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Althea_green

PostPosted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 6:00 am


This is a bunch of my work, old and new. So please comment if you like them or not, and I don't mind others puting their work on this thread.

Helping's Regrets
The rusted bonds griped
the children here,
in a place where
they can't grow.

I brush away the soot
hiding their faces,
hiding their beauty.

Eyes
tarnished with tears
tarnished by fears,
gazed at me
in wonder.

Smiling, I remove
the unlocked bonds
the clayed on dirt,
taking in my arms
the wounded,
unharmed children.

Promising
a life of better,
I clothed them in robes
warmed by my fire
made by my hand,
wishing for only
their prosperity.

But
feeling cloth
feeling warmth,
they yell and scream,
tossing off the robes.

They ran
back to the walls
back to the bonds,
crying for their comfort
from these desolate things.

Seeing them
clay on the dirt
clasp on the chains,
I cry. . . .

Picking up
the robes now stained,
I try to walk away,
but am stopped
by my own self hoping.

The breeze
pulled me on way
to continue on my path,
though the pain of regret
still ached.



The Piano
Walking the black and white steps
Seeming to awaken a inner song.
A skip, a jump, a little step
Yet the music plays on,
Occasionally meeting another
Dancing to a beat unheard.
But as I try to take these steps,
all I get are gentle moans.


Fuzzy soft
Fuzzy soft lying still,
no smile to show,
but love it bestows
to all that hold.

The fuzzy warmth feels real,
and passes with each heart,
but lingers in those that
left it behind to go way.

Fuzzy soft is
its head and ears,
its arms and paws,
its tummy and nose.

But time wears the fuzzy soft,
and time tears the tired seams,
and time steals the little nose.
Till all is left and lost,
but the soul which eventually goes,
leaving the warmth with no home.
So seeps away as all do.
Adieu, Fuzzy soft, Adieu



Simple Joy
A simple game of tag
running free,
if only for a minute.

A little game of fish
drawing pairs,
if only fifty-two by two.

A simple time of silence
seemed like days
if only for two minutes,
it all is the same.

This seemingly simple moments
have all past and done.
Yet those simple joys
can be rekindled
by a few moment of silence,
a little game of fish,
or s simple game of tag.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 6:01 am


I'll post more after I see a few comment on these.

Althea_green


Mrs. Koden K. Elrin

PostPosted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 5:18 pm


hi Mela haha i got in here read through all the work then saw it was you wow you are an amazing writer
PostPosted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 4:01 pm


blaugh Thanks Mel I try.

Althea_green


Althea_green

PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 6:21 am


A few more...

Upon this path

Upon this path
I ventured
the destination unknown
lures me further.

Step by step
Others pass
by me
And others are passed
by me

While I venture on,
I feel you
entwine your arm
with mine.

But though we walk
side by side,
I dread the day
that comes
when we shall
part our separate ways.

And I'll still venture
upon this path,
maybe be with
another.
But shall I love
another. . .  



Leave me be
I'm through
with all the Bull****,
threats, and lies.
I'm through
with all the heartache,
tears, and pain.

Pushed into the darkness
by hands of those
who were suppose to care

Dragged across the shards
of their petty yellung
of the bed I made.

If I made it,
leave me be.
Let me sleep
this eternity.

**THis one is new, and I know it needs work**

Fill(Feel)
I feel
Torn and tattered
from time since past,
Cold and empty
for the new coming.

This tireless cove
seeming to be my home.
And of which
you chose to come,
expecting much
of the little.

Can I be filled again
by love?
Or is this another jolt
of time?

My mind wavers
but we can try this gen
Of your youth.
Fill this tried heart again.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 18, 2005 9:23 am


I'd love to have some of those poems for my display site, when I update it again. They are beautiful!

thecatlady


Althea_green

PostPosted: Mon Feb 21, 2005 5:31 am


thecatlady
I'd love to have some of those poems for my display site, when I update it again. They are beautiful!
Thanks. And that would be cool to have my stuff displayed other places. Post the site when you do. Thanks again
PostPosted: Mon Feb 21, 2005 6:14 am


A few more.Some new, some old that i have found.

A Little Truth
When Life feels like a cruel joke
I picka pen and lay
On a paper, I say what my lips cannot.

And one day I plan
to read a loud these thoughts
that will still linger.

This words that seem amagined
are but hidden truths
that some choose not to see.

Some say the mind has such
creativity to make such dreams
of darkness and light.

But I see these are not
dreams or passing fancies,
they are us in purity of essense

**Old one, from when I don't remeber**

Those eyes
Those eyes
They seem to look right through mine,
but do they see all that is there?
Do they see the tarnish from time?
Do they see the pains of the past?
Or do they just see my eyes
mirroring them?

The glass like dirt
that conceals the truth, I hide.
Are they a good distraction?
Are my secrets hid in this muck?
Or are they on display for all?

Turn away,
so my mind can hide these memories,
but why are they even real?
Why do they bring them back?
Why do they wish to pry?
But why cant they hear those cries?

Those ever-changing pools
are all I have to bask.
Will I still this current?
Will I dry these streams?
Or will I get pulled down to the depths,
as I appear to be?

**this one was previously post elsewhere, but has been edited**

Untitled. . . suggestions welcomed
Why must they stare?
Is there something wrong. . .
with me?

What did I do to deserve this?
Am I offensive. . .
by just being here?

Why does my heart quake?
Did I deserve your harsh glare. . .
as if I didn't belong?
as if I'm not worthly?

What can I do,
When you didn't even try
to like me?
to accept me?

What have you done to deserve that job?
What godlike gift have you recieved. . .
to earn the right to judge?

**Yes I was in a questioning mood, when I wrote this**


Dreams vs. World
Dreams, so peaceful
that you hate
the waking sun.

The beauty, the enjoyment
all in a thought.
Oh how I wish
to stay and kiss
the world away.

World, so busy
that you hate
to wake to it.

The ugliness, the destation,
all done by words.
No time for
pleasant thing.
Oh how I wish
to leave than stay
to work my life away.

**another older one, but I always like it. A friend told me it remeinded them of the Matrix..... but I have strange friends**

Althea_green


Althea_green

PostPosted: Wed Feb 23, 2005 6:12 am


Actually I thinking of finishing this short story I started, and I might post it.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 23, 2005 11:53 am


very good very good.... your very first poem was like "the childerns tears" by Jane lead. But that was better! Very good, I would love to see more.

Krellxxt


Althea_green

PostPosted: Thu Feb 24, 2005 9:31 am


Well thank you. I don't think I have every read that poem, but I guess I'll pick it up now. I'll post more as it comes.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 4:13 pm


MelanthaB
Actually I thinking of finishing this short story I started, and I might post it.


Post it! blaugh

Queeny
Captain


Althea_green

PostPosted: Fri Mar 04, 2005 10:06 am


Okay I have posted my shorty, it is the not so short, short story
PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:05 am


HI, MELA! blaugh It's me Kyrie. Love your stuff. Some of it I've read from your journal. Read the shorty. It was good, too.

wild_wicca_baby720


Althea_green

PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 5:09 pm


Thanks, Kyrie. It is good to hear from you. I see you, got the stuff I sent. THank you for commenting.
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