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Zaviire

Neophyte Raider

PostPosted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 3:07 pm


Never written a song before, but this was for an assignment and i decided to finish it so yeah. Uu~~
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(Lies’ web like chains)
(Why are they so fake?)
(Nothing seems real...)

I can see you now
right before my eyes...
I am blind, and yet I see
Who you are –
it’s not who I thought you were....

I’ll leave you hanging,
I can see that
All they see is

A facade,
you’re fake,
you are not who I thought you were
behind that facade,
you’re fake,
you are not who you think you are...

Behind the mask, your face is
cut and scarred beyond recognition –
The truth I know, the truth you know...
it hurts now doesn’t it?

I’ll leave you hanging,
The clock is ticking
Leave what you see behind
You know, all they see is

A facade, you’re fake, you are
Not who I thought you were
Behind the facade,
you’re fake,
you are not what the world wants to see

Leave it behind, the mask you wear
Let the world see
See your true face,
Don’t be fake
just because you want to please them....

Because behind the facade,
you’re fake,
you are not who I thought you were,
But the facade is broken
My eyes are open!
I see who you really are

Why’d you hide behind the mask?
it was a facade,
you’re fake,
you were not who we thought you were
But now we see, but enlighten me –
What were your reasons?

(Nothing was real,)
(but now we’re free–)
(free from the facade)
PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 11:41 am


I loved this! I can't believe this is your first time writing a song. Do you mind if I ask what the assignment was?

Tearseye


Zaviire

Neophyte Raider

PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 2:20 pm


The assignment was to draw a picture and write a song that goes with your emotions. Well since my emotions at the time were rather bland, I decided to write about how everyone always wants to please everyone else and pretend to be someone they're not.

Actually, I do have a song I attempted to write ,but never finish..... But this was the only one that I actually figured out the rhythm for. :V
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