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UkyoKuonji2004

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 2:08 pm


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Name: PreToria
Age: 23
Weight: 125 pounds
Element: Water
Class: Water Warrior
Alignment: Chaotic neutral

Personality Summary: Calm mostly, and can be a pushover due to her handicap. She is stubborn and stands for what she thinks is right. She will avoid conflicts if she can, but when she can't she is ferocious.

Biography: Pre was born in the southern town of Auria. She had an uncanny ability to manipulate water ever since she was about five years old, and she loves the forest where she is often seen playing with butterflies. Even at her current age she will sometimes let go and play with the insects. This labeled her as an oddball in the town which is one of the reasons why people shied away from her. Her strange attraction to butterflies sometimes appears when she uses psynergy; a large black and white pair of wings appears on her back if she uses powerful attacks. She has yet to figure out if she can fly with them though...On occasion she is asked to help heal people due to her ability to use Pixies, and everyone thought she would end up becoming a nurse in the nearby clinic; however she has informed people that she had no intention of staying within the village. She liked adventure, and dreamed about someday leaving.
When she turned 20 she embarked on a journey for adventure at last. For the most part she travelled alone, until she encountered a Djinn. The Mercury Djinn, Fizz, asked to join her and she accepted. She thought it was adorable which is the main reason why she accepted, but it quickly became her ally in battle when she figured out it could fight too.

Stats:

Level: 13
HP: 75
PP: 110
Attack: 102
Defense: 40
Speed: 134
Luck: 6

Stats with equips:

HP: 75
PP: 110
Attack: 157
Defense: 97
Speed: 134
Luck: 6

Equipment
Sword: Arctic Blade (Atk +55)
Armor: Chain Mail (Def +25)
Boots: Ninja Sandals (Def +5)
Helmet: Steel Helm (Def +27)
Gloves: None


Psynergy: Bold is what she knows in the series.
DouseCutting EdgeFrost<TundraPrismPixie
Djinn: Fizz

Other?: Pre has a rare condition in her vocal chords which makes her irrevocably mute. She carries a notepad at all times, upon which she sometimes leaves very beautiful pencil sketches.

Song: Everdream
PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 4:27 pm


Well To start things off you might want to embellish a little bit more on her biography. Not just so we can know more about her, but by writing more you could get a better idea of what her goals would be and intentions and would help us integrate your character into the roleplay better.

as for your class/stats/items/djinn, after writing more on her biography, you should be able to come up with more information on what she would specialize in also. As she is a mercury adept, look to this list for more information on potential psynergies for your element, but feel free to create your own, and we'll judge if they are logical/fair to others. As for Classes, it's mostly a name thing, though if you need you can look at the classes available in golden sun. As for Djinn there is a list of them here but also feel free to create your own ( judged in the same ways as you would psynergy) and you aren't restricted to your own element by the way, you could have other djinn, though this would change your class of course. if you decide to choose a different elemental djinn, put in the class section of your profile your default class, and in parenthesis your current class.


Also, and I'm just going to say this now, a Twenty-Three year old weighing 90 pounds? That's not natural...I think. :S

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UkyoKuonji2004

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 4:40 pm


The explanation for her light weight is because she's incredibly lithe, but if you don't like it I can add 30 pounds or something(glad you can tell that it's light btw).

I was planning on adding to the bio, I'm just brain farting now. I think I'm getting some ideas now though.

I'm going to try and use the same psynergy moves that are in the game(third game excluded. Is that game even out now?)
PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 4:49 pm


Okay I gave her four different moves and one Dijinn(all of which exist in the games). What do I do about stats?

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 4:52 pm


Third game will be out in November.

In the United States, the average female weight is 164 pounds. However that's taking into account people of a...larger girth and people of a lesser girth. Then when looking at a body mass index, roughing Perotria's height in the averages in Five feet or so...

-sadly the chart isn't working so I can only show you as follows: Body Mass Index Chart

This puts her at underweight in a drastically unhealthy way. Being Lithe and nimble doesn't necessarily mean you are underweight, but merely that you are dexterous,nimble, and in good shape ( muscle weights more than fat. ;3). I'd say that around 120 pounds would be sufficient even if she was around 5'5 or 5'6.

...in case you haven't figured it out by now I study health and human anatomy (considering my future profession in the military, knowing to stop some guy charging at me is a good idea...)

