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 Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:20 am
|| ★ ★ ★ || So l need your compliments comments&opinions.
Basically. Is there anything I can improve on?
The style isn't based on anatomy or anything, so I guess I'm looking for feedback on whether it works, whether the lines are soft/even enough, how to get the lines softer [ i use a camera to upload it to laptop. scanner doesn't work atm. ], aaaand basically any tips on using ProMarkers. I tried to blend with the hair and jacket, so opinions on that would be great.
Also~ Help with where shadows are meant to go.
I tried to imagine a light, but it just kinda.. failed. xD'
OH. &how to make a pose slightly more fluid. The whole things looks kinda stiff.
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 11:56 pm
It can definitely be improved, it doesn't look like me AT ALL.
Buts besides that its awesome.
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2010 4:53 pm
i think it looks pretty good for what you're aiming for :'O
the only thing is the arms. where do the hands go? xD
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2010 4:58 pm
Yeah....the hands deal bugs me a bit as well. The colors look fine though I kinda wish they looked brighter for some reason. o.o
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Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 5:17 pm
|| ★ ★ ★ || Mhmn. I coloured the jacket, then realised that what I was going for didn't really show.
It was the new straightjacket item, and I wanted it to look like the hands were cuffed up.
But the padlock goes over.
Also, the colours reaaaally annoy me.
I was going to fix it mega in photoshop, but I haven't been able to get it perfect yet.
I'm hoping that if I use my scanner next time, it'll work better~ c:
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Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:15 pm
Making poses look more natural only works if you know your anatomy.
You have to imagine a person sitting/standing like that and think about all the shapes and how it would actually look.
Otherwise you'll have arms bending the wrong way and stuff like that.
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