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 Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2010 5:52 pm
Ok so this would be my normal poem writing style...Its a story/poem written with Haikus...
Mist (James 4:14 and Corinthians 9:24)
I watch the hours
Ticking minute by minute
Quickly passing by
Since I am a mist
I will be here one second
And gone in the next
I pray for guidence
While I am running this race
Against time itself
You give me Your strength
You give me Your endurance
As I go through life
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Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2010 5:23 pm
Ha!
This poem is fantastic! I absolutely adore it! heart
I love how it is set up. A series of haikus for stanzas. Excellent work. And the messages you send in your poetry are beautiful and Godly.
God bless you, brother.
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Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2010 6:44 pm
Thank you smile
I don't exactly know why I started writing a series of haikus to create a story like telling...Perhaps because I have more to say than what I could put in to 17 syllables...
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