Also, given that you have labeled her as Lithe, I'd suggest going for more of an offensive Psynergy line up, with perhaps some buffing psynergy and minor healing ( given that it's mercury and all) along with it.

As for stats given your lithe description I'd put her at around, lets say level thirteen, with an average health, above average strength, high speed, average PP, below average defense, and above average luck. Look at some of the profiles of other people to get a gist of where your stats should be numerically, and I can help you more with that afterwards.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 5:08 pm


I'm still not sure about the stats. I was going to have her basically be a character that strikes hard and fast, but is weak against hits against her. And if endurance was a stat that would probably be low too just to make things more fair(but there's not). The Pixie move is a healing one. She really only needs one branch of that. The next would probably be Wish, but I didn't know if you guys had a limit to how many moves she can know. That's why I picked four move sets. I could change the Dijinn to one that buffs defense instead of heals.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 5:11 pm


well take a moment to look at my profile for example. I've set down what my classes are, and you'll notice I have a wide variety of psynergy, unlocked or no. You aren't necessarily limited by how mcuh you have, but mostly on your character's experience. I'd say your character could have some more psynergy, and even though Pixie is a healing set exclusive to the tamer class ( which you need an item for) I'd say given your character it could fit.

Also just go with the rough stats I suggested: while still hitting hard, a lot of that goes with her high speed, but the low defense and below average Health ( which we also assume as stamina) are her draw backs. Work on the numbers based around that and on other people's numbers (which aren't that important to the guild, we just have them as rough estimates of skill.) then I can help finalize the numbers.

Changin the Djinn is up to you.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 5:31 pm


I changed some things. Is all that good? I added more to the story too.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 5:38 pm


for awhile now people are going to be restricted to starting out with one djinn, and shade is already taken anyways, so you are better off sticking with just fizz.

As for your stats I see nothing wrong, though I'd suggest you swap your speed with your attack, which still seems to me like her most superior stat.

everything else is in working order, now you just need your equipment. ;D
PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 5:42 pm


Oh okay. I'll change it so that she encounters Fizz and that's it and switch those numbers around.
As for equipment, I'm not sure what I should have. I know I'm probably going to have equipment on the same level as a Bandit's Sword(or whatever it's called) but I don't know what items they would be...I haven't played GS in almost three years...

Edit: Arctic Blade! Is that good for her? And Spirit Armor?

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UkyoKuonji2004

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 6:13 pm


I just edited the profile to include some items. Are they good?
PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 6:14 pm


I saw that coming. Well it's all good to go. I'm still trying to think how I can incorperate yourself, Hoshi and her friend into the roleplay, so go off to the OOC thread and discuss with us. I'm not too sure if they would fit in the Lemuria thread and the Mercury Lighthouse/Imil is filled with too many people so yeah...go over to the ooc thread and put up some suggestions based on the map we have in the events thread.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 27, 2010 8:33 pm


I'm about three days late to the party, but I wanted to make a suggestion regarding her weight.

I happen to be 24, I stand at 5'2.5", and I weigh about 103LBs, which, according to the BMI chart, makes me too skinny, but I disagree with that. Anyway, I noticed you didn't give her a height, however, I saw in one of your comments here that you'd like to make her a more lithe character. I'm not sure how tall you'd like her to be, but I think if you make her around 5'4" and have her weight between 112-115 LBs, she can still be considered a relatively healthy weight while maintaining that nimble quality.

I know that it was already discussed, but I wanted to offer my input. I do hope that was alright. (:
PostPosted: Fri Oct 29, 2010 4:27 pm


Love your Tinkerbell dress up!

And actually when Pre is in other RP's she's not human, but Faerie; which is why she is unusually light. She's actually closer to six feet tall(she has to be tall to run fast ~_^). In other RP's I usually had her total weight as about 120 pounds but only because of her armor. In other RP's she's actually that light she could step on fresh fallen snow without sinking through it. This RP is the RP wherein she is the most heaviest.

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Sakura Meringue


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PostPosted: Fri Oct 29, 2010 8:16 pm


Oh, thank you! <3
I've fallen into something of a Disney-themed mood. ^^

Anyway, your explanation of her usual circumstances does help to explain your desire to keep her light. And in this RP, will she be around six feet tall? If that's the case, the 125LBs makes a lot more sense to me. (:

Hnnn, a fairy, huh? Maybe I'll hit you up for a one x one sometime soon. XP
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