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 Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 9:44 am
So there is this girl I'm "friends" with. She has this KH fan character that she will NOT shut up about.
I am not looking for character comparisons, I am merely asking: Is this, or is this not, in your opinion, one of the worst Kingdom Hearts fancharacters EVER?
Her name is Torxiavic, her element is moon, just like Saix (Even though no two members in Org XIII have the same element), her weapon is a claymore, just like Saix (Even though no two members in Org XIII have the same weapon/s), but it's not even a claymore. It is a crescent moon shaped blade attached to one end of a rod(With pretty little crystals and diamonds all down the handle even!). It's a damn SCYTHE, and further more is made for decoration and not for fighting if it's that damn preeeeettty~~
Bleeeeeeeeh.
She has this tall, breasty frame, totally inappropriate for fighting. More like Jessica Rabbit, even.
She's in love with Saix and he is her boyfriend. Marluxia also likes her, and she has a crush on him. Xigbar, Lexaeus, Luxord, Xaldin, Demyx, Zexion, Xemnas, Roxas, Axel, and Vexen (In other words every male member of Org XIII) also have secret or not so secret crushes on her.
So yeah.
Worst character I have seen thus far. What do you think?
Edited for spelling fail :'D
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Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 10:10 am
Sounds kind of like a Mary-Sue to me, and a female version of Saix. I'm also not a huge fan of a character that every male (or female) adores. That's just rather lame.
Plus thinking of her body type like Jessica Rabbit's makes me go "Ew. That doesn't fit Kingdom Hearts at all." and I like Jessica Rabbit. Can't go wrong with old school cartoons. It's just not fitting for the Kingdom Hearts universe in my opinion.
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Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 10:19 am
It is a Sue. One of those annoying blatantly COPYING Sues.
The worst part...Is that she's just...so STUPID she doesn't even take the time to research what her weapon is before she makes it either.
Seriously.
I just want to say to her sometimes, "Go sod yourself. That's not a claymore. You ********. Are you retarded?"
And then b***h at her about her Sue.
But then, she never bloody listens to me, so what's the dammit point in THAT? :l
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Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 10:28 am
I know my "fan characters" are not any good but I try not to make them obvious Mary-Sues and all boring like that, they're just simple.
That weapon thing is pretty funny.
Poor girl not checking what things are...
ffff. She doesn't listen? Well, then I guess there isn't any point in complaining to her about her character. Though I bet it does make you feel a little better getting it all off your chest, right? =P
Of course it's still annoying she doesn't listen...
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Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 11:04 am
No she doesn't listen. She stares off into space with a hurt look on her face but never once has she apologized even when her incessant banter drove me to tears from hearing her not shut up replay in my head over the weekend. And she knows this. I told her.
And personally I can't see why she can't get over her own damn selfish desire to go on and on and on when she has caused another human being physical ******** pain.
Probably because she's a c**k nugget s**t ******** c**k waggling a** bucking c**t dragging kitten punching shithole smegma faced big headed ego-centric pea brained Saix humping butt munching a*****e of a clown fart.
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Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 1:29 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 8:58 am
Yes but of course anyone who has a Mary Sue thinks they're completely without fault in their character making or they wouldn't have one.
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 9:03 am
They all sound like that one chick who created Face the Strange. x-x'
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 10:47 am
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 11:31 am
A horrible fan fiction,so horrible its hilarious. x-x"
Can't remember the web name for it,best google it. ^^"
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 11:59 am
Pfff.
Just like My Immortal but a lot worse.
Must read.
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 12:00 pm
Indeed ~tried reading Face the Strange,gotten a nasty head ache out of it~ x-x'
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Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 10:56 am
That sounds horrible! I know my character is not completely original but you have to have some kind of originality.
Example
Non-Original: I have two key blades and look like a member of Organization XIII
Originality: He was denied entry into Organization XIII, he found his original who was a past key blade wielder but since Nobodies don't age he is still young while his counterpart is old and decrepit. He keeps him alive in his hide out out of fear that if his counterpart dies so will he...time is ticking.
point is creativity, even the most unoriginal character can become original with creativity.
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