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 Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 9:55 am
Love and Light -Matthew 5:14 and 1st John 4:7-8
I am a sinner
I do not deserve the love
You willingly give
I thank You daily
For You give me what I need
Let me draw nearer
You know who I am
When I do not know myself
Guide me with Your light
Shed light on the world
So that everyone may see
The love that You give
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 4:30 pm
This is great! heart I love the message! xd
But one thing (And this is EXTREMELY picky): Punctuation, please?
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Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 1:58 pm
Thank you smile
And most Haikus have very little or no punctuation sweatdrop
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