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PostPosted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 11:03 pm


Name: hagore Idoru

Nickname(s)/Alias(es):None
Race: Shinigami
Age: 135 appears to be 21
Height: 5' 10''
Weight: 153 Lbs
Rank: Not yet known

Physical Description:He has whtie hair that resembles snow and is pointed backwards. He has brown eyes that closely resemble that of the dead. He wears a normal shinigami Kosode but his Hakama is white as opposed to black. He wears gloves that only cover his palms and end at the begining of his fingers.
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Personality: He wanders around during work hours slowly as if he is depressed. He nearly ever looks up from his head wich is usually set looking down causing him to look shy. He stays away from his friends as he believes he is the cause for his friends death. Even when his friends make him smile it means nothing and his eyes still say depression.

Zanpakutou: Kin

Zanpakutou Spirit: His zanpakutou spirit is a young girls who almost always has her eyes closed. Her hair is a light blue and is long. Her eyes are rarely seen and change from a deep blue to a snow white. She wears a long kimono wich opens on her left side at the hip and long black socks with high heeled sandals.

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Inner World: The inner world is a pond with icy blue water and large as well as bonzai trees wich erupt from the water as if they are erupting from the ground.
Sealed Form: Kin in her sealed form is a long normal katana. The handle is black with white diamonds and has a white rose shaped hand guard. The blade appears to be a normal silver cover but is, in reality, a very light blue color. Yosei slowly curves towards it's bottom, slowly but surely much like a samurai sword would. Kin's sheath is black with golden kanji going down each side saying Hikaru ((Shine))

Shikai Name/Release Phrase: Hikaru Kin

Shikai Description:Idoru sheaths Kin and they become one causing Kin to becomes a long golden pole with no sharp ends but Kin has a very Incandecent shine to it.
Shikai Powers/Attacks:
After Idoru activates his shikai he can focus his reiatsu into kin in order to make Kin shine brightly around the area, although Idoru cannot move during this ability he can change the light settings on each individual item in the area to make it appear a different color, wich can disorient his opponent to make him think they are seeing something they are not, however this technique is easy to adjust to and avoid.
Bankai Name: Taiyou Kin

Bankai Description:Idoru grabs the top end of Kin and pulls it out causing Kin to split into two blades from it's former pole form. Each blade is extremely thin although very shart with a long gold handle.

Bankai Powers/Attacks:
It is essentialy the same as the shikai although when the ability is used his blades become over run with a fire that can't burn an opponent but is poisonous to the touch. The rest of the ability is the same as the shikai.
Special Accessories: Multiple vials of different poisons.

Skills: He is a great cook as he grew up in the seireitei cooking food that he bot himself as opposed to resorting to theft like most children in the rukongai.
Abilities: He is an expert with working with poisons as well as inventions, making Kisuke a favorite to visit when in the human world.

Kidou:

Bakudou:

  • 1. Restrain (Sai)
  • 4. Crawling Rope (Hainawa)
  • 8. Repulse (Seki)
  • 9. Strike (Geki)
  • 9. Disintegrating Circle (Hourin)



Hadou:

  • 1. Thrust (Shou)
  • 4. White Lightning (Byakurai)



Biography/History: Idoru grew up in north karakura town. One day his parents decided that they no longer wanted a child so they decided to leave but Idoru had a bad feeling in the pit of his stomach so he decided to leave home from school. He got home to find that they where gone and left. While looking for them he wandered into the middle of the street. He turned around in time to see a bus with his parents in front of the window grinning as the bus hit him, their problems were done with. When he arrived in the Rukongai he made some new friends but during by a group of hollows they where killed, when the shinigami arrived, they found his friends dead and Idoru was kneeling over them crying with a group of dead hollows around him. They brought him to the shinigami academy for his courageous acts. While their he made a new group of friends but graduated befor them. He lead their first mission but while on the mission they where met with a force to powerful for them to stop, an arrancar. The arrancar killed his friends quickly and slowly. He was forced to watch them slowly being decapitated since then he has dedicated his life to making poisons in which cause his opponents to die the same slow death he had to witness his friends suffer...((Present))
Powers: For Shikai and Bankai abilities please visit those sections. For Kidou lists please visit the kidou sections as well for abilities please visit the corrisponding sections.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 26, 2010 7:58 am


umm.. No.
Read the rules on character creation, and make your zanpakutou a little less god-moddy. You also need a lot more description.

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 10:25 pm


I will clarify what my colleague has said so that it is easier to interpret what you need to do specifically.

First, you need to remove all of the extra kidou on your profile. New members are only allowed Hadou 1-10 and Bakudo 1-9.

Next, your Shikai's powers are beyond the capabilities that allow for a productive RP environment.

And finally, your Skills and Abilities should contain no combat capabilities, which include your Martial Arts styles, Shunpo (and its derivations), as well as Healing Kidou.
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