Hey im new to this so give meh some credit <3 music and poetry
so heres my song i hope you guys like. i would apriciate if you would give me some addvice to possibly make it better. Im in a band so im hoping i can put music to it and post thee recording on here somehow.
thnx Matt

Matt Bown-Following Through sweatdrop
yea maybe if i just get dis over with
the thrill sending chills up thy baaaaack
the shocking sound ringing out
that

What if nobody wants me!
is it the sound of a broken melody
or a fade in a broken dream tonight

Oh I'v seen this happen before,
but never thought it would be so easy
To join this group, to fall again, seeing things as they were so bad

why
oh why

WOULD THIS HAPPEN TO ME

Was it something i did?
was it something i said?

What if nobody wants me!
is it the sound of a broken melody in the air
cuz its a broken dream tonight!

Will someone save me from this?
(I’m falling back, I’m falling back.)
Will you help me?
Will you help mehhhhhh?

Every time they see my face
( they turn away.)
every time i make a joke,
(they walk away.)
yea, walk away.

When u see me crying,
do you like it?
Cuz this will be my last song to This!