Welcome to Gaia! ::

Bleach: Silent Blood

Back to Guilds

Sereitei is covered in blood. A single living body can be found in the center of the battlefield..This is where your adventure begins! 

Tags: Bleach, Role-Playing, Shinigami, Gotei 13, Soul Society 

Reply RCP Approval/Judging
Namomi (ichigo-girl123) vic-captain of squad 10

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Queen Hera Kami

Sweet Wife

PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 4:31 pm


User Image
Username: ichigo-girl123
RP Name: Namomi
Nickname: none
Famous Name: none
Actual Age: 700
Appearance Age: 19
Date of Birth: July 14
Date of Death:July 14
Gender: female
Race: soul reaper
Height: 5
Weight: 90
Likes: Sweets, reading, drawing, music, her close friends.
Dislikes: People that are power hungrey, hot foods
Personality: Calm,colected,cheerful at times, layed back but seriouse when needed.
__________________________________________________
Squad: 10
Rank: vic-captain
__________________________________________________
Kido Spells
:
Can do all Kido spells but better at Bakuodo

Abilities
Air walk, flash step, greate at kidous, great at controling spirtul pressure

__________________________________________________
Spirit: Shadows
Spirit's World: A white grassy feild with a large shadown in the middle
__________________________________________________
Zanpakutou Name: Hikari no kage (shadow of light)
Zanpaktou Length: 25'
__________________________________________________
Shikai: Achieved
Name: Hikari no Kage (Shadow of light)
Incantation: Show your true colors, Hikari no Kage
Description (regular zanpakuto)
Shikai Abilities Kage(shadow)
This abilite uses the opponents shadow to take full control of the opponents shadow. Namomi points her blade to her opponent this sends the shadow crawling over the the opponents shadow, once the two shadows connect Namomi has control over her opponents shadow.
Cannot control inless there is a shadow.

Shadousutorangurā(shadow strangler)
Shadousutorangura is when the shadow(s) form into shadow like people. These shadow people can attack the enemy, if Namomi puts her spiritul pressure into this attack the shadow people become stronge enough to wrape there shadow like hands around the enemys neck, casing him to be strangled. This attack doent kill the opponent it just winds the opponent so that Namomi may finish him off


__________________________________________________
Bankai: Achieved
Name: Hikari no Kage (Shadow of Light)
Description (regular sword)
Ability:
Kurai kage(Shadow of dark)
Kurai Kage is when the shadows form into one big black energy ball to attack the opponent.
Shikatsu(Life or Death)
This attack is based on Krai Kage. Insteed of the shadowns all grouping together each shadow forms into an white energy ball. They call all attack at once or they can attack seprate.
This attack is called Shikatsu due to the white energy balls flying around and attacking...Like angels.

__________________________________________________
Biography Before Death: Namomi lived a regular life and died in a car crash.
Biography After Death:(If applicable)
Other: Great at Kidou, spiritul pressure.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 7:34 pm


I wish I could judge this profile, but I am limited to the Hollow profiles, so I'll give you a piece of advice. Don't worry, I'm not destructive in criticism, but, I have to say that Shadousutorangura seems like an auto hit move. I mean, from how I read it and understand it, the attack causing people to be strangled is a little unfair. Unless there is a way to prevent it, should it be allowed. Forgive me if I am not Enshara, I'm just giving you a piece of advice as when Enshara sees it, you can have it up and ready when she gets on to view it.

duskcrawler
Crew


Queen Hera Kami

Sweet Wife

PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 8:32 pm


The flaw is that there must be a shadow near. If there isnt then she can not do shikai.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 8:33 pm


The flaw is that there must be a shadow near. If there isnt then she can not do shikai.

Queen Hera Kami

Sweet Wife


duskcrawler
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 9:16 pm


Alright, but I think you should tone down on what it can do to make it less of an auto hit kind of attack. I know thats a bit much, but, I'm just giving you some advice so Enshara can judge this and you'll have minimal to no changes done to this.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 05, 2010 11:03 am


I dont know how i can get it to tone down. I used this on another vic-captains rank applacation and it passed.

Queen Hera Kami

Sweet Wife


duskcrawler
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Dec 05, 2010 11:03 am


I see, if that be the case, then forget what I said.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 05, 2010 11:07 am


Well if you think it needs improvement tell me how to because im lost.

Queen Hera Kami

Sweet Wife


duskcrawler
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Dec 05, 2010 11:11 am


The choking ability should be expanded upon. The way I read it, it sounds as though its an auto hitting trap, which is a bit unfair to the other RPer. If there's a way to get out, please explain, so it makes it a bit more fair to other RPers.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 05, 2010 11:57 am


there is no cloaking abillity

Queen Hera Kami

Sweet Wife


duskcrawler
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Dec 05, 2010 12:04 pm


Choking, not cloaking. I was referring to the aftereffect of the impossibly long named attack.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 05, 2010 12:13 pm


the weakness is that she cant kill the opponent with the attack, it can only harm them.

Queen Hera Kami

Sweet Wife


duskcrawler
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Dec 05, 2010 12:31 pm


Alright, I'll leave it at that
Reply
RCP Approval/Judging

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum
//
//

// //

Have an account? Login Now!

//
//