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 Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 11:21 pm
Which One is the Real Alice?
Fanfic by Ai Usagi (my fanfiction.net username)
Genres: (I'll fill this part out once I'm done since I'm just beginning it now)
Characters: Alice (B-rabbit), Oz Vessalius, Jack Vessalius, Alice (Intention of Abyss), Lacie Baskerville, and Glen Baskerville.
Language: English
Summary: Based off of the popular song, Alice of Human Sacrifice, each "Alice" contributes to the mystery in the same way. However, as you get further and further in, you soon find out that there are some mysteries you'd rather not solve....Prologue and chapter 1 coming soon....(better than it sounds)
Table of Contents:
Prologue.......first reply
Chapter 1......(not completed)
Chapter 2......(not completed)
Chapter 3......(not completed)
Chapter 4......(not completed)
Epilogue........(not completed)
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 10:04 am
Prologue
Disclaimer:Author: Disclaimer time, yay! : D Alright, I'm writing the disclaimer in the form of script because it's just so fun! heart But don't worry, the story will be written in a regular format, this script thingy will only be for the disclaimers at the beginning of the chapters! Tee he! heart Oh, and our dear Gilbert shall help me with the disclaimer this time, since I didn't give him any screen time in the story, sorry Gilbert.
Gilbert: Why the hell are you acting so cutesy all of a sudden? It's giving me a headache.
Author: Shut it, Gilbert. Aren't you forgetting something?
Gilbert: What? Unless I forget to feed the stupid rabbit, I don't think I forgot anything.
Author: You b*****d! You forgot to feed her? -slaps Gilbert- Anyhow, that's not it. Tell the pretty boys and girls out there about who owns what.
Gilbert: Why don't you do it? It's your story, now my I leave now?
Author: FAIL! Stop failing at things, Gilbert....The reason why you have to do it is.....well, why don't we ask Chibi and Mocha?
Gilbert: Who?
Author: My two pet cats! :3 heart
Gilbert: -speaks quickly- Ai Usagi does not own Pandora Hearts or any of the characters. She is indeed not Jun Mochizuki in disguise (Miss Jun is far nicer than this little prat) and the only thing she's contributing to is the fanbase. She does not own the characters in any way
Author: But I wish I do. If so.....ah ha ha! -smiles evilly-
Gilbert: -ignores- She also does not own Vocaloids nor the Vocaloid song, Alice of human sacrifice. The only thing she owns is this idea and fanfic.
Author: And a muffin! I just got it from the kitchen!
Gilbert: And a muffin as well, now please enjoy before she decides to let Vincent come and rape me! >.<
Author: Ah ha ha, you guys so know I would do that. =w= So, what's Vincent's number again?
Gilbert: Just shut up and start the story already! -hears Chibi and Mocha- I mean, please start the story already. >.>'
Author: Since you asked so nicely, I shall begin! Anyhow, long story short, I do not own anything but my ideas, fanfic, and mah' muffin! >: D
Gilbert: A quick note, the prologue technically isn't the story, it's just the rewritten lyrics to match the storyline. The chapters are the stories explaining the lyrics, and the prologue is the lyrics of AOHS changed to fit Pandora Hearts, thank you very much. If you want the original lyrics- (interrupted)
Author: Hey! I have to start now, so shut up before my cats decide that they want to play with you!
-----------------------(after another argument later, the prologue finally begins)----------------------------The first Alice was one of scarlet red
Curious of where the rabbit hole had led.
Following a rabbit down a bright red path,
She eventually grew mad and all of Wonderland had to face her crimson wrath.
This Alice had been whispered to by the devil.
He turned her words into ones which were hateful.
She grabbed a bright red scythe and sliced down anyone in her way.
Because of her great crimes towards Wonderland, this Alice was planed to be executed within a day.
The second Alice were two young men from the Kingdom of Green
One of them who was at the very first scene.
They were a writer whose words were always sad
And a rabbit whose goal was to drive everyone mad.
The rabbit was the cause of all evil
While the author's goal was to make sure that he could see everyone smile.
This had angered the rabbit, a madman who would not flee.
He then decided that he would no longer allow the author to see.
The young rabbit had murdered the first man of green and had rejoiced because the murder he had committed had not been seen.
The third Alice was a beautiful young queen
A strange girl of white who was only fourteen.
A mirror reflection of the scarlet red one,
She had a demented idea of what was fun.
This Alice turned people into dolls,
But these creations were full of flaws.
They stabbed their beautiful queen until her body was a bright red.
The ruling Queen was now certainly dead.
Meanwhile, two more Alices followed the red path.
Both with a strange and demented laugh.
These two Alices were colorless
And had created a Wonderland called "Abyss".
The fourth Alice was a young couple
Bringing joy to those who had only known woe.
Creating two more Alices of red and white varieties,
They had been betrayed by the two more Alices' curiosities.
The gentle, singing mother,
And the cold, cruel ruler,
They were what had created the first Alice and the Wonderland which would surly cause their end.
Their perfect land has been tainted in red, lost in the the different Alices' dreams.
They had founded Wonderland afterall, or so it seems -------------------------------------------------------------------
Author: Oh ho ho, the prologue is now done! >: D Please leave your opinions on it. I won't move on two chapter 1 until I get at least one bit of constructive criticism! ^^
Gilbert: Are you trying to make them hate you?
Author: Maybe, maybe not. -smiles evilly- Anyhow, for the next disclaimer, I shall kick out Gilbert and replace him with....?
Gilbert: You can't so easily replace me!
Author: Yes I can, after all, you are the useless side character. xD
Gilbert: -sulks- Anyhow, thanks for reading the prologue, stick around for chapter one and the surprise guest who will be replacing me in the introductory/disclaimer.
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Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 2:36 pm
You guys do realize I won't be moving on to chapter 1 until I get at least one piece of constructive criticism, right? :3
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