me?
What have you done to deserve that job? What godlike gift have you recieved. . . to earn the right to judge?
**Yes I was in a questioning mood, when I wrote this**
Dreams vs. World Dreams, so peaceful that you hate the waking sun.
The beauty, the enjoyment all in a thought. Oh how I wish to stay and kiss the world away.
World, so busy that you hate to wake to it.
The ugliness, the destation, all done by words. No time for pleasant thing. Oh how I wish to leave than stay to work my life away.
**another older one, but I always like it. A friend told me it remeinded them of the Matrix..... but I have strange friends**
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Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2005 6:12 am
Actually I thinking of finishing this short story I started, and I might post it.
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Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2005 11:53 am
very good very good.... your very first poem was like "the childerns tears" by Jane lead. But that was better! Very good, I would love to see more.
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Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2005 9:31 am
Well thank you. I don't think I have every read that poem, but I guess I'll pick it up now. I'll post more as it comes.
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Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 4:13 pm
MelanthaB Actually I thinking of finishing this short story I started, and I might post it. Post it! blaugh
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Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2005 10:06 am
Okay I have posted my shorty, it is the not so short, short story
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Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:05 am
HI, MELA! blaugh It's me Kyrie. Love your stuff. Some of it I've read from your journal. Read the shorty. It was good, too.
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Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 5:09 pm
Thanks, Kyrie. It is good to hear from you. I see you, got the stuff I sent. THank you for commenting.
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