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 Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 7:09 am
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Posted: Sat Dec 25, 2010 10:36 pm
That's beautiful! It seemed almost like it was written in song stanza? I'm not sure. Either way, it's very good. I noticed in line 10 that you spelled "lose" "loose". Might wanna fix that. wink
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Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 5:40 pm
Thank you c:
And it was a little lol
Also thank you, I will do that Oreo Panda16 That's beautiful! It seemed almost like it was written in song stanza? I'm not sure. Either way, it's very good. I noticed in line 10 that you spelled "lose" "loose". Might wanna fix that. wink
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Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 3:42 pm
that is a beautiful poem, i adore it! i think it would make a great song dont u think?
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 5:48 pm
Aww, thank you so much c:
I'm glad you like it Sarah aka Vampire Girl that is a beautiful poem, i adore it! i think it would make a great song dont u think?
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:02 pm
beautiful poem, absolutly fonominal.
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Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 2:16 pm
Shpanks >3<
I apreciate that c: xxXbubba_lovely_bbyXxx beautiful poem, absolutly fonominal.
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 9:44 pm
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