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Username: ichigo-girl123
RP Name: Namomi
Nickname: none
Famous Name: none
Actual Age: 700
Appearance Age: 19
Date of Birth: July 14
Date of Death:July 14
Gender: female
Race: soul reaper
Height: 5
Weight: 90
Likes: Sweets, reading, drawing, music, her close friends.
Dislikes: People that are power hungrey, hot foods
Personality: Calm,colected,cheerful at times, layed back but seriouse when needed.
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Squad: 10
Rank: vic-captain
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Can do all Kido spells but better at Bakuodo

Air walk, flash step, greate at kidous, great at controling spirtul pressure

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Spirit: Shadows
Spirit's World: A white grassy feild with a large shadown in the middle
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Zanpakutou Name: Hikari no kage (shadow of light)
Zanpaktou Length: 25'
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Shikai: Achieved
Name: Hikari no Kage (Shadow of light)
Incantation: Show your true colors, Hikari no Kage
Description (regular zanpakuto)
Shikai Abilities Kage(shadow)
This abilite uses the opponents shadow to take full control of the opponents shadow. Namomi points her blade to her opponent this sends the shadow crawling over the the opponents shadow, once the two shadows connect Namomi has control over her opponents shadow.
Cannot control inless there is a shadow.

Shadousutorangurā(shadow strangler)
Shadousutorangura is when the shadow(s) form into shadow like people. These shadow people can attack the enemy, if Namomi puts her spiritul pressure into this attack the shadow people become stronge enough to wrape there shadow like hands around the enemys neck, casing him to be strangled. This attack doent kill the opponent it just winds the opponent so that Namomi may finish him off


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Bankai: Achieved
Name: Hikari no Kage (Shadow of Light)
Description (regular sword)
Ability:
Kurai kage(Shadow of dark)
Kurai Kage is when the shadows form into one big black energy ball to attack the opponent.
Shikatsu(Life or Death)
This attack is based on Krai Kage. Insteed of the shadowns all grouping together each shadow forms into an white energy ball. They call all attack at once or they can attack seprate.
This attack is called Shikatsu due to the white energy balls flying around and attacking...Like angels.

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Biography Before Death: Namomi lived a regular life and died in a car crash.
Biography After Death:(If applicable)
Other: Great at Kidou, spiritul pressure.

The flaw is that there must be a shadow near. If there isnt then she can not do shikai.

Alright, but I think you should tone down on what it can do to make it less of an auto hit kind of attack. I know thats a bit much, but, I'm just giving you some advice so Enshara can judge this and you'll have minimal to no changes done to this.

I see, if that be the case, then forget what I said.

The choking ability should be expanded upon. The way I read it, it sounds as though its an auto hitting trap, which is a bit unfair to the other RPer. If there's a way to get out, please explain, so it makes it a bit more fair to other RPers.

Choking, not cloaking. I was referring to the aftereffect of the impossibly long named attack.

Alright, I'll leave it at